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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i loved it, it was so well written and very realistic, continue soon my dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

would love to see this...pls pm me when u update tq

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was nice!! Spunky Khushi!

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Ola again, Amigos!! How's Life? Better than Khushi's, of course! 😆
Uh...I know! It was lame! Seriously, LAME!!! teehee...😛
Oh kay!!!! My God!!! So many LIKES and replies!!! I love them! Thank you so much for commenting!! Made my Day!!
And for the SILENT READERS, Thank you so much for liking it!!! Hope the next part is up to the mark and is convincing for you to comment! Would love to know your review!!

NOTE: I retain sole ownership of all these works of fiction, so please, my dear friends, do not alter or reproduce my work and claim it as your own.

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Part 2

Tum kahin nahi jaa rahi... Na abhi.. Na kabhi..

Khushi: (struggling to push his hands off) Aap kaun hote hain hume rokne waale?! [Who are you to stop me?!]

Arnav: (pulling her closer, glaring down at her) Main tumhara pati hoon!! [I am your husband!!]

Khushi: (looking up instantly at the mention of 'pati/husband') Pati?...[Husband?...] (furrowing her eyebrows) Kaunse pati? Kahaan ke pati? Kuch hi ghante pehle aapne khud bola thha ki 'duniya ke liye hum pati-patni hain, lekin asal mein nahi'...Kahaan thha ki nahi? [Which husband? Husband from where? Just a few hours ago, you, yourself, said that 'for the world we are married, but in reality, we aren't'... Didn't you say it or not?] (not backing down and returning his glare)

His hold loosened as he remembered the words spoken by him, in front of her Devi Mayya, right after he had put sindoor on her head. His eyes lost its vision, because of the images playing in his thoughts, and then, widened on realisation as he stepped back and turned away.

Khushi: Kyu? Ab kya hua? Kuch yaad aaya?... [Why? What happened? Remember something?] (screwing her eyes as her head nodded in askance)
Arnav closed his eyes briefly.

Khushi: Yaad rakhiyega, Mr. Raizada!...[Remember, Mr. Raizada!...] (her hand shooting up to point at him, as if warning) Aapne sirf mere maang mein sindoor aur gale mein mangalsutra baandha hain... Saat phere nahi liye aapne!... [You have just filled my maang and bound me with the sacred thread, mangalsutra with you... Not taken the Seven vows of Marriage]
Arnav's eyes snapped back open at the mention of 'Saat Phere'.

Khushi: (seeing him turn around to face her) Abhi tak puri tarah humaari shaadi nahi hui hain... Toh ab hum aapse kehte hain ki aapka hum pe koi haq nahi banta... Kyunki shaadi ab-bhi adhoori hain! [Our marriage is yet to complete...So now I will say that you have no right on me... Because we are still unmarried!]

Arnav: (on realisation that the mandap was still down there in the living room) Tum chaaho toh abhi voh bhi pura kar sakte hain... [If required, we can fulfill that too, right now]
He had realised that in all this he had forgotten one of the main rituals- saat phere. Though none of it ever mattered to him, he still wanted this marriage to be done with all the main rituals required for the marriage to be complete as it mattered to Khushi. And he wanted to shatter every little hope, dream of hers by following everything of it and still not accept her as his wife.
He took hold of her hand and turned to walk briskly to his door, dragging a struggling Khushi, making up his mind to go the mandap downstairs.

Khushi: (successful in prying her hand away from his grip before he could reach the door) Chhodiye humein!!! Bahut ho gayi aapki manmaani! [Leave me!!! Enough of your nonsense!!]
Arnav's eyes burned at the mention of 'manmaani'. She thinks that all of this is nonsense... thought Arnav.
Khushi: Agar aapko yeh lagta hain ki aap humaare saath kuch bhi kar sakte hain toh bhul jaaiye! Kyunki is galat faemi mein mat rahiye ki hum aapko karne denge! Yeh duniya aapke ishaaro pe nahi naachti hain, aur naahi aap use apne tarike se chala sakte hain. Aap apne company ke maalik honge, aur bahut izzat bhi milti hogi iss duniya se, lekin duniye ke maalik nahi hain aap! [If you think that you can do anything with me, then forget it! Because don't get any ideas that I would allow you! This world doesn't thrive on you, and neither can you make this world thrive on your wishes. You maybe the the owner of your own company, and may have all the respect of this world but you don't own this world!] (her hand shooting up with her palm facing him) Agar aapko yeh lagta hain ki humne aapse shaadi 'paiso' ke liye ki, toh humaari baat dhyaan se suniye... Humne aapse shaadi sirf...aur sirf, humaari jiji ke liye kiya hain!! [if you think that I married you for your 'money', then listen to this very carefully... I married you only... and only, for my jiji!!] (her hand pointing at herself) Aapke in ghatiya paiso se nahi! [Not for your crappy money!](her hand pointing him again)

