can i get another chance last part updated 25/07/2

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Can I get another chance''''''''''''''''''''

Guys

This is my first SS'''''''''''.

It is IPKKND

Based oncurrent and u future track''''''''''''''''''''

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Prologue'''''''''''.

A slap on his face''''''''''''''''''''''''

It is seemed to be for him.

But it hit some other person

He felt he is drowned.to pain

He is no longer a person,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He is a soul without life

His stupid misunderstanding '''''..his anger, his hatredness,his arroagance had took his life

Now he is living corpse''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

He is the man who made the destiny in his own hands

Now brutally'''''''''''.killed by himself and killed his heart with his own hands'''''''''''''''

He had mistreated a girl'he betrayed her ''''..he make her to loose every thing'''''''''..

HE IS ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA

Mr sashi gupta had a powerhe could kill that person

But he saw the look of a lady''''''''.terrified face'''''''''

She cluctched her stomach''''.

Today she also lost .everything''.the betrayal.the trust on god..and mostly her husband''''''''''''''''''

She also became numb.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ll

She is totally lost''''''''''she lost everything'''''''

She want it to be dream'''''''''.close her eyes.and forget everything'''''''

And she want to''''''''''''''''''''..

A pain streak voice of sashi gupta

Where is kushi''''.

And everyone surprised the answer given by the person

She left babuji'''''..

I made her to leave

Our khushi is dead'''''''''''..

And I set her free''''''''''''''''..

I want my sister to breathe''.i want her to once live her'..own life

I don't want any jiji of her, bauji of her amma of her and few cold ruthless persons taking the advantage of my innocent butterfly''''''''I flewed her''''''..

She laughed.

Yes '''''''payal raizada had set her sister free''''''''''''''''

She laughed like a maic''''''''''''..

Everyone''''''''''''..sink into floor''''''''..

Leaving one person''''''''''''.

He enter into the room

The same room he brought her''''.

The same room he tortured her

He abused her.

And finally.exactly that night.due to his anger and betrayal of her crossed his anger and he physically intimated her ,scared her'.and possessively held her''..and he took her virginity from her ..which is the most precious thing in her life''''''''''''''''''''''..

He broke down''''''''''''''..

He cannot look the room.

He cannot see the bed.where he done the shameful act which burns him a lot.touching of the blanket seemed tobe burning him.

The plants seeing him a s a criminal'''''''''''''''''

And his words

Kaash mein tumse mohabbat kar satktha khushi''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

The old lady''''''''''gayatri singh raizada''''''''''''.

A woman of priniciples and morals'''''''

She brought up her children in a very pride manner'when her husband left'''''''''''''

An d his son turned to be person battering her wife she always maintained a cold and liberate warmness.with her daughter in law trying toshow her the.world.

But when her daughter broke down byt the betrayal of her sonin law taking the innocent of her daughter''''''''..causing her to commit suside''''''''on her daughter marriage

And two broke down children''''''''''.

Arnav and Anjali'''''''.

She never felt sad

But today.she felt bad for the child'''''she lookeda t the sister'.who is laughing for her sister happiness

And her second daughter which is light and smile of all the happiness''''''''''''''.

Had been humiliated and tortured''''''''..

And the person whom she always felt is the god send gift to her grand daughter who turned out be a outraged''''''''''hilarious masked person'''dirthy scumbag''''''''''..

Her anger woke up

She quickly called up the police

Take him inspector''''''''''''''''''..

He cheated my grand daughter and caused her severe mental stress''..

Just take him'''''''''''.

And with the authoritative voice ''''''.and police dragged him'.

Akash singh raizada'''''''''''''''..

Felt depressed.he felt he is the lucky person.in =this world.

But today he is a completelyf ailiure

Cannot understand the pain and torture going around his wife''''''cannot understand

The eyes telling to'''''''..

He felt helpless'''.but carried her to his room''''''''''''''''

Garima and bauji.cannot able to see.any one faces .including their person with a fury and anger in his eyes'''''''''''''.

He closed the eyes..

