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Thank u so much for all your likes and comments! I'm half way through the next part but stuck with a writer's block, so m sorry, wont be able to update today. Will update as soon as the writer's block is cleared.

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Hey everyone!

I'm so sorry to have kept u waiting for almost a month for this part! Hope u guys will forgive me..

Part 5

Khushi(stunned): Kya kaha aapne?Aapko.. kya.. ho gaya.. hai?

Arnav(cups her face): Mujhe.. apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai.I'm really sorry,love..

He kisses her forehead and hugs her,burrying his face in her shoulder.

Khushi(realizes that he's crying): Arnavji...? Aap.. Humari.. taraf dekhiye..

Yes,she wanted him to repent,wanted him to suffer,badly wanted him to realize his fault and appologize to her.But she never expected him to cry.

His tears always hit her like lightning. She could never bare to see his eyes wet.

It was getting all the more tough for her this time,as she couldnt even hug him properly.

She looks at her soaplather laden hands helplessly.

Khushi:Arnavji... apneaap ko sambhaaliye. Hum.. humein haath dhone dijiye..

Arnav swallows hard and leaves her,wiping his tears.

As soon as she washes and dries her hands,she pulls Arnav in an embrace- a warm,soothing embrace.

She gently caresses the back of his head with one hand and lets the other caress his back.

Khushi(trying to lighten the tense situation): Humein pata tha ki humare Arnavji ko apni galti ka ehsaas aaj hi ho jayega! Tabhi toh humne unke liye unki favourite,bina shakkar ki, chawal ki kheer banayi hai! Kyun Arnavji,hamare haathon se chakh kar nahi batayenge ki kheer kaisi bani hai?

Arnav(realizes what shes trying to do): Of course!

He breaks away from the hug and leans his face towards Khushi.

Arnav(with a faint smile): Mujhse pehle kisi aur ko chakhayi toh nahi na?

Khushi(wiping his tears): Kisi aur ne kya,humne bhi nahi chakhi! Rukiye,hum fridge se nikal kar late hain.

Arnav smiles at her.

Khushi(feeding him a spoonful of Kheer): Aaj buaji k kehne par humne is me kesar nahi dali. Woh.. unhe achchi nahi lagti naa,isiliye...

Arnav:Phir bhi bahut achchi bani hai!

Khushi notices a rice grain stuck to the corner of his lips and licks it.

Khushi: Hmmm... sach me,bahut achchi hai!

Arnav(shocked):Khushi,have u lost it?Tumhe pata hai na,hum Raizada house me nahi hai,tumhari amma k ghar me hai?Aur thodi der pehle buaji ne humein.. dekh liya tha!

Khushi(feeding him another spoon): Humein sab pata hai!Aap kheer khaiyye,aur kisi cheez ki chinta mat kariye!

After feeding him an entire bowl of kheer..

Khushi: Arnavji, ab humse aapse jo baat karni hai,aur jo baat apse sunni hai,woh hum yahan nahi kar sakte. Aap gaadi ki chaabi le aaiye. Aur hum buaji aur amma se baat kar kar aate hain.

Arnav nods and leaves.

Khushi tells buaji n Garima that she wants to go with Arnav for a long drive.

Garima: Khusi, ee ka bachpana karat rahi hau?Samay dekho jara! 11 baje se oopar ho gaye hai. Aur Arnav bitwa sara din daftar ma kaam kar k thake haare laute hain. Tum unko aaram karne do ,bitiya. Kaahe unhe paresan kar rahi hau?

Buaji: Jaaye do,Garima! Khuli hawa maa jayenge,toh Arnav babua ki thakaan bhi door hui jayegi! Jao Sanka devi, hum badam doodh khudai bana lenge.

Khushi nods and turns to go,when..

Buaji: Aur suno Titaliya, tala-chaabi aapan saath leyi ke jai hau.Piche k darbajja pe tala laga dena. Jaun tumlog lautoge, tau Sasi babua ki neend kharaab nahi hogi.

Khushi(shocked,not expecting t from Buaji): Ji.. ji buaji.

Buaji smiles at her.

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In the car..

Khushi: Bas Arnavji,yaaheen rok dijiye. Yeh gali thodi a.. sunsaan hai. Toh yahan koi humein disturb nahi karega.

Arnav smiles inwardly at what Khushi said.

Arnav(thinks):n Aww.. my innocent love! Did u even realize what u said has a double "naughty" meaning?

