IPKKND FF: Masquerade [Chapter 18] Updated 10 Sept

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Lol for a while I was totally confused!! Wow a circus??? Now that sure is a huge twist!

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#602

you updated...yaayyy...

well don't be so surprised that i am commenting so soon...

i know you must be planning to this with me

and you must be hating me till hell... you have every right to do but i am sorry..

but all the blames goes to my office and net... office works never me free time and my net was not working since last few dayzz... i am innocent... sachi wala...

now coming to the update... L.O.V.E.D I.T

arnav and khushi are in circus... Really..?? omg i cant stop laughing..

arnav's reaction would have been worth watching... and to add fuel to his condition khushi is with him...lol and khushi toh khushi hai... as usual bubbly...

it wold be really adventurous for them... but the people at circus are so nice.. i loved them...

thank you guys for helping our ARHI...

but i am worried about arnav..why people want to kill him...?? i can't believe we are on chapter 15

but still we don't know anything... too bad... you need to reveal few facts that too super soon...

and what the hell..?? aman actually gave wrong information to anjali... what the--

arghhh..😡 i hate this invisible man.. how can he do that..?? now anyone won't be able to help them also... phewww...

and please don't make shyam evil in this story...please i can't bear him...

update was lovely but my mind stayed back with this single line...

"You must keep smiling no matter what the situation."

it hit the right chord of the heart...

and sorry once again...😊

Edited by Shruti21 - 13 years ago

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

man that was awesome...theyy r in a circus...much to arnav's annoyance...hahaha...but they will have a good time...

and the line khushi sais you must smiling always...I ve flattered...

chheeerrrzzz...for ur work...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

loved the update.. the detail on each character was amazing... i loved the way you described everything.. i could easily see a backstage of circus with all the skilled people practising..

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

this is amazing...i cudnt stop myself from imagining the original khusi kumari gupta when she is in her usual self,in her very own avatar,entertaining us all the way with her hilarious antics!

so arnav and khusi in circus!lol:)

khusi is bubbly and all the more cute...i love it!

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

fab update...Khushi does the twists n turns 😊 I was wondering when she asked what each one does, how she n Arnav will be of use to them :)

update soon!

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#607

fab update!! they are in circus..😆 khushi performing😉 loved it..

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Ok, Im petrified of clowns! they totally gimme the hibbie-jibbies! But I'm happy to read the update. A very unique twist to the story. This Anahita girl seems interesting. Would love to read how you take this forward!.