SS-Mrs &Mr ASR-Until Death does us apart P7 PG 84

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Thank you for killing me 😭

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prerna salian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Superb update :) are u really planning to end it here !! Plzz dnt :(

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Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

I agree with your ending totally, but i also believe time is a great healer and with time (and probably lots of it in this case) they will eventually build their relationship. But its true that this is a long road and Khushi must leave in order to heal her heart and soul.

Many thanks for PM.

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Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: anjs
nice update...but then didnt understand the title

the title is a sarcastic one. arnav turned marriage into a farce. so the original tagline of marriage UNTIL DEATH DOES US APART also becomes a farce. A slap literally on his face. thats y intentionally i chose that title.

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

THE END WAS TOO ABRUPT, SA D AND TRAGIC

KHUSHI JUST LEFT WITH ALL THE KNOTS UNTIED

THIS SS SHOULD HAVE A SEQUEL TO IT

KHUSHI WAS RIGHT TO HAVE LEFT AS IT WAS TOO SOON TO START AFRESH

THEY BOTH NEED TIME TO LOOK AT ALL THAT HAS OCURRED

HOPE YOU CAN START AFRESH FROM SOME POINT IN THE FUTURE

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Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: punam2712
THE END WAS TOO ABRUPT, SA D AND TRAGIC
KHUSHI JUST LEFT WITH ALL THE KNOTS UNTIED
THIS SS SHOULD HAVE A SEQUEL TO IT
KHUSHI WAS RIGHT TO HAVE LEFT AS IT WAS TOO SOON TO START AFRESH
THEY BOTH NEED TIME TO LOOK AT ALL THAT HAS OCURRED

HOPE YOU CAN START AFRESH FROM SOME POINT IN THE FUTURE

hey punam i know u feel the end is abrupt but if u notice in the prev chap Kushi clearly says that though she FORGIVES him it may nt b possible 2 FORGET wat he did. the entire story was progressing towards this end only. even in the end kushi makes it v clear that she loves him & she knows that he loves her as well. But he dint trust her & so now kushi also finds it difficult to trust him. ll he make this mistake again. that nagging doubt ll always b in her mind.

anyway as mentioned in my author's note this SS is over with chapter 7. but i do ve something in mind. but cant promise that it ll b happy or that ARHI ll get back together.

for now i am leaving it open 2 the readers 😊

Edited by Angels11 - 13 years ago

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Very Sad :( I Feel Like Crying Man 🥺

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

its a tragic end but it is well written and amazing part...its totally unexpected...But i loved it...

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Raj

@GillRK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Being married I totally agree with you trust is the foundation of any relationship esp between a husband and wife!!!! I'm glad that u made khushis character strong!!!! But I do hope they get 2geda lol