And left the place'''''''''''''''

And all the question is

Can god give another chance''''''''''

All mind and heart focused on only person

And she is kushi khurami gupta''''''.no khushi singh raizada''''''''''''

Let us see can god give another chance''''''''''..

What destiny is decided for them

What is the fate'''''''''''''''''''

Part 1;;;;

After 5 yrs

The shantivanam'''''''''''''''''''''''''''.delhi'''''''''''''''''.

A lady praying in the mandir

She is not wearing any magalsutra.her head is plane'.she is wearing a simple saree.with no jewelleries had not there

She is Anjali singh raizada''''.

She divorced 4 yrs back ''''''''''''''''

She again started her life not trusting anyone''''''''''.

Being herself'.living losing her child''.and her life''.but still trying to cope up.the life

Gayatri singh raizada''''''''''''.living their life'''''''..

And payal.she is just like a ordinary house wife dealing all her husband deeds

Manorama '.raizada.felt something change'''''.she may not accept her fruitful daughter in law but her son and also another life give the happiness''''''''''''''..

Akash singh raizada'''''''''''living a life''.with his wife''''..and trying to sort of things but miserably failed as the emptiness is still with them,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The space cannot be filled''''''''''

And all the happiness only relived by payal and akash 5 yr old son''''''''..ankit''''.

The kid will really bring life to the dead ly mansion'''''''''''.

Everyone are ok.

Just one person

Arnav singh raizada

He is now top in the position.he earned lot of money'''''''''''''''''.he is so high.

But inside him there is no life''''''''''''''''''''''''..

He is a person with broken soul.

And don't know where his soul is''and how is''''.hisheart knows she is alive''''''''.somewhere''''''''''''.

Otherwise he also die because his heartbeat will stop.

Anjali came into his room.chote''''''''''''

Comeon whydon't u join for breakfast''''''''''..

FB:breakfast with ur hands''..ur a venom, a slow tortous death''''''''take ur flity hands from me and ever touch me''''''''''''''''''''.

He flintched when he turned to find his sister sad andc puffy eyes'.with concern,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He does not want to show his face to the lady downstairs payal.her accusing bhabi.l

Even though she is perfect housewife,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,perfect mother and perfect'''''''''''nanad

She took care of Anjali''''''but''''''''they are not happy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,they are pretending to be that ''''''..

He can sense thatb'..

And he can feel that .

That hurts him a lot.

As usual'''''''''''''..

He went to his office''''''''''''''.

He is busy in thoughts of his empty cabin'''''''''''''.

He heard a voice

Sir''''''''''''''''..ur tickets

Tickets''.

Yes Mumbai''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

Sir ur meeting with the client sthey had already postpond this meeting

Ok aman''''.

He left for the airport

Suddenly a breeze flow'''''''''''.

And the bg song tuhi batade mola.

He remembered the first meeting .

Her fall in his arms.

Her cute smile'''everything.

He enter Mumbai

Finishe d his meeting ..he had became a automated robaitics''''''''

And he want to breathe a fresh air''''''.and he came down''''''''''''''''''''

He thought for a walk''''''''''''''''

As he is busy in his thoughts and his dreams''''''''''''''

He didn't see anything and a shout

Yeh ankheen hay yaa button'dikhta nahii kya.kya haal banaya mera dress.ka''..pata hay kitne ke hay''''uffo ab mein amma ko kya jawab dungi.

Want to ignore .but he felt he listened the convo some time back.long years

Turned to see'''.no one

But a tug in his pant''.

He bend his down to see a 5yr old cute little baby doll''looking into him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,with the same lovely duo shaped eyes which he fall in love with

The white frok of her covered with mud due to bump'and her face is red due to anger

She is indeed white.

But the features resemble someone so close.

Yehe kya dekh rahe hoo'''''''''''''''''..sorry nahii bol sakthe hoo''''.

Oh sorry'''''''''''''''''

He muttered'''''''''''''''''''''''''''.as he about to talk

Somebody called

Arohi'''''''''''''''''.

She turned her face '

And ran away from her

A thing happened after long years

A smile .appeared in his lips.

Want to see the small angel.want to hear her banter'''..want to hug..a sudden thoughts arised''''''.

