FF:Holi|ArHi-Confront|Arnav Masti|Chap7B PG38*UPD* - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really wounderful...very interesting and its thrilling...continue soon...pls pm me...
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Totally awesome. Such fantastic writing. I really think you the flair for it. Why don't you do some serious writing. It was mind blowing I really cant wait for the next chapter.


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Hiya...
Chap 4 for you... hope you all like it ...Please keep the comments coming!!!!! love them ...
Outta request this time .. have made it a looong one... 😃
Chapter 4
He put his hands at the back of his head and held tight .. as if trying hard to stop it from exploding... just then there was a knock at the door..

Anjali: Chotte... khushiji ...sab theek toh hey? aur tum aise ...
Arnav: Nahin... I am fine Di... aur khushi abhi so rahee hey... she will be fine .. shyam tak woh theek ho jayegi...
Anjali: Theek hey .. tum jaldi se freshen up ho jao... neeche sab khane ke liye ...
Arnav: nahin di ... main baad mein kha loonga ...
Anjali:par chotte...
Arnav: di .. pls (glances inside near the bed)
Anjali gives a nod and goes from there...
He is just about to close the door but stops ...
Shyam: accha par iska koi galat assar toh nahin hoga na? pehli baar tumhari is galti se hum khush hey... agar sahi wala goli milate toh aaj...(flares up his nose) kher ... accha hua ki yeh sirf bhaang ki goli nikli...
theek hey... haan haan paise de denga ... bhaag thodi na jaoonga .. chalo ab theek hey ... hum phone rakhte hey...
shyam was near the stairs at the end of the corridor...talking in a secretive manner talking to someone... when he just finished the call he suddenly felt a heavy hand on his shoulders ... when he just turned a bit ... he received a hard blow on his face... the force of which made him fall on the step hurting his nose ...

Arnav was fuming with anger .. he went near him to pull him with an intention of punching him some more .. when he heard someone closing in near the corridor...
He just warned him pointing his finger at the creep and left the place...
It was already evening and everybody had gathered for chai except for mamiji... Khushi was still asleep and Payal volunteered to watch over khushi on arnav's request.
he had already skipped his lunch with the family and did not want people to start suspecting something wrong... so decided to join them for tea...

He could see his Di was a bit glum which seemed obvious that the reason was her husband who was sitting there with a bandaged nose...
Arnav controlled his desire to laugh out loud .. and managed to just let out a smirk... he did not even bother to ask what had happened ...
Shyam got up from his seat and glared at arnav who by now had started sipping on his tea...
Shyam: Rani Sahiba ... hum zara humare kamre mein rahenge...
Anjali nodded...
Anjali: HPji aapne mamiji ke liye kamre mein chai pahuncha di?
HP: Ji anjaliji... main de aaya...

Nani: Bituwa(looking at Mahendra babu) par ee manorama kamre ma kya karath hey...
Mamaji: arrey amma ab kya kahe... tv pe kauno serial dekhan waaste wahi baithi hey... kehat rahee... ki kal raat ko woh dekh na payee .. toh ab usee serial ka repeat telecastwa hui raha hey toh bas lagi padee hey usey dekhne...
Nani smiles at anjali...

Mamaji finished with his tea so opts to go to his room..
Nani: Chotte ... ab khushi bitiya ki tabiyat kaise hey...
Arnav: abhi bhi soyee hui hey nani... maine use dopahar ko sard dard ki davai dee thi ...shayad uska assar abhi bhi uthra nahin... isiliye ..
Nani: chalo kauno baat nahin .. usey aaram karne do...
Nani: (notices mahinder's spectacles on the table)arrey ee ka ... bituwa ne apna chashma yaheen chod diya...
Anjali: oh koi baat nahin main de aati hoon...
Arnav: Nahin di... aap rehne do... main jaata hoon..
he picks up the specs and moves...
In the room ... Mamiji is sitting on the bed crossing her legs and is lost in the serial... she is totally engrossed and looks utterly worried ... Mamaji nods his head in a unbelievable manner...when arnav comes in...
just then mami screems

Mamiji: arrey..ek Slapwa maaro usey ..maaro maaro...(almost jumping up and slappin in air)
arnav and mamaji startled... look at each other

