OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2 - Pg. 18)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh my gosh! Damn, Reya, this was beautifully written! I want this to happen in the show! CVs, are you reading this? PLEASE! This is such a damn realistic scene.

I 'liked' how Arnav gets himself hurt intentionally...but realizing that physical pain is nothing compared to emotional one. LOVED THAT!

The brick walls analogy reminded me of Pink Floyd! btw. Rofl. Loved that para too!

But I don't want Khushi to forgive him so easily... will you continue this? Please do! I want to see them talk now!

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chweetybebu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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That was mind blowing !!!!!! Keep up the good work

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shraddska

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey! great OS... the first half was heartbreaking & second half was very touching... brilliant...

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Maham

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Aww that was very well written and really, really sweet! I really wish we get to see something like this happen soon, after all this hatred and bitterness, their make up scenes need to be worth it, just like this scenario!

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

absolutely loved it..u write sooo well :)

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

amazing shreya...
very well written..

hope this happens in the show...

thanks for the pm..:)

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497410

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome update Shreya! 🤗

I loved the first part of the OS. . . Arnav's realization and his guilt. . .brilliantly written. . . 😳 I could imagine each and every word in there. . .

But the second part. . . its good. . . Would Khushi give in so easily after so much of torture? Would she even let him come near her?! I dunno. . .

Altogether a pretty good OS! =)