But don't know tha t god really want to give him chance'''''''..

He came into the thoughts''''''''..

A knock at the door..

Mr ASR'..good to see u.im mr patel'''''''''''''.actually I came to invite u for a small function at our school''''''''''''sir it is a tiny school butu had given such a grant for our organization'''''''..so if u can attend toit''''.then'''''''''''.

First''''''''.he hesitated

But he remembered his angel.ok sure mr patel..

With that mr patel stromed away

He quickly wanted to ''''''''..exit the school function and leave the premises

But when he enter he felt a familiar breeze'''''''''..he closed his eyes'''''''''..feeling the breeze after long time'''''''''''''''''''''''''''

And the boring function started.

Indeed the children are most beautiful.creatures in this world.they will bring happiness with them

He used to watch akash playing with

Part 2

ankit''''''.even nani'''di ,everyone'''''''''''''

He is busy in thoughts

Whenall sudden the screams are started

It is girls running race.

All the audience including boys.cheering for someone

The name caught his eye

Arohi.arohi''..arohi'''.arohi'''''''''''''..

Tehn he saw the cute angel in his white uniform preparing for run.,,

Suddenly turned around.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And gave a quick flying kiss.,,,,,'''''turned to find a old lady around.,,,..60 yrs wearing fancy spectacles''''''''''''''..giving back kisses''''''''''''''

And she won '''''..no wonder her sporting sprits'''''''''''..re

She is hugged by everyone,

Every feature her friendliness.resembling meone very close to heart.

Fancy dress competition where he took the photo cannot stop himself''''.dressed in white angel dress looked like angel''''''''''''''''''..

After sometime

Prize ceremony'''''''''''''

And the awards tken over by her..

She is smiling

And he got the call'''.his di he told that bhe is going to arrive back''''''

Mr patel gave him a wave.

Then he turned back to see the angel..she is smiling''''''.widely'.

Her face turned to shock to smile and wide smile.

And she runned.

He felt she is going to hug'''''''''''..

But instead she ran to the arms of a lady'''''''''''''''''.

Her face is back to him.the clearly complexion'''''''''''''''''''''.

He turned his face to his car'''''..

Ammaa I thought u won't come '''''I thought ur busy'''..thank u amma'''.

Anything for u mera bachhaa''''''''''''.tumari amma tumari functionkaise boolege'''''''''''..

The voice stucked his face'''''''''''

He turned to see'''''''.the lady turned.

And a name wishpered e

The person he want to see

The person where his heart belongs the same breeze'.the same thing .happens when they are close

Khusi''''''''''''''''''''''..

Mrs Mehta'''''''''''..

Yes mrs Krishnamurthy.

Ur arohi is wonderful she is smart intelligent and extremely beautiful''''''''''''''''.

Thank u mrs krishanamurthy''''..

Then the same old lady came'''''''''''..and hugged''''''''''''''''both.

And they chatted.

Where his little angel is explaining things excitingly where his khusi and the older lady listening to her completely'''''''''''''''''.

He thanked god

And quietly followed the car.

He does not want to rush things''''''''''''''''''''''''..

Khusi Mehta'''''''''''''''.

Khushi married and arohi is his daughter''''

He want to hug her he want to sooth herb

But he don't want to rush'''''''''''''.

He went back to hotel'''''''''''''''.

Kushi''''''''''''''''''''''''

The stormy night

Get ur hands off me.

Why khushiji.i thought u loved it

How can I let u suffer with that monster who don't know how to treat u'''''''''''..

I want to hug u sooth u''''''''''''''''''.

No .leave me.

Just then door open

She turned her face which she don't want to see

But she saw the same intense anger.hatredness'''.teh same cruel ruthless''''''..merciless'''''..eyes'''''''''''''.

Next timeshe is dragged to her own room.

The door were closed'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Her eyes are closed

Her clothes are ripped

She remain there'''''''''''''''''''''''''.

she don't know what had happened

a small girl stood numb when her parents body took away from her

and a nother pair took her in hands

a one year old girl taking care of her

and they joking.flying.laughing girl''''''''''''''..

and a pain in her down ''''''''''''''''''..

and after some time consuminginto darkness''''''''.

