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Amazing...fantabulous...do pm me...plzzz...I sent u a buddy request:D
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OMG i feel so sorry for khushi šŸ˜” Please continue... and PM me! I have sent u a buddy request... 😊
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this is sad but it's what ASR's reaction would be! plz PM me when u update and continue :)
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that was very heartbreaking for khushi... if u were writing IPKKND,,,, more viewers would be crying..

anyways... i loved the ur story... shows how when ppl have set their mind it is very hard to chnge them.. her arnav hs set his mind tht khushi is resposible ... no matter what she says he is still unaffected anf thinks only of the bad aspects
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Originally posted by: JuS**LameAHolic

this is sad but it's what ASR's reaction would be! plz PM me when u update and continue :)


QUOTE=Asmita88]

that was very heartbreaking for khushi... if u were writing IPKKND,,,, more viewers would be crying..

anyways... i loved the ur story... shows how when ppl have set their mind it is very hard to chnge them.. her arnav hs set his mind tht khushi is resposible ... no matter what she says he is still unaffected anf thinks only of the bad aspects

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Originally posted by: JuS**LameAHolic

this is sad but it's what ASR's reaction would be! plz PM me when u update and continue :)


QUOTE=Asmita88]

that was very heartbreaking for khushi... if u were writing IPKKND,,,, more viewers would be crying..

anyways... i loved the ur story... shows how when ppl have set their mind it is very hard to chnge them.. her arnav hs set his mind tht khushi is resposible ... no matter what she says he is still unaffected anf thinks only of the bad aspects

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pls pls plsss continue!! and pm me i u can!! :)
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Part-2


In the evening Khushi is helping Payal for dinner'''

Payal notice Khushi's swollen eyes''

Payal: did u cried''.

Khushi: with a fake smile no Jiji

Payal: You know naa that u can't hide anything from me tell me what happened did Shyam ji told u anything'.

Khushi: no jiji''. Nothing happened'''

Payal: Khushi if u not tell me I will not talk to you'''

And she turned around''..

Khushi: eyes were moist'..

Khushi: nothing Jiji I just missing Amma & Babuji'' a tear roll down ''.

Payal: wipes her tears''.

Payal: Idiot I will always with you'.. ab kabhi bhi Maa Babuiji ki yaad aaye tho mere paas aa jana'..

Both smiles and hug each other''.

All having their dinner except Anjali as she is still unconscious''. Doctor gave her a sleeping injection'..

Shyam: with a fake concern how is Rani Saahiba now?

Arnav: fumes in anger to see his fake concern''

Nani: Damadji ab Anjali bitiya theek hain''

Shyam: hum Rani Sahiba sey milkar aate hain'.. And he leaves'''

Khushi & Payal are serving food' to everyone''.

After serving Payal also sits for the dinner''.

Nani: khushi bitiya aap bhi beitiye''(Khushi u also sit and have dinner)

Khushi: nahi Nani ji humein bhook nhai hain (no Nani I not starving)''' hum baad main kha lenge'.. (I will eat later)

Payal: khushi thum theek ho naa'' (are u ok)

Khushi: give a fake smile haan jiji hum bilkul theek hain'..

Arnav looked at her' he thinks that she is still acting'.. Khushi notice him''

Khushi: hum roti lekar aate hain''. (I'll bring chapattis)

She comes to the kitchen and cried again''..

Outside Mamiji: hello hi Bye bye'' lagta aaj phati saari naa hi khud kilaaygi aur naa hi humey kilayegi '' she shouts chapattis today hi brigyaaogi ya aaj all of us koo bhuka hii marna hain'' (I think today this Phati Sari kill all of us with hunger)

Nani: Manorama'.

Khushi: heard her'.. She wipes her tears and brings chapattis''..

Khushi: soory Mamiji''.. yea lijiye''..

IN Anjali & Shyam's Room'''..

Anjali gain conscious''..

Shyam with a fake concern are u ok Rani Saahiba''.

Anjali I am fine '..

Shyam: ok u just take rest I am coming'''

Anjali: one minute'.she hold her hand ''. I want to ask you one thing''

Now Shyam is tensed as he thought she had heard everthing''

Shyam: we'll talk later u just take rest''..

Anjali: No its important

Shayam sit next to her'''.

Anjali: I saw when Khushi slapped u''.. what was happing their''.

Shyam: nothing Rani Sahiba its just a misunderstanding''

Actually Arnav & Khushi din't tell u about this, but there is some tension between both of them and Khushi ji thought that I am responsible for that'.. but now everything Is fine I had made her understand '.. and she also said soory'. And now I think we don't need to make it that big'''

Anjali: smiles and hug him'''. I am really very lucky to have u''..

