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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

OMG..what a twist,loved it..update soon

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Ooo... Nyc twist...:) father huh...!!!
Please Update soon...!

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Minnat

@minnat_mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

loved ur ff...😊

diffrent concept...👍🏼👏

continue soon...

n plz pm me wen u update next

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gypsy

@gypsy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Thanks for the feedback everyone :)
Glad to know you are liking the storyline ;)

Individuals replies will be posted before posting the new Chapter ;)

Cheers!!!

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Gargee

@Gargee

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Oh My GOD! 👏 Brilliant Writing!

You have to have to have to add me to your PM List!!! Please Please Please!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Comment updated on Page 7...😊

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Nayab

@KaJen-amaZayn

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Hey Pri! i cant believe u didnt PM me and tell that u started a new FanFic :( u probably know that im not a big fan of Arnav Khushi but i love ur work and i would always read it.. okay anyway coming back to the story:: amazing writing as usual,,,, the concept is super kool :D i love reading stories like this where the main guy is all killer LOLL yeah i love it

part 1 :

DDUUUDE u already got me addicted to this FanFic :DDD why are you such a good writer??? okay back to the part:: OMGEEE Khushi is his next target!!!! OMG OMG OMG i wonder how this will be..

part 2 :

i feel bad for Khushi.. but still yayy go Arnav LOL!! hes like master at planning all these kidnapping and killing plans Hehe.. haww he got Khushi! how did the police find them?? good driving to John :D he got away from the police thank God! okay u know what i just cant write more for this part since i already read part 3 🤣 hehe

part 3 :

OMFG! i cant believe it he's her dad how the **** could that be?? and why does he hate her so much? why does he want her to suffer? who's her mom? and OhMyGod too much questions roaming around in my head! cant write more i need answers!!!!! kk im gonna leave the comment at that! you update you get another comment so update quickly and please update Savage too please PM me as well :D

LotsOfLove

..Nayab..

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prabsy

@prabsy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Really a great story...
Sounds good...

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Awesome part!! So SIR is khushi's father!! Its gettng very intrstng nw. Cant wait 4 next part. Arnav's pov ws fab. Thnks 4 d pm

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gypsy

@gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Res for comment on chapter 3...😎

EDITED...😊

SIR is Khushi's Father..😲..Now this is something unexpected...But I am just loving the story so far yaar..Really looking forward to more...Love the way you describe Arnav's feelings towards whole this kidnapping fiasco...Loved it...Waiting for more so do continue soon...Thanks for the PM..Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

Thanks Geet :D

Weren't expecting it?? 😆..that's good to know.. :D
Glad to know you are liking the storyline :) and this one's next in line so the new chapter is going to come sooner than you are expecting..😆..
Ah..Something's definitely wrong with me...😆..itni jaldi update..kyun..kaise..😆😳
You too :D

Originally posted by: dumas
what the... that her father and he told asr to do what ever just don't kill her wow he is one mean bas***d loved the update waiting for more loved it thanks for the pm

Thanks for the feedback :D
Deadly pic of Arnav :) Just Like the character of this fiction :D
I'll post the new chapter soon :D

Originally posted by: sweetvanie
Hey i read and loved it... sounds really interesting now... SIR is Khushi's father..wowww what a shock??... I wonder whats gonna happen between khushi & arnav now???... can't wait to read the other chapter??? sounds exciting... THANKS FOR THE PM's...

Thanks for the feedback :D
Yup! he's her father..Shocking?? Ah...that's good for this ficiton😆..There's going to be more shocking twist coming up in the future chapters😉..
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D

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