Suddenly she woke up''''''''

Turned.towards.side

Lights on.

Saw the next tiny creature laid beside her slow breathing'''''..

She cannot sleep properly.

If she close her eyes the nightmare comnes'''..

Cannot arise that brutal images..the pain..

The pain and scream'''

And hugging her sister

And her advice to go from there'''''''''''''''..

And her decision''''..in leaving the dark''''''''''

And her fall infront of her only source devi mayya''''''''.

Opening her eyes to find a lovely pair of eyeswatching her''''''''''''

She is the person send by devimayya to her

Ajji.

A middle aged widower who is disowned byher own family

Saw this 18 r girl.struggling to her lifef

And felt shocked finding her pregnant''''''''

She brought her'''''''''''''''''..

Giving her job'.

And the strongness''''''.but she cannot remove the sadness in her''''''''''''..

But only the light is arohi''''''''''''''''.the grand child of her.

And the daughter of her'''''

She gave her the name'''''''''''..
malini Mehta'''''''''''''..

Their small house turned out to bea small apartment

The chilled frightened girl emerged to be loving mother.and a protected daughter for her

And responsible human being .success ful in her life'''''''''''''''''''''''''.

She herself admired that girl.

She is somewhat different from what she is

But arohi .fulfill their wished.

Her smile brin

g the radian ce to the heart''''''''''''.

Part 3

The next few days

ASR had became live

He want to see khushi

He quickly appointed detectives

He feared that if she got to know that he is in the town

She may run away

No he can't loose her''''''.

And he is eagerly waiting for the person to bring him the news

The news really gave him so much happiness

He collected everything

How malini got her.

How she treats''her

Her worki ng company

Each and everything''''''''''''''''''''

He danced when he found that khusi is not remarried '''

And then reality

He closed his eyes in pain

He screamed high''''''''''.

The night horrified night

He returned he want to finish it off

He want to send her.out.

He did not want himself suffer for her

Everytime he bruised her the tears in her face'''''''''''''''''..

Used to kill him thousands of death.

He does n't want that slow death

He Insults her.tortured her

He thought run away.but she is not''..and that day

When he decided to let her go

He saw her with that scum dirty bag's hands

She is love in with him

She once again betrayed me'''''''''.

Anger overwhelmed him

He dragged her to his room

Throw her to thebed

He start assaultingher

But she is not giving response not protesting''''''.

But still he want to show his anger he bruised her''''.

He pushed her harder'''''''.

Tears are rolling her to teheyes

But she stood still

After sometime when he felt his anger submissed away''''.he left her and left the room'''''''''.

He'cried .and screamed in pain

That night

Arohi''''''''.

My daughter.

My angel''''''''''''.

No'''''''''''''''''''

And he fell on the ground'''''.

Khushi woke up with a jolt.

No.why he keep in my dreams

That day u killed me mr arnav singh raizada

Im no longer khushi..she is dead.ur tored her'.u destroyed her'''''''''''but still I don't know why I cannot hate u'''''''''''''''''''''

Why I cannot hate him devimayaa

But please I don't want hi m inmy nor arohi's life

He snatch my happiness''''''..

I have only my arohi''''''''''''''.devimayya

Please'''devimayya

What will be devimayya decision

Gives arnav'''''''''''''''''''.a chance

The broken arnav

The crying khushi

And the sleeping arohi'''''''''''''''.

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this is my first ss
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Next day morning

Arnav woke up

He got ready

He want to talk to di he want to share

But felt no

I will give surprise to everyone .

Firs t I need to

He open the door to find aman lookin g at him

First time his boss is very much happy………………….

And a smile it is different

He gave a letter

And he drove.

It is near Mumbai……….a small apartment

His heart flinched…………………his wife the owner of raizada industries and fashion world

Crores of money.his wife and little daughter staying her e in this apartment………………………………………..

All his fault………………….his stupid mistake he believe that moron………….

For this………he stabbed his life.he cut her….he shattered her.

He destroyed her.

His thoughts broke up to hear a two tiny voice

One is his angel.