Khushi: Kahan kho gaye aap?Gaadi band kar dijiye.

Arnav: Y.. yaa!Khushi,peechhe aao.

Khushi:Kyun?

He doesnt reply. He gets off the driver's seat himself and sits on the backseat.

Khushi comes to the backseat from the space between the driver's seat and the passenger's seat.

In the process,she steps on her dupatta and lands straight in Arnav's arms.

Arnav: Woah! Khushi,careful!Lagi toh nahi?

Khushi: Nahi..

She gets up and sits beside Arnav.

Khushi: Bataiyye,kya kehna hai aapko?Kaise hua aapko aapki galti ka ehsaas?

Arnav: Woh.. Khushi.. I hav to admit, mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas ho raha tha,par.. main apne thoughts par act nahi kar raha tha. Phir.. di ka phone aaya aur.. unhone mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki main kahan galat hoon.Aur uski galti ko sudharne k liye,mujhe kya karna chahiye.

Khushi(surprised): Di ka phone?Par di ne toh humein bhi phone kiya tha?Tab toh woh keh rahi thi ki unki aapse baat nahi hui,kyunki aapka phone nahi lag raha tha..

Arnav:I know Khushi.. Di ne mujhe bataya ki unki tumse baat hui.Waise.. kya kaha din ne tumhe?

*Flashback*

Buaji: Aye Parmeswari,utho,dekho Anjali bitiya ka phunwa aaya hai..

Khushi opens her eyes and snatches her cellphone from buaji's hands.

Khushi: Di..! Kaisi hain aap?Aapka pair toh theek hai naa?

Anjali: Chhoti,hum bilkul theek hai!Hamara pair bhi ab theek hai. Humein zara bhi dard nahi hai!Aap bilkul chinta mat kariye!

Khushi(relieved): Devi Maiyya ka shukar hai!(excited)Achcha bataiyye,aaj kya hua?Aapko.. Rakshit ji kaise lage?

Anjali(blushes): Ha.. woh.. bahut achchhe hain! Nani ko bhi bahut pasand aaye.Nani toh unki tareef karte nahi thak rahi thi!

Khushi(teasing): Di,naniji ki baat chhodiye. Bataiyye aapko Rakshitji pasand aaye ya nahi?

Anjali:Hmm..

Khushi: Areh wah!Aur.. unhone aapse kuch kaha ki unke man me kya hain?

Anjali:Nahi.. Unhone kuch kaha toh nahi,par.. humein lagta hain ki unki bhi.. haan hogi!

Khushi(over the moon): Sach!? Waah di! Bahut bahut badhai ho! Yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai!

*Flashback ends*

Arnav(too happy): Seriously!? Oh damn! Maine di se is baare me poochha hi nahi,main apni hi baaton me itna uljha tha ki unse poochna toh bhool hi gaya ki jis kaam se woh log Lucknow gaye the,woh hua ya nahi!

Khushi: Waise,ab tak pura kam bana nahi hai.Di ne kaha,Rakshitji k ghar se jawab aana baaki hai..

*Flashback 2*

Anjali: Chhoti,relax!Abhi tak unka jawab nahi aaya hai!Woh toh kal subha hi aayega!

Khushi: Kal toh aa hi jayega naa! Hum aapke liye bahut khushi hain,di! Agar Rakshitji ne rishte k liye haan keh di toh kal hum apne haathon se aapko jilebi khilakar aapka swagat karenge!

Anjali(sounding happy): Aapke moonh me ghee,shakkar aur dher saari jalebiyan!Achcha bataiyye,Chhotey kahan hain? Hum kabse unka phone laga rahe hain,par mil hi nahi raha.

Khushi(her smile vanishes): Woh.. meeting me honge di..

Arnav: Chhotey bhi naa! Badi mushqil se,aap dono k baad pehli baar,aapko suhana mauka mila tha-poora din ek doosre k saath,ghar par sukoon se bitane ka! Par unhone meeting k chakkar me woh mauka gava diya! Ghar par koi bhi nahi hai. Aplogon ko ek dusre k saath waqt bitane ka aisa mauka na jaane phir kab milega!? Chhotey bhi naa!

*Flasback 2 ends*

Arnav folds his arms across his chest.

Arnav: Kya tumne unhe bataya ki mauka kisne gavaya?

Khushi(sad): Nahi. Par,jaise hi unhone yeh kaha,hume is baat ka ehsaas zaroor ho gaya ki humne kitna achchha mauka apne haathon se jaane diya!..