Arnav's eyes darted from her eyes to her hand and back, now with fury glistening in his orbs.
While Khushi was feeling lighter and stronger with every passing second, as she spoke her heart out and let the feelings of the past resurface, that had long ago been buried. Her nervousness, her weaknesses all ebbed away to make space for the new confidence flowing in to her body with every word voiced out.

Khushi: Aap hi ne kahaan thha na ki yeh mangalsutra aur yeh sindoor toh aapne humaare tassalli ke liye toh baandh di aur bhar di, lekin kabhi hume aapki patni nahi manenge...Aur naahi patni ka darja denge...? Aapse uska haq maang bhi kaun raha hain? [You, yourself, said it right, that you tied this mangalsutra and smeared this sindoor just for the heck of it, but will never accept me as your wife...nor will you provide any imporatnce to it...?] (her hand outstretched and then, coming back again to her side) Hum aapse kehte hain [Now I'm saying] (with burning tears brimming again in her eyes, while her hand flew up to touch her bosom to indicate herself) Hum aapse kehte hain ki hum aapko aapna apna pati nahi maante! [Now I say that I don't accept you as my husband!] (her hand pointing him again) Aur maane bhi kyu? [And why should I?] (screwing her eyes as she stepped closer, looking straight into his eyes) Humaari shaadi adhoori hui thhi... toh iss mangalsutra [Our marriage is yet to be done.. so this mangalsutra] (clutching her pendant) aur sindoor ka koi matlab hi nahi banta! [ and this sindoor has no meaning then!] (stepping back as she nodded her head in a 'no', as Arnav's eyes slightly widened) Toh hum yeh shaadi abhi ke abhi... [So I'd better...]

Arnav: (stepping closer and grabbing her by her shoulders again, before she could pull out the sacred thread that bound her to him, startling her) Tum aisa kuch nahi karogi! Yaad rakho...[ You are not going to do anything! Remember...] (tilting his head a bit) Aakash aur tumhaari Jiji ki shaadi bhi toot jaayegi...[Aakash and your Jiji's marriage will break too...]

Khushi: Aap aisa kuch nahi karenge! [You are not going to do any such thing!] (squaring her hunched shoulders to match his intensity) Aur humein pata hain ki Aakash ji Jiji se itna toh pyaar karte hi hain ki voh aapki baat nahi maanenge! [And I very well know that, Aakash ji loves Jiji at least to that extent that he won't listen to you!] (confidently)
Arnav: (fuming at her audacity to jump such a conlcusion and that too about his own family, implying that he is powerless now) Voh mera bhai hain... [He is my brother..] (gritting his teeth) Mera chhota bhai! Usne [My younger brother!] (tightening his hold) aaj tak jo bhi kiya hain, mere kehne pe kiya hain! [To this day he has done nothing without my permission!]

Khushi: (eyes boring into his, with a not-backing down expression, snapping back at him) Achcha? Toh unhone Jiji se pyaar aap hi ke kehne pe kiya thha kya? [Really? Then did he fall in love with Jiji because of your wish?]

Arnav: You... (glowering down at her audacity to say that and jerking away from her)
He turned away to control his temper and breathed in 5 long deep breaths, counting to 10 mentally. Somehow, some small part of his mind wanted to smile...no, Grin.. at her statement...Something he had learnt from her.
It did make some sense.

Khushi: Nahi na? [No, right?]