And another is a small boy her age…..

He looked at the boy…..

Arohi:im so sorry…………….our plan was flopped .please

Shut up amit one more word.im going to send u to the hell.

Arnav chuckled………………………..

Seeing his little daughter…..raizada blood same like him.

He remember his threaten to aman.

He looked at .amit.the little boy in fear

Just then he listened a voice his favourite voice

Are amit beta.tum dono yeha tayar nahiii huwa……………………..arohi.kya kar hi hay beta chalo andar chalo school ke liye late hora hii hy

Ajii kaha hay ammaa…………………….

Tum andar chalo

Aur haa kya phir se us s ladke to damkee nahii de rahe ho…………………….kya…..

No mama did I amit he gave a angry glare at amit

Amit no khushi aunty.

Where arohi turned him toback and said better.

And flew with her mom.

He smiled……………………..

After sometime khusi came out wearing a pale blue saree looking extremely gorgeous along with arohi in blue and white school uniform

He saw khushi took her scooty and arohi on her back.she drew back where arnav car followed.

She dropped arohi to the school giving her goodbye kiss.

And she drawn to her office……

She enter office everyone greeted her.

Some envy her because she holds good postion In the company she talks less.but works very hard…………….

She never discuss anything regarding her personal space

She greeted namita

Kya baat hay namita…………..

Teek hay khusi aur kaise hi hay tumaree………….gundi beti

Namita

Aur nahii kya pata hay mrs shukla phone kiy a that ere rajkumari ne warning di hay use……….aur uski bte ne uske baat nahii sunii is liye usko itna darayii ke who do din se so nahii pa raha hy

(she scared him to wits that the poor boy cannot sleep)

Pata nahii……………tout oh bahutshant hoo par iska gussa


(ur so silent and how can arohi so arrogant)

Khushi closed her eyes……………..yes indeed she knows where the anger comes from

Yes she cannot forget him as..the part…………………of her.trying to forget but everytime arohi presence reminds him

She worked on files.and some on fell onground…………………………

A photo of him fell down

She picked up and cried why I can not hate u……………….why.

The scene brough t tears……in arnav eyes

No khusi I will bring happiness in ur life what ever it takes…………………………

Let us meet…….arnav singh raizada mrs khusi singh raizada…………..

Everyone were held for meeting

She is working for a event management company

And there re got aa deal of a famous fashion show……………organized by a Multi national company

And karan singanina owner of tehcompany…………………………..informed all this is going to be avery big deal for their life time.

She got the information and she worked hard…………………….

On theother hand

Akash furious regarding the phone ccall

Why bhai is looking for this deal

This company is so small event management company and why heis giving such a big deal to them

What if every thing is fail.

She discussed with anjali.as anjali is helping in business after she lost her child…………………

They are worried……………

Notknowing the reason behind ASR decision……..

The reason is his life

The presentation Is going to start

Khusi felt some strange breeze the same thing happened five years back when..she used to meet him.

No………khusi u cannot look back

She made a quick decision.

Qand enter the conference hall.

Alla re seated

Karan.guys this is ,my pleasure to introduce the owner of a multi milliner company …………..and today presentation is going to be held by our own khusi.i request khusi to take over

Where khusi enterand without seei ng she spoke.

It is pleasure for us sir to be in our office we all hope we will standfor ur capabilities………………………………………

This is khusi Mehta………

And then he turned………………………..

World stopped…………………….

Khusi cannot belive her eyes

Its him

The same stubble.the same eyes but this time different……………..

The person who never left her dreams

The person who managed to change her path everytime.

The person she want to runaway.

The mighty lord governor of her

Mr ASR.arnav singh raizada

She is still lost in him

Not seeing that karan is calling her ……………………..repeatedly

She steadied her self……….. and make a dash to washroom to control her tears.

Arnav back to ASR.he don't want to loose………………………he know he lost the war.but he cannot leave chances..

He needed his life back

He want to hug her take her all the pains

But stood still.same like he used to be when first time met in luck now to the day of her engagement broken…to the day.whe n he used toinsult her …………brutally killed her with words……………..

He took a sharp breath………..

