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Posted: 13 years ago
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really good plz pm me
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Loved the update! But you need to do this more frequently! I almost forgot you wrote this! :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG this was Awesome Yaar and kinda sad as well ...

Thanks for the Pm ...
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Awesome but emotional👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really wonderful...counting hours for leaving ...this is got to be good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Last chapter::Last Words


A tear rested down her milky cheek.Silent weeping would be heard down the Raizada Hallway.But as if i care.

For the last time, i would feel the scent of him.His glare landing on me and only me.I still remember the times i made a smile creep up on the side of his lips.

The same lips that lingered around mine, ready to for the endless sensation that was yet to come.But a realization coming towards use.

He would nearly kiss me.

The memories locked in this very house.The times of are constaint fighting, challenges and secertly admiration from a far distance.

The title of being Mrs Raziada, was now slowly taking away from me as i counted the last few seconds till the the 6 months was officially over.It was heart dretching.Butterflies wizzing around n my stomtch.I watched him procced me towards the door.The same hard glare heating my flesh.His lips were in a straight line.His fist tightned.

Maybe He himself wasnt ready for the.


Every step i took, it felt as if i was diying a thousand deaths.My heart thumping faster and faster.My mind was set on leaving, but somewhere deep inside me was a voice echoing at the end.

Stay.


His eyes were making contact with my'n,Somwhere in he brown orbs of desire,there might still be love alive.

My own heart was now cold and ruthless. This wasnt far not even a mare bit.

When you find out the truth, And may Devi Maiya show the way sooner.
But when ever that day will come.

I wont be there. Next you.

And with that she exited out of Raziada Mansion.Out of Arnav Singh Raziada's Live.

Away from his presence.Knowing a sight so painful, The dream shed dreamed on before.

The incomplete dream, As she was Incomplete with out Him.



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Sorry for the emotional ending but hope you liked it ..

xxx

thanks for all the support to those lovely people . thank u !

Edited by HiraHasan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
emotional and heart breaking well written loved it that the last chapter what no poor khushi she is leaving him to his own agony loved the update beautifully done the emotions well described thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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beautiful vm
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oh man that was just beautiful dear...so emotional...wow n thnx 4da pm dear...
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wow awesome and sad. sorry that's its the end but loved it, thanx for the pm

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