He turned back again, shushing the annoying voice in his head to look straight into her stubborn face. He stepped forward again, growling in anger, feeling annoyed, while she stuck out her chin in challenge, challenging him to proceed, ready for what was to come, and stared straight back into his glowing orbs, stubbornly...Something she had learnt from him.
Arnav: (grabbing her again, trying to stop her from doing that, i.e., annoy him further with her stubbornness and glaring down at her again) Listen, you...

Khushi: (cutting in) Humne kahaan chhodiye humein! [I said Leave me!] (her wrists pushing against his arms and finally jerking them off) Aapko humein chhoone ka koi haq nahi banta!! [You have no right to touch me!!] (her voice higher)

Arnav: (grabbing her wrist again) Aur voh tumhe kahin bhi chhoo sakta hain? [And he can touch you anywhere?] (menacingly)

Khushi: (her other hand trying to loosen his grip, when suddenly she looked up at him in shock) Voh? [He?] (screwing her eyes and furrowing her eyebrows) Voh kaun? [Who's he?]

Arnav: (smirking) Bano mat! [Stop playing!] (moving closer to her face, eyes still holding hers) Wahi... jisse tum 'pyaar' karti ho...! [The one... whom you are in 'love' with...!]
Khushi: Jisse hum... pyaar karte hain? [Whom I... am in Love with?] (confused as she looked at his face searching for another hint)
The words hadn't settled in her head and she was still swinging from the pain that he was inflicting on her to what he had just said. And right after the words had settled down, her eyes widened.

Khushi: Kya bakwaas kar rahe hain aap? [What crap are you talking about?] (resuming her struggle)

Arnav: Kyu Khushi? Kya tum use kahin bhi chhone deti ho? [What happened, Khushi? Do you allow him to touch you anywhere?]

Khushi: (perplexed) Yeh aap kiski baat kar rahe hain?? [Whom are you talking about??]

Arnav: (jerking her closer as he held her other hand and pried it away from his fingers, tightening his hold on her wrist) Tumhe achchi tarah se pata hain main kiski baat kar raha hoon!! [You very well know who I am talking about!!]
Khushi: (tears springing up again at his tightening hold) Humein (as she bit her lip to stop from wincing) dard ho raha hain... [It is paining..]

She could feel her hand go numb and cold, slowly as his grip refused to loosen. She could now sense nothing as her hand had totally gone numb. Only the colour of her hand could be seen, which turned bluer from dark pink.

Arnav: Achcha? [Is it ?] (gritting his teeth, as he remembered his state on Shyam and Khushi's revelation on the terrace)Tumhe dard ho raha hain?...[Is it paining?] (seeing Khushi's pain stricken face, as she tried to pry herself away from him, with almost all her strength) Uss dard ka kya jo tumne mujhe diya? [What about that pain that you gave me?] (his voice increasing with every word and at last, shouting)

Khushi was shocked at his outburst, and had jumped there itself in his hold with one foot back to support herself, as his voice rung in her ears. She was now perplexed to the limit!!

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Bwahahahah!!😈 Oh kay! So how was it??
Feedback is mandatory, now!!! You will HAVE to comment now!!😈
Phew! Now for the translation...yeah, yeah, am at it! Don't worry, will put it up soon!
Till then, Ciao!!😃
*EDITED-
The Translation part's been done!! Uh, haven't double-checked it, but hope it does some justice to the dialogues in Hindi!😳
Now am I forgetting something... *scratching head*
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Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 13 years ago

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Sophia Ali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

love the battle going on between the two. you truly captured both of them well.

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Edited by SweetSophie - 13 years ago

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farfar319

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Oh that was a GREAT fight. Loved it !

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anjs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow...finally he will tell her...waiting for the next update...

thanks for the pm

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sri7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

good write up...and mind you ...you will get nicely get from me...if you stop it..now...pls continue...love u

Edited by sripriyan - 13 years ago

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Excellent OS ⭐️

I liked Khushi's stance here. The way she stays firm and challenges Arnav into revealing the reason for the predicament she is in now. Khushi needs answers to clear her name, to her family, his family and to herself.

She knows that she has nothing to fear, since SHE has done nothing wrong.

Arnav is startled at Khushi's behaviour, because according to him, he thinks that she is the culprit and has to be punished accordingly.

I am very excited what you are going to come up with next. BRAVO!! GOOD JOB.👍🏼

Edited by lara3110 - 13 years ago