He hate the name ASR himself……………………….his soul dead………

Now it is breathing………………………………..

He cannot left it like that

He know this is coming

The time he com,e in front of her she will run away.she cannot stand him.

But he need to act fast……………………….

She decided …………….no..she cannot loose the battle .

Atleast for arohi……..she cannot let him to shatter her life once again

She never believe in love,relations.her own life is only her daughter

She made her hear t so rock……………………………….

She cannot let anyone in…………………….

She is heartbroken.and never give him to chance .

Yes ajji said is right I need to be strong for …………..arohi.

She ccame out………………..

He thougth some thing

Khusi came back and Karan worried and put a hand on her shoulder

Yeh happy…………everytime ……..she felt sad………………he used to cheer her up.

Theyu are friend s but never crossed………………………limits he remained to be good friend of her even his life time

Karan is well grown up man…………..….he always …………………..learn to struggle.

Ajji met him………………………..he treats ajji as his mother ……….

And khusi as sister.

He remembered the day when khushi brought

Even ajji made a decision that karan should move out as she doesnot want fuss and fur from .the colony people

He decided and always support khusi.

And his little girl friend aroho.theyd o lot of masti……….

Arnav were looking at him

He never felt jealousy for the first time on seeing a person.

Khusi……………….leaning on his shoulder

He remembered the attachment with his di everytime

Hesmiled.

And his di words..god will always help good people.

She is one of the lucky person………………….

They both com e inside

Khusi gave the presentation

He wondered how a tremble and stupid girl who can not speak English and always teases to be angreze babu.is speaking ina language in confidence

He saw her face

The pale blue saree.the eyes twinkle….his heart jumped the same eyes…………………………….sometime s mischief some times smile but there is nothing……………………………her hair tied in pony..her figure is same..and her small smile………………………………

She is agodess for him…yesb that is a reason he blessed in disguise that god given a chance to meet his wife and his littleangel.

Suddenly her phone ring

It is arohi.

Haa ajji………………

Aap chale jayee arohi ko pick up karne………………………mein jaldi ajoungi………ha karan bhai chod degaa……………………………..

Tension mat lena ajji……………………………..im fine

With that she cut of the phone.

Yes mr raizada

Arnav looked up the fac e the confidence

All the points are good but there is something which the contract conclusion is not properly executed we know ur not a compri mise person………………and to be straight wer are not

As we ar eequally ……………….entranging the business capabilities

We have right to do some amendments where it Is necessary……………………………..

And I think

Itsok mrs Mehta….u can put in ur presentation also

Khushi looked at him in shock.

She thougth that he never compromise in his business what ever happens

Now he is listeni ngto small company of hers

What is he uptop

Arnav smiled I know khusi u have either decided to leave the company or make me to leave the contract

Im well prepared

This time I never let u run away from me sweet heart

I will get u .i will get ur love

I will win u and arohi…..

I will take u as raizada bahu this time with full traditional and authority,with all my love…

He sit down in his desk and took,the photograph of khusi and arohi where he take from hiscamera on morning.

And kissed .and said.beta give some more time………………………………………..

And khusi……………..i love u……………………………………..

U always saw my anger my hatredness, my arrogance

But never saw the effection and love I had for u…………………………

U will se e new ASR and his love………………..

He made his car at the distant place

Where he saw ……khusi and arohi in jhola……………

He want to be them…………………………….

Near the stars

He looked up the stairs

Maa……………..apke poti pyarii hay na………………………………….

Gussa bilkul mera jaisa.

Mein ne galti kee hay maa…aur bagwaan ne ek aur mocha diya hay maa.mere galti sudharne kaa………………………………..

Jaanta hoo maa bahut mushkil hy…par maa.mein hosla nahii chodunga.mein use wapas paunga……………

Usko aur apne beti…ko who sab dunga jiska who haqdaar hay………………………….

Next few days

Hell for ASR

Khushi had made all kind of weird rules

He knows all that to irate him.but.he didn't budge.

May be he lost in crores not khusi……………………………

This is party of the sign of contract

All are waited

All the ladies and girls drooling over

But his eye s kept on door sipping his drink

Suddenly he saw

All the party males saw her

In alavishing dark green saree with elegant jewelleries and m ake up.looking extremely beautiful………………….