She places her head on his shoulder.

Arnav(sighs and places his hand on her head): Leave it.Jo hua so hua.Aur ,di ne aur kya kaha?

Khushi:Bas,kuch nahi. Yeh hi keh rahi thi ki unhone ghar par phone kiya toh HPji ne unhe bataya ki hum amma k yahan aaye hain. Phir naniji aur jiji se humari baat karayi.

Arnav: Hmm..

Khushi(lifts her head):Aapse unki kya baat hui?

Arnav closes his eyes in pain for a second,before opening them and looking at Khushi,with guilt.

Precap: Anjali:Chhotey! Yeh zor zabardasti karna,kalhai marodh dena,baahein jakad lena,yeh sab kya achcha lagta hai?Chhoti ko kitna dard hota hoga.

Arnav:Di.. main.. jaankar nahi karta,mujhse gusse me ho jaata hai.

Anjali(swallows hard):Chhotey,sochiye, agar.. agar Shyam ne kabhi hamare saath aisa kiya hota, toh humein kaisa lagta,aapko kaisa lagta?

Arnav(almost yells):Di...!

Translation in post below.

Likes and comments always appreciated.

Edited by Smita.M - 12 years ago

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Smita

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Here's the translation for Part 5:

Khushi(stunned): What did u say? What.. hav.. u.. realized?

Arnav(cups her face): I.. I have realized my mistake.I'm really sorry,love!..

He kisses her forehead and hugs her,burrying his face in her shoulder.

Khushi(realizes that he's crying): Arnavji...? U... plz.. look at me..

Yes,she wanted him to repent,wanted him to suffer,badly wanted him to realize his fault and appologize to her.But she never expected him to cry.

His tears always hit her like lightning. She could never bear to see his eyes wet.

It was getting all the more tough for her this time,as she couldnt even hug him properly.

She looks at her soaplather laden hands helplessly.

Khushi:Arnavji... plz control urself. Let me.. let me wash my hands.

Arnav swallows hard and leaves her,wiping his tears.

As soon as she washes and dries her hands,she pulls Arnav in an embrace- a warm,soothing embrace.

She gently caresses the back of his head with one hand and lets the other caress his back.

Khushi(trying to lighten the tensed situation): I so knew that my Arnavji will realize his mistake today itself!Thats y I made his favourite,sugarfree rice pudding for him! Arnavji,wont u taste the rice pudding from my hands n tell me how it is?

Arnav(realizes what shes trying to do): Of course!

He breaks away from the hug and leans his face towards Khushi.

Arnav(with a faint smile): I hope u havent allowed anyone else to taste it before me?

Khushi(wiping his tears):Forget about anyone else,I myself havent tasted it either!Wait,I'll get it from the fridge.

Arnav smiles at her.

Khushi(feeding him a spoonful of Kheer): Today I made it without saffron,as per buaji's wishes.Woh.. she doesnt like it,thats y..

Arnav: Still its very yummy!

Khushi notices a rice grain stuck to the corner of his lips and licks it.

Khushi:Hmmm... Really,its verrryyy yummy!

Arnav(shocked): Khushi,have u lost it?U do realize,dont u,that v r not at Raizada House,but at ur amma's place?Buaji just saw... both of us.. sometime back!

Khushi(feeding him another spoon): I know everything!U just relish the rice pudding,dont worry about anything else!

After feeding him an entire bowl of kheer..

Khushi: Arnavji, now what I need to tell u and what I need to hear from u,cannot be said and heard over here.Plz get the car keys,meanwhile I'll talk to buaji and amma.

Arnav nods and leaves.

Khushi tells buaji n Garima that she wants to go with Arnav for a long drive.

Garima: Khusi, why r behaving childishly?Just look at the time. Its past 11 pm. Arnav bitwa is surely tired after a hard day at work.So let him rest,dear. Y r u bothering him?

Buaji: Let her go,Garima.Besides,Arnav babua needs some fresh air to get rid of his tiredness!Go Sanka devi. I'll make the almond milk myself.

Khushi nods and turns to go,when..

Buaji: And listen Titaliya,take the lock and key with u.Lock the backdoor before u leave. That way Shashi babua's sleep wont be disturbed when u come back.

Khushi(shocked,not expecting t from Buaji): O... ok buaji.

Buaji smiles at her.

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In the car..

Khushi:Arnavji,stop the car here. This alley is a.. bit lonely. So no one will disturb us.

