MG/AK - My Protectors [Chapter 3 - Page 14- 28/09 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting prologue...

bahut sare bhai behen hain...yaad rakhne padenge...

continue soon...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
nyc intro...
geet ko arnav ki behan bna dia aur khushi ko maan ki...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
loved the prologue and the cs
like the combination of MG and Arhi

waiting for it to start
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Chapter One


The college hall was quiet. There were four people awaiting their results. All friends, two of the were sisters and the other two were sister. A young girl had her phone switched on and had dialed her di's number.


A phone rang. The whole conference hall became quiet. The presentation had stopped and the boss glared at his CEO. He gave her a angry look but she didn't care. She was the least bit scared of them. She ignored them and looked at him with a deadly look which she knew he would immediately react to. And he did. His face softened and he plead an apologetic look to her




She simply ignored him as she was the least bit interested. He was about to say sorry to her but when he saw her smile he knew the reason for it. He instantly knew, he looked at her as she looked at him he nodded knowing what she wants. She answered the phone and put it on loud speaker. ***************


She heard the voice and started smiling but was too nervous. She put the phone near her ear and said "di" in a soft whisper. She went quiet as the principal started reading out the exam results. She was nervous and now her di was on the phone. She hoped her veerji was there to talk some sense into her but she also knew it would never happen. Her brother had always stayed away and kept her away from him. She didn't know why but she loved him. He sent her gifts and he rings and texts her but it just wasn't the sameShe heard the voice and started smiling but was too nervous. She put the phone near her ear and said "di" in a soft whisper.



She went quiet as the principal started reading out the exam results. She was nervous and now her di was on the phone. She hoped her veerji was there to talk some sense into her but she also knew it would never happen. Her brother had always stayed away and kept her away from him. She didn't know why but she loved him. He sent her gifts and he rings and texts her but it just wasn't the same.



She started sweating as the principal read out the results from 3rd place."Third place in the business field goes to khushi singh khurana" called out the principal.Everyone cheered as khushi got up. She hugged her sister Payal who was also studing with her then went to Mhug her two best mates. She went up to collect her trophy and certificate and stood on the stage. Next the principal announced the persons name in second place.

" The person in second place for the business and media goes to meera singh" said the principal.Meera screamed and hugged the her sister. She jumped up and down and kept screaming.The girl on the other line screamed land jumped to hug the boss. He smiled and hugged her back. She laughed and went quiet.The girl went up on stage to collect her trophy and her certificate. She had the biggest grin on her face. She got the trophy and showed her sister.




The principal came on stage. " well everyone before I announce the the person who has topped in the whole college with an outstanding 98.5% in media and business studies I would like to welcome a special person. This person had done his education here when he was young. It's a shame his family didn't come here but just by having him here is an absolute pleasure. Please welcome Mr Pritim Singh."

Everybody cheered and clapped for him. Teachers stood up to give him a warmer welcome.Just then the principal announced the the person that came first. " we'll before we see mr Singh on the stage we would like to announce the person that came 1st. Congratulations miss Geet singh handa you came 1st in the whole school."Geet got up and was about to hug her sister meera when she saw him. " Papa" she said

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The girl on the other side of the phone nearly dropped her phone as she heard her sister whisper.Yes Geet Singh handa originally known as Geet Singh Raizada. The name change was just for college as her brother didn't want anybody to know who she was.

"Chote vo... Tum ne sunna!" she said slowly.

"haan di... " he said emotionally



Just then they heard a big bang and all then they heard Geet scream and the phone went dead... Anjali and Arnav geet's brother and sister Screamed Geeet!


So sorry guys I know I haven't been updating just been going through some Family Problems. Dads been in and out of hospital and well don't have time to get my laptop fixed also been working too. Sorry once again.

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Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
This sounds really interesting and can't wait to read the 1st chapter... loved the characters ... PLEASE UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
nice start...
so the lady on the phone listening is Anjali and the guy is Arnav...
Geet has topped...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
love the CS n prologue...

and an interesting start...

hope geet is ok...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome update loved it thanks for the pm can't wait to know what happened
Still image of Maan and GeetDrashti DhamiStill image of Mann and GeetGurmeet Choudhary on the sets of GeetA still from the show Geet Hui Sabse Paraayee
Sanaya Irani & Barun SobtiSanaya Irani as Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam DoonArnav and Khushi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam DoonBarun Sobti as Arnav Singh RaizadaStill image of Arnav and Khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome!!!!!
btw:hope your dad feels better.

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