He is drinking n ot noticed a tug in his pant

Looked down to find his little angel throwing the same angry glare

Which thrown at the amit..

Oh boy.she is dam cute

Kya kar rahee hoo………………….

Kya……………..

Wahi mein ne dekha.tum mere amma ko kyon dekh rahe hoo………………………….

Bataoo

Dekho who mera amma hay.aur agar dubara dekha na………………………….i don't know what I do

Don't dare…

He gave a shy smile finding the resembles of him in daughter

Well this is going to be news

The little angel of his arohi singh raizada is giving warning to arnav singh raizada………………………………for not look at hiswife khushi singh raizada…………………………….

Suddenly his smile…………….left him saw khushi coming in the other direction.

She quickly dragged arohi with her to the karan place…………………………

After a long conversations…………….karan left khusi and arohi……………………….

And it is dark,…………………………..

And arohi is sleeping in khusi s shoulders

Ajji is went to her sister place

And she cannot left arohi in house so she brought her to the party……………….

Now it is late she is looking for taxi not noticing that some weird guys following her

Arnav institution kicked in.

He quickly.ran to his smu..

By the time he got .

He saw……………….arohi is khusi arms and one of guys are trying to hold her…………………………….

He got down and pushed the person to the ground………………………

As the force is more arohi also dragged and as she about tofall

Arnav put his arms and took her to his arms

Said khusi please sit in the car

No……the curt reply come from end

Please……khsui.with that he dragged her to the car.before placing arohi I n the back seat and tied the seat belt around her ……..

And went back to the guys punched them and knocked them to the ground.

He back to the car and start driving

Aap yeh kya rahe hay ghadi rok dijeye…………………

Hame.

He turned and gave a angry glare.

And stopped the car infront of apartment.

Without a word he took arohi in his arms….

And start walking,,,,,,

She turned……………………………

Before she could say anything he said I can lift u and carryu also want to do or walk by urself

She surprised and went back to the appartmetn

She opent eh door

He enter and she switch on the lights

The room is bright…………….a corner idiol of devimayaa………………….

And…………….he quickly walked in the room to find the room with pink walls and baby picutes of cartoons.

And aphotograph of khusi and arohi.smiling and posing a the camera………………………………….

Hisheart flinched not finding his photo in any of themn

He touched the blanket……………………………….

Where khusi is standing a t the door arms crossed waiting for his exit

Khushu,

Mr raizada……………………thanks for urhelp now u can leave

Khushi I know ur very angry on me………………………………………..

Why I need to be angry on u mr raizada……………………………

Im no way any relate to u

Khusi arohi mere betio

She surprised that how he got the information regarding arohi.

Oh……

What a foolshe is

She thought s it was mere a coincidence,

No it is planned.everytime he plans everything

He got information regarding arohi.he got this deal to be done

And give her pain by taking her soul life with him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Arohi……………….

So…………

Arohi apke beti nahii hay

Yaad hoga mr raizada u told me im a bloody w……..e so.may be

Stop it khusi.i know she is my daughter and I don't need proof for that I want I can go for a DNA test..also………….

DNA test and claims to be ur daughter……………………….and takes away from u……and ur pride.

She broke down.and shut down tears

I cannot belive u mr raizada ……..cannot trust u………….

And if u really want to have a legal fight mr raizada .

I cando anything for my daughter happiness to get …………………..her back,.even im ready to give my life…………and ……………………………………………she sobbed badly.finding her

Its ok mr raizada im ready for everything,,,,,,,

U feel u can hurt me break me a buse me…….shatter my dreams shatter my life

Im ready mr raizada im no longer terrified tremble girl………………………….mr raizada

Im amother……………………….

Don't forget that

Now leave mr raizada………………….

She looked at the broken knuckles…………………………….

But ignored and shut the door and fallen on ground

He came back to the hotel

His cell rang

Chote

di……………………

chote…………………………………………

di I found her

…………………………..

Kya …choti..hum sab abhi Mumbai arahe hay……………………………………….