Mamaji: yeh kisko maarne ko keh rahee ho tum...
Mamiji: oho is advartijhmentwa ko bhi abhi aana tha...(looks at the two of them looking at her in a wierd manner)
Kaa? y you 2 cheeing like this?arrey hum is serial ke villainwa ko maarne ki baat karat rahee... dekho bhat happenjs ... ki hero waant to tell heroinewa i lub you ... uske waaste woh use meetwa karne jaa raha hoth hey...parr isse pehle ki hero goje there ... thij bad man-wa troubling heroinewa...
Mamaji: bas bas manorma... tumhe yeh oot patang serial dekhni aur samjhni ho toh tum dekho aur hume samjhani ki takleef math karna...
Mamiji: hain... (makes her famous expression and is desperately waiting for the ads to get over...)
Arnav: (releived that mamiji stopped) Mamaji apne apni chashma neeche chod aaye the..
Mamaji: shukriya bitwa...(arnav is about to leave when mamaji stops him).. arrey bitwa hum tumhe batana hi bhool gaye... who sighania group of company ke papers dene they tumhe ... abhi leke aatey hey.. tum baito...
Arnav: ok
Mamiji: arrey shuru ho gaya .. shuru ho gaya...(all jumping)
Arnav gives 'ouh noo wala expression...'
Voices from the TV..
Villain voice - pooja aakhir kab tak tum mujhe ignore karti rahogi... tumhe patah nahin ki meri haalat kya ...
Girls voice - Shut up .. Juss shut up sanjeev... mujhe vishwaas nahin hota ki tum itne gire hue aadmi ho... ek shaadi shuda hokar bhi tum humse...
Arnav helplessly listening to the voices not bothering to look at the tv ...and is waiting to get out ... looks in the direction of mamaji .. who is still looking for something in the cupboard...
Villain voice - pooja .. main maanta hoon ki maine tumhe pehle nahin bataya ... par kya meri bass itni si galti hey ki main ek shaadi shuda hoon? tumhe sirf mera shadishuda hona dikha ...aur mera pyaar... mera pyaar nahin?
Girls voice - u r disgusting

Villain shown hugging the girl... to which
Mami: arrey kaminey chod usey.. chod usey... Biren coming.. chod...(biting her nails)
Arnav finds it unbelievable and manages to look at the TV this time... and once he started ... cud not take his eyes off...
He sees the villain hugging the girl ... reminds him of a similar scene that he had witnessed sometime back... his eyes filled with anger...
The girls helpless state shown... and then the music gets louder when the hero's entry is shown... and then he witnessing the hug...
Mamiji: oh my gaad!! Naaahinnn...
Arnav starts relating everything shown to his own experience ...
Girl shown pushing away in anger
Girls Voice: Toh chod kyun nahin dete apni patni ko... just leave her ...(Arnav recollecting khushi dialogues)

The face of the hero is shown.. which is all depressed ... and he is then shown walking away heart broken...
Mamiji: arrey naahin... Bhiren dont go ... dont go... bait karneka padee... areee pura ka pura talkwa toh listenaiyo...(gets all dramatic about hero leaving and looks really tensed)
Arnavs facial expression shows he is lost somewhere...without having to take it any more he turns to leave...when

Villain Voice: kya pooja .. agar main apni patni ko chod doon.. tab tum mujhse...
Girls Voice: Basss Sanjeev... chi .. ghinn aati hey mujhe tumse baat karte hue... arrey jo apni .. ek devi jaisi patni ka na ho paaya .. woh doosron ka kya hoga...

Arnav listening carefully ... as if he personally had missed on this part...

Girls voice: ek baar sunlo sanjeev.. .mujhe koi farak nahin padta ... main tumse kabhi pyaar nahin karoongi.. chahe tum shaadi shuda ho ya na ho...

the girls shown walking away... and the camera focus on villain
Villain's Voice : evil laugh... tum jitna bhi mana karna pooja ... par main tumhe haasil karke rahoonga.. chahe mujhe apni money bank .. yaani patni ko chodna pade...

and the serial ends...
Mamiji weeping very bitterly... Arnav suddenly comes out of a trance and looks at mami...
Mamiji: arrey Birenwa ko bhi puri puri baat kahe nahin listenia karee... agar 5 mins earlywa coming and goje 5 min aphter... toh conphusionwa hoti hi naahi na...
Mamaji: eeeliyo... ro toh tum aise rahee ho jaise hamare kisi apnon ke saat aisan hua ho...
(walks with the file to arnav .. who is lost in a different world...looks at mamaji listening to his words) Ee lo bituwa...
Arnav : huh? oh haan ... thanks ... main chalta hoon...

Mamaji moves to mamiji .. nodding his head...
arnav :nly flashes of what he saw on the terrace/ serial scenes/ mamiji's dialogues were repeatedly going round his head...

