OS: Smitten with Kitten (Arhi, the morning after)

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

cuteness... 😳

luvvd it...👏

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Ruchi

@ruchs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

you write really well...👏

loved their conversation..😆.

this OS brought a smile on my face..😃..

thank you...😳

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Aww wat a nyc way 2 wake up...😍

i wish der every morning would b lyk dis..😉☺️

dat was lovely Sweets...🤗

thnks 4 da PM n sry 4 commntin so late..😳

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

brilliant x loved it x😆

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Raj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Please don't stop writing sorry I'm slowly reading ur OS one by one it's half 12 in the morning here and instead of sleeping I'm reading ur OS's cos I cant stop!!!! Can't wait for romantic scenes like this to be aired on tv :) I know il be waiting a very long time but at least I got ur OS's hey ;) thank you :D

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

I just read all of the Poolside and then this... Too cute...

Now I will have sweet dreams thanks to your work...

Thank you! Great writting! 👏

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

it was sooo nice...hope dis had hapened in the show but all we get is da rona dhona...it was lovely n pliz do continue

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

I have to admit I have never had so many likes. Very happy. And this was the OS I spent the least time on!

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Rita

@Rita.C

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

hi Mary
I always love your work. I am a little technically challenged and a bit time challenged so dont get to read it all at one go hence the delay but I love it...

its beautifully written and most importantly is true to the characters. For me at least, its v frustrating when people write great stories using their names but the characters dont gell with who they are in the serial. you might as well have some different names...

your was wonderful to read.

one suggestion, you might want to elaborate on the scenery and the ambience and the looks they give each other. in other words more details with limited adjective.

I am giving free advice because I love your writing and I think you can be one of the best writers possible because you have what it takes.. hope it was ok to say all this ..

keep writing..

Edited by Rita.C - 13 years ago