With that she stromed into nani room.to break the news

The screen frozes on

Broken ASR

Crying khusi

And sleeping arohi……………………………

Next part updated soon

I know this is bitter emotional

But u knows after sorroe

If u break any person to some extent cannot retain back……

Same here

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Guys b efore the story there are some flashbacks''''''''.

Anjali :closed her ears''''

She want to die humiliate'''..

She want herself to burry the ground

She didn't know how long she waited inside the shower

Everyone were calling her

She got the biggest shock'''''

Why everytime ur the victim.

She remembered 19 yrs girls'''''.getting ready in bridal lehenga.

Laughing around a 14 yrs boy making fun of her

She is smiling at her.

She is so happy'..dream of wedding''''''''''''..

Suddenly lot of hurls and sounds.

The sound of breaking something

Terrible voices

And a painful voice

I cannot live without her

Im sorry

With the door opened the lady came out.runng'.

Not giving a glance to the girl in bride lehenga''

Nor the boy stopped laughing'''''..lookingat her in shock

Then a huge sound.

The scream of lady''''''''''''

And the cry of both'''''..

And she hugged the 14 yr boy.with fear'''''''''''.

Next few hours shekeep on holding the boy.

But turn to find the boy is not there

This is first time she saw the boy coming with no smile'''''.

Broken out

After few days she got news that .the person for the disaster also left the world''''''''..

The lady is sunaina singania''''''

And the husband is rishab singania.

The girl looked''at the boy''''..

With in few days

Another strom

No u cannot do this to us

Yes we can do u r father had wrote the property on our name

Now u both get out

Chachaa jii

The girl is thrown out limping.along with the 14 yr old boy

She turn to hold the hand

And turned to find the 14 yr old boy

No smile in stead anger took place somemoret hing in his eyes

Pain,anger,stubbornness.

She never known this boy

She k nows only he is sweet playing pranks'''..getting anger for small things pampered by her mother''''''''.naughty things

That day she realized that the small boy had turnd tobe different person

Not her chote but.to arnav,.

Arnav sinh raizada.

After few years

She fou nd herself accquinted with her nani.mami and new family

Wealth came down.takign carebyt he 14 yrs to 24 yrs

The boy made htheworldfall on his feet''''''''

Till the time she met him'..

The person''''whom she felt is a dream.

Whom she felt without him there is no life

Became so important next to her chote'''''''

The person happiness is more for her

She believed him.

The worst mistake in her life

Shyam manohar jha

The person whose life is mingled with her

Not in her wild dreams thought that person will destroy a innocent you ng girl life''.

The girl

Yes.she is the one which brought the light in RM''''.

She is the girl which made his arrogant stubborn arnav singh raizada her chote to''''.smile'.that she never saw in years

She brought the miracle.

She brought the life

But her husband including her brother

Trashed th e innocence of her

Slowly took away her happiness''''

Her dreams vanished

She lost thehope

She fell on ground'''''''''and fall into the darkness

After so me days

She got that she lost the life

Inside her

Along .

No she need to live for her chote

She cannot be break

He tookcare of her all these days

Now this is her turn.

But suddenly after so many years his voice is the sme thing

Lost in years back

He remembered the 14yr old boy lost his parents

Is the same boy

She is mother if he needs her she willb e there''''''''.

Yes chote

Anjali singh raizada.yes no longer.

Inside her humanity lived even though she punished him in jailbut'.she helped his poor family

Only sake of humanity'''

She looked around the windows of their private jet

Looked around for payal and akash along with jatin

Nani want to come but she stopped''''''''''.

If the information regarding khusi then only one person she can talk with

And she is elder siste r of her

She saw the brave person in front of her

She is indeed a blessing

She maintained a lovely bahu profile inspite torments of her mother in law

Taking good care of her and nani.

Akaksh and jatin the life of their happiness

But excluding one person.

Yes she is indeed right she cannot forgive him.

Because of him and her family

She lost the most precious thing in her life

Her sister life

She is like her

She understood the pain gone through by khusi'''''''''''.

She winced.

No hope everything is fine.

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago

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