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Posted: 13 years ago
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VERY NICE UPDATE !! DO CONTINUE SOON!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATING !!!!
ANY ONE THEREEE ???????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yup me
waitin eagerly
update soon...
and u promised to give update for both of ur ffs
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you soo much for your lovely comments 😃😃
Part 44

The next day geet woke up with the constant ringing of the phone .. What the heck she thought.. she had disconnected the call 3 times but now whoever it was was annoying her and would get a piece of her mind so without seeing the name or number she started cursing ..

Ullu kay pathay .. Gadhaay .. Khotayy .. Sharam nahi ati logoon ko subha subha call kar kay tang kartay hoo .. Tang karna he hota hai tou raat main kiya karoo naa subha subha neend kyun kharaab kartay hoo .. pata hai main soo rahi thi .. aur tumhain kya ye nahi pata kay jab call kattay hain matlab call mat kiya karoo .. aab kuch boo kyun nahi rahay hoo ??

[ullu kay pathay .. donkey .. idiot ..Don't you have any shame that you are calling people this early In the morning and teasing them ? If you want to tease do it and night why to spoil my morning sleep ? I was sleeping ..And don't you know when we cut the call it means that the person doesn't want to talk so you are not supposed to call ..Now why the hell are you silent ??? Speak up !!!!]

Tum chup karoo gee tou main boloon gaa na came an angry voice and she immediately jumped out of her bed recognizing the voice too well ..

[If you shut up then only will I get a chance to speak ]

Maaan Aap ? she answered shocked and her eyes wide opened

Maan who was sitting on the breakfast table trying to call geet for the last 10 minutes informing her that there was an important meeting today .. so he called and she cut the call .. totally irritated he kept the phone on loud speaker and thought to have breakfast too but boy what a mistake he had done because when geet picked the phone up she just kept on blabbering shocking maan and the other two sitting on the table not before making them go in their fits of laughter .. Yes Vicky and dadi were shocked too see geet abusing maan and more than that her calling him Maan hmmm fishy fishy she thought ..But couldn't help and adore her choice yes geet was perfect in every sense .. her thoughts were broken when she heard ..

Haan main .. Maan singh khurana he spoke with attitude ..

Sorry Maan .. I am very very very very sorry .. sach main sorry maan wo kya haina I was sleeping and aap ne meri neend disturb kar di .. Waisay why am I sorry ? sorry tou aapko kehna chaeyay na .. sharam nahi atii subha subha call kar kay larkiyoon ko chertay huway ?

[Sorry Maan .. I am very very very very sorry .. Really verry sorry .. Actually I was sleeping and you disturbed my sleep .. By the way why am I sorry ? you should be sorry .. Don't you have any shame that you are calling early in the morning and easing girls ?]

WHAT ? GEEETTT 😡😡

Geeettt nahi geet maan .. G with double e and a single t .. G .. E .. E .. T geet . and smiled but then she heard some giggles from behind and she asked .. Maan aap has rahay hoo .[Maan are you laughing? ]

but then slapped her forehead and muttered main bhi na pagal ho .. haina baba jee aab Maan singh khurrana and hasay hahahah joke of the century ..

she didn't know that the phone was on speaker and everyone could hear her talking and murmuring to her baba jee ..

Khair Maan aab bol bhi dee jiyaay aap ne kyun call ki .. meri beauty sleep tou saree disturb he ho gae hai ..

[Anyways now maan please tell me why did you call? My beauty sleep in all disturbed]

Ms geet handa he said sternly .. agar aap office 30 minutes main nahi poohanchi tou aapki kal se beauty sleep disturb nahi ho gee ..

[Ms geet handa .. If you don't reach office within 30 minutes then from tomorrow you beauty sleep will not be disturbed from tomorrow]

Kyun sir ? she wondered

Because you will be fired he said and smirked ..

WHAT ? fff fired ?? she made a baby face

Not fff fired .. It's fired F .. i .. r.. e.. d .. FIRED and smirked
Ye kya baat huwee ?? She pouted
Ye tou tumhain mujain galiyaan deenay se pehlay soochna chaeyay tha na ..

[This you should have thought before abusing me]

Sir wo aap kay liay nahi thi ..

[Sir that was not for you]

Acha ? he asked amused
Tou kis kay liay thi? [Really ? Then who ?]
Wo .. wo .. haan Vicky kay liay ..