He gets to his room ..where payal is just leaving the room... she says khushi is refreshing herself and is in the bathroom...
arnav with gr8 difficulty brings him out to the present... then shows a bit frustration on himself for being so stupid ... and comparing real and reel life shown in a dumb hindi serial .. since when has be become this way... how could he get carried away with a daily soap this way... but again this cud be...
his thots were disturbed when he heard the most annoying voice to him now...
Shyam: Par payalji hum sirf yeh jaanna chatey hey ki khushiji...
Payal: Naam mat lijiye uska apni gandhi zubaan se...hamara raasta chodiye...
Shyam: with a stern voice ... payalji...
Payal(glares at him): awaaz neeche ... hum khushi nahin hey ... jo yeh maan kar chup rahee ki aap sudhar jaaoge .. aur ohirse apni patni ke saat rahoge...
Shyam: aap meri...
Payal: bass... ab aur kuch nahin sunna... galti ki humare pariwar ne jo aapko muaka diya aur sacchayee sabse chupayee...
Shyam with his evil face .. retreats to his room...
She walks away in frustration... unaware of the 2 pair of eyes that had watched this...
Arnav watches payal getting into the room and is about to call out.. when he sees aakash following her hurriedly ...
he stops and looks confused ...
Payal .. is weeping inside the room ... and quickly wipes her tears when she senses aakash's presence...
Aakash just watching her ...
Payal: Aap? kahan they aap? avoids looking into his eyes...
Aakash: aas paas hi tha main...
Payal smiles ...
Aakash: aap theek hai na payalji?
Payal: Hum? hum theek hey aakashji.. hume kya hua hey..
Aakash: goes closer to her and holds her hand with both his hands...Payalji ...main bahut khush hoon ki aap meri patni hey ... main chahe jitni bhi kyun na koshish karta .. par mere liye aap jaisi kabhi na dhoond pata
Payal: puts her other hand as welll.. looks at him... hum bhi aakashji ... aap jaise pati paakar .. hum bhi kam khush nahin hey...
He brings her close keeping her head on his chest...
Aakash: sach poocho toh payalji ... hamari shaadi ke samay ... hawan wale din.. jab maa ne woh kaand khada kiya tha... us din mujhe apne aap par bahut gussa aaya ki maine aapse sach chipayee... aur jab aapko yeh baat samjhane laga... mujhme kahin na kahin ek darr tha ki aap mujhe maaf nahin karenge...
Payal: Aakashji usme maafi jaisi kya baat thi? der se hi sahi par aapne aakhir main ...(stops)
Aakash: Pull her front to look into her): haan payalji .. usee din maine(stops and corrects) hum donon ne tai kiya tha ki hum ek doosre se koi baat nahin chipayenge ... (continues to look into her eyes expecting her to respond)
Payal:(just looks at him with a slight perplexed manner)
Aakash: Hey na Payalji?
Payal: huh? umm haan...
Aakash: Aur maine apne poore dil se is baat ko maana aur uspe datta raha aur aagey bhi rahoonga...kya aap bhi?
Payal: (brings on a guilty look) but manages to cover it up and says bilkul aakash ji...
Aakash:(appears slightly dissapointed and moves a little away with a smile...) mujhe aape poora bharosa hey
Payal: feels a sharp spasm of pain in her heart ...
Aakash turns to leave... when he is stopped by payal holding his arm and facing downwards.. with tears in her eyes...
He is taken aback ...she runs into him to hug him.. with her face on his chest and she is sobbing ...

Payal: hume maaf kijiye aakashji...
Aakash: payalji ... (pacifying her) its okie ... aap..aise...(he makes her feel confortable asking her to first sit... he sits besides her and holds both her hands in his)
Aap kuch kehna chati hey?(she looks at him with her soft wet eyes) ...
dekhiye aap nahi bhi kehna chahti hey toh koi baat nahin.. hum aapko force nahin karenge... believe me ... isse hamare ristey mein koi farak nahin ayega...
(he smiles)
Payal: Nahin akaashji.. hume batana hi padega... pehle hi yeh baat chupakar hum aur hamara pariwaar galti kar chuke hey...ab aur der nahin...
She goes on to explain all that took place in their lives post her marraige break up ...Khushi... Arnav ... Sheesh Mahal... The Media update...The goons in lucknow.. the very reason they came to delhi...Shyam... his stay at buaji as PG... Khushi's Job... how he coaxed the family to get him engaged to Khushi... how all off them fell trapped into his lie... the day khushi came to know of the truth of he being Anjali's husband... what and how he revealed to her family...
how he pleeded to us to keep this hidden and give him a chance ... how khushi came to RM to reveal it to anjali even if it meant our marraige at risk...but the mangalsutra incident and anjali's state scared khushi ... why /how her family refrained from bringing this truth out to save anjali and arnav

There was shock written all over his face ...

She continued to relate to him abt what khushi had confided in her of shyam still preyin on her ... the terrace incident included...and khushi wanting to talk it out to arnavji... but again stayed quiet after the news of anjali being preg.

Aakash: (with tears in his eyes) Di... (he covered his face with his hands and silently wept)
Both were able to console each other silently as they wept for their Di...
But there was another person stading outside the room who was left to weep alone not only for his Di now ...
but also for the love of his life ...
~~~~~~~~END OF CHAPTER 4~~~~~~~~
Luv Ya All,
So dearies 😃
Hope you enjoyed it ...
Wait for the next part .. you sure dont wanna miss that...😃
Edited by arushi_fan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
yeyyy 🥳
"PARTY"
arnav and aakash both know da truth
and now raizada brothers should teach their "so-called"
jijaji a lesson
uski toh band bajane ki padi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
That was a very realistic update!! --- Please continue... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazin part..finally he knws d truth now
updt next part sooner
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Thank you all for the comments again!!!!

I hope you all who requested for PM have sent me a buddy req...
if not pls do...

Also ... please let me know which part of the OS(scene) did you like the most ...

Luv Ya All,

Preets
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Yaaay, Both Brothers Know The Truth :) Loved Payal 🤗
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I feel as if dis is all real! Amazin :)
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yes... now everyone knows the truth.. time for TEAMWORK:-))
loved the serial part

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