IPKKND FF: Masquerade [Chapter 18] Updated 10 Sept

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

loved the update...pheww they escaped the men...and veer and lalit helped them...it ws short but sweet :)
thanks for pm

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

VEEERRR!!! You and your strange awkward manners saved our couple. Woohoo. Now about that gash on Khushi's shoulder and Arnav's fingers lingering on her shoulder longer than necessary. Hmmm, fireworks?!!!?!

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darkninja

@darkninja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

awesome update and no ur not a lousy writer

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#754

Sh0rt n sweet...And umm Arnav...Y0u are in lurrrvvveee h0n!!! :D :D :D

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Loved the update...written well...Thanks for the PM

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

Seems like the dynamics of Arnav and Khushi's relationship is about to change!

Continue soon :)

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asdfjkl

@asdfjkl

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

Oh, so Veer isn't her brother - she just looks like his sister. My heart fell slightly in love with him when he helped them and he responded to Khushi's "Why?" with "I loved my sister a lot"

The chapter was so exciting to see how they were getting away from the shooters. But then you threw in some romance/sexual tension with the last scene too. I'm pretty sure their relationship is definitely about to change..

Great update overall and thanks for the PM :)