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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Beautifully written!! Heart wrenching yet so amazingly beautiful...Great job👏

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

love your style dear ...

beautifully written😭 sad pieces are not easy to write

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was brilliant Lyraa <3 I liked the fact that it didn't have a happy ending, it made it more real. You depicted Khushi's emotions brilliantly! You're one amazing writer, man! :D

xoxo

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

It was awesome... Very well written.And I loved it. Though Khushi is sad, I want Arnav to beg for her forgiveness.. Especially after these past episode,she should not forgive him easily and he should also have this terror of losing her.. Thanks for the PM>

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautifully written n very sad

loved it

as always fab work hun

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Mind blowing Lyra! This was a master piece! the emotions were woven so, so delicately!!

I could feel that heart wrenching moments! Thanks for the PM

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awww... that was so sad yaar..but beautifully portrayed our leads emotions..mindblowing

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

It was beautiful dear...but then why so much pain...she is not the one to ever accept defeat...she will bounce back and make him eat every single word he uttered and then he will fall for her once and for all...Can I expect something down that lane from u pretty soon😊