Arnav smiles inwardly at what Khushi said.

Arnav(thinks): Aww.. my innocent love! Did u even realize what u said has a double "naughty" meaning?

Khushi: Where r u lost?Stop the car..

Arnav: Y.. yaa!Khushi,come to the backseat.

Khushi:Y?

He doesnt reply. He gets off the driver's seat himself and sits on the backseat.

Khushi comes to the backseat from the space between the driver's seat and the passenger's seat.

In the process,she steps on her dupatta and lands straight in Arnav's arms.

Arnav: Woah! Khushi,careful!Hope u r not hurt?

Khushi: No.

She gets up and sits beside Arnav.

Khushi: Tell me,what do u have to say?How did u realize ur mistake?

Arnav: Actually.. Khushi,I hav to admit, yes,I did realize my mistake,but I never acted upon my thoughts. Then.. di called me and she made me realize how wrong I was and what I should do to rectify my mistakes.

Khushi(surprised): Di called u?But she'd called me as well.That time she told me that she couldnt talk to u as ur phone was busy..

Arnav: I know Khushi.. Di told me she had a chat with u.BTW,what did she say?

*Flashback*

Buaji:Aye Parmeswari,wake up!Anjali bitiya's on the line..

Khushi opens her eyes and snatches her cellphone from buaji's hands.

Khushi: Di..! How r u?Ur foot is better,I hope..

Anjali:Chhoti,I am absolutely fine!My foot is ok now. there's no pain at all!U dont worry!

Khushi(relieved):Thanks to Devi Maiyya!!(excited)Now tell me,what happened today?How did u find Rakshitji?

Anjali(blushes): Ya.. he's very nice.Nani likes him as well.Nani couldnt stop praising him!

Khushi(teasing): Di,forget about naniji.Do u like Rakshitji or not?

Anjali:Hmm..

Khushi: Wow!And.. did he tell u what was in his mind?

Anjali:No... he didnt say anything,but.. I.. think its a yes from him as well!

Khushi(over the moon):Really!?Wow di,congrats! This is sucha good news!

*Flashback ends*

Arnav(too happy): Seriously!? Oh damn!I never asked di about it.I was so lost in telling her about my problems that I forgot to ask her whether the work for which she's in Lucknow was done or not?

Khushi: Well,the work is not completely done yet.Di said,Rakshitji's family is yet to reply.

*Flashback 2*

Anjali: Chhoti,relax!He hasnt replied yet! His reply will come tomrw morning only!

Khushi: 2mrw will b here soon,di!I'm so.. happy 4 u,di! If Rakshitji approves the alliance,then 2mrw I'll welcome u home by feeding u jilebis.

Anjali(sounds happy): May u get to eat sugar,ghee and loads of jalebis!(hindi saying)Now tell me where is Chhotey?I'm trying to call him since morning,but his phone is unavailable..

Khushi(her smile vanishes): He.. he's busy in his meetings,di..

Anjali: Chhotey.. what I do with him?! With sucha lot of difficulty,for the first time after ur wedding,the two of u got the golden chance to spend the whole day alone peacefully at home! But he lost the chance all thanks to his meeting!There's n0one at home! God alone knows when u'll get sucha golden chance in future?Chhotey is so..

*Flasback 2 ends*

Arnav folds his arms across his chest.

Arnav: Did u tell him bcoz of whom we lost the golden chance?

Khushi(sad): No.But,no sooner did she say this than I realized what a lovely chance we lost,all thanks to me!

She places her head on his shoulder.

Arnav(sighs and places his hand on her head):Leave it. Let bygones be bygones.And,what else did di say?

Khushi: Nothing much.She said she had called at home,HPji told her m at amma's place.Then she gave the phone to naniji and jiji.

Arnav: Hmm..

Khushi(lifts her head): What did she tell u?

Arnav closes his eyes in pain for a second,before opening them and looking at Khushi,with guilt.

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Precap: Anjali:Chhotey! Whats wid u manhandling her? Twisting her wrist,gripping her arms tightly,does all this speak good of u?It must b so.. painful for Chhoti!

Arnav:Di.. I.. I dont do it purposely.. it just happens when m angry!

Anjali(swallows hard):Chhotey,just think about it.. had.. had Shyam ever done this to me,what would I hav felt,what would u hav felt?Tell me..

Arnav(almost yells):Di...!

Kindly ignore typos n mistakes.

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Edited by Smita.M - 12 years ago