Kya meray liyaayy ? Vicky butt in an spoke while geet bit her tounge ..

V..vicky tu ?

Haan geet bolo meray liay thi ?

Haan haan vicky please bacha lay naa .. Tum tou jantay ho na apnay bhai ko Mr khadus singh khurana .. agar Hitler jee ko pata chal gaya kay ye unko dee hain maine tou wo tou mujhain kacha khaa jaeen gay na baba na ..

[Yes Vicky please save me na .. You know your brother too well he is a khadus singh khurana and if this hitler gets to know that I was abusing him he will just eat me up raw .. no no please save me ..]

Par geet main .. Vicky played along knowing very well maan could hear it as the phone was on the speaker and he could see maan seething in anger ..

Haan Vicky just shut up .. agar tumne meri help nahi kin a tou aaj jo chamak chaloo aa rahi hai na usse tou tu bhool he jaa phir ..

[Yes vicky you and just shut up if you don't help me then the item girl that is coming to meet you today then just forget her]

Vicky gulped knowing where the conversation was leading to ..

Haan haan geet theek hai okay byee ..

Good and smirked aab maan ko phone do ..

Maan hmm he said and naughtily winked and maan while geet bushed and stammered .

Maan sir I mean .. and felt all shy shy while dadi smiled ..

Maan said hello and she started off .,.

Maan .. Sir .. deekhaa maine Vicky ko he kaha tha you don't worry aab main na office aatii hoon okay ?

Haan geet okay .. Waisay bhi now you have 25 minutes left and if you don't reach in time then … and cut the call before she could day anything and then he burst into laughter imagining geet's face and what he would do with her in office leaving Vicky and dadi shocked

Kya huwa maan betay ? dadi asked acting all innocent ..

Hahah dadi geet .. geet .. uski shakal deekhnay wali ho gee .. [Her face would be worth watching] That pout she does when she is angry or sad she looks soo cute I feel like eating her up and then he immediately shut up realizing what all he was blabbering .. he looked up to see dadi grinning like a fool and urghh yes he spoke a little too much .. He cleared his throat and said ..

Dadi main chaltay hoon
and practically ran from there again unlike Maan singh khurana .. Dadi and Vicky laughed while dadi was so highly satisfied .. she somewhere knew that maan is changing and only geet can change him ..

HANDA MANSION

There was a chaos all over the house geet screaming on everyone for her clothes to be ready and getting irritated repeating again and again that she had to reach in 25 minutes or her boss would fire her .. Ranbir chuckled and asked what happened and she narrated the whole story making everyone laugh .. she made a cute pout and everyone was quiet .. She ran from the house with her shoes in one hand and sandwich in the other while sitting in the car just to reach in time and screaming at the driver to drive fast ..

Just as they reached KC building she jumped out of the car and began running inside cursing Maan and then her stupid idiotic big mouth for landing her in such a trouble ..

Kal tou itnay romantic ho rahay thay aur aab subha hotay he back ko Mr hitler singh .. huh kabhi nahi sudhr saktay ..

And she barged in the cabin ..

You are 5 minutes late he said and then walked pass her .. With each step he took forward she went backward .. he pinned her to the door and looked it with the other free hand and spoke ..

It's time for punishment Miss handa and don't expect an easy one after all I am Hitler singh khurana and oh Khadus too na and gave her a deadly smirk and she realized he had heard her calling him this .. she gulped her saliva and made a terrified baby face ..
So how was it ??
Precap : Chaloo My morning kiss ..
WHAT ?
Naima !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
AWESOME
LOVED IT
GEET IS SO CUTE
MAAN IS VERY NAUGHTY
WAITING FOR PRECAPE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
wow!that was so cute..
Maan wanted to talk to her sleeping beauty and geet being the disaster showered him with ghaliyas..
Geet s so cute..
Maan really said dose words in front of daadi and vicky..!
ab msk ka attitude un par bhi nahi chalega..
Toh she has to bear his sweet punishment...
haye..😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
mind blowing

update next part soon

thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
naima wat a rocking update
it was crazy and funny
loved it
adorable geet and maan
too cute couple ...
morning kiss?????? precap cant wait cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
AWESOME
LOVED IT
GEET IS SO CUTE
MAAN IS VERY NAUGHTY
WAITING FOR PRECAPE
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute and funny update
continue soon

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