Shyam : gives that evil smiles and chuckles''. Rani saahiba can I go now''

In the night''.. khushi is outside the room''. Khushi is afraid as how will she face Arnav and his anger''. But she nerve and She enters the room and looking for him and dint find'. Arnav over their''.

Arnav is in the Guest room''' lying on the bed''and recapture all their moment''. And closed his eyes to remember that day when he got to know about Shyam and Khushi's truth he clutch his fist in anger and punch it on the bed''''

Khushi in the room all recall their moment and crying, she packs her bag and wrote a letter for Arnav'''

She put the letter on the side table he remember all the good time she spend in Shanti Wan' She takes her luggage and step out of the house''. She talks to herself'.. Now I am going from your lives and now I hope all happiness comes back to everyone's life her eyes are still moist'..

Next Morning''.. Everyone comes for the pooja except Khushi''

Nani: Aaj Khushi Bitiya nahi aayi''( wher is khushi)

Payal: Nani humey lagta hain vo abhi thak soo rahi hoogi'.. kal uski tabiyat teeek nahi thi''. Mian usko bula kar laati hun'.. (I think she is still sleeping as yesterdays she is not feeling well, I will go and bring her downstairs for pooja)

Nani: Nahi payal Bitiya'.. unko soney dijiyee'.. thoda aaram karengi tho theek hain'

(No Payal let it be she will take some rest and feel good)

Anjali: also comes their

Everyone asked about her health

Anjali: Hum theek hain'

She asked for the Khushi

Nani: told her about her health''.

Anjali: ji theek hain''.

They started the pooja'''

In the Guest room Arnav wakes up''

He comes to his room and not find Khushi in the room'. He went to the bathroom for freshen Up'

Outside '''everyone on the breakfast table''

Arnav comes for the breakfast'. And sit near to her Di'..

Arnav: Di are u ok''.

Anjali: hum theek hain chote''.

Nani: Chote ab Khushi bitiya ki tabiyat kaisi hain'.. vo abhi tak soo rahi hain kya''( how is khushi''.. is she fine now)

Arnav: is confused with their question''.

Anjali: haan chote Payal ji bata rahi thi ki Khushi ji ki tabiyat kharrab hain'..

Arnav: Khushi par vo tho kamre main nahi hain''.. mainey soocha ki vo baahar hain'' ( khushi , bhut she is not in the room I thought she was outside with you guys)

Nani: kya matlab nahi hain''.

Arnav: haan mainey tho subha sey usey nahi dekha''.. (yea I dint saw her since morning)

Payal: is now very tensed as she know that she is really very upset last night'.

Payal: vo kal bahut ro rahi thi''. (she is crying last night)

Nani: ro rahi thi' ( crying)

All are shocked to hear this''

But Arnav knows that''.

Payal: I asked her but she told me that she is missing Amma Bauji'..

Payal: haan shaayd ghar gayi ho''. Hum phone karte hain'.

Akash: Payalji hum karte hain''

Akash call to Buaji house '

Buaji: recived the call helloo kaun hain Nand Kishore''

Akash: Buaji main Akash.. (buaji its me Aakash)

Buaji: Arey Aakash Bitwa tum'.. wahan sab theek hain naa'..

Aakash: Ji buaji vo mainey khushi ji key ''.

Buaji: cuts him in between''.. ab kaa kar diya Sankadevi ney'.

Akash ji: nahi buaji'.. vo Khushi ji Kya vahan aayi hain''

Buaji: Khusi yahan naahi tho'. Kya baath hain babuaa sab teek hain naa''.

Akash: haan buaji sab theek hain main apsey baad main baath karta hun''

And he cuts the phone'..

Payal: Kya kaha buaji ney Khushi vahi hain naa'' (what did Buaji said she is with them or not)

Aakash: Nahi Payal ji Khushi Ji vahan nahi hain''. (no she is not there)

Everyone is now tensed as where she is gone'..

Arnav: saw everyone their except Shyam''..

He thinks that she is with Shyam''''

Aranv: Don't worry I think she has gone to the mandir she'll be come she not a child''.

As he is about to leave from their'. Shyam comes their'

And asked what happened why everyone is tensed this morning'' is everything ok

Arnav turned and saw him''.

Anjali: apko pata hain Khushi ji subah sey ghar main nahi dikh rahi hain''

Shyam: What? Kahan gayi khushi Ji'' Kisi ko tho bata kar gayi hongi''.

Arnav: if he also don't know about Khushi;s whereabouts then where is she gone''.

He goes up to his room and now is tensed as don't know where had she gone'

I don't care about her she is not even exist for me so why I am so worried about her' her sad face came in front of her'''

Outside Payal is crying as she is really worried about her '.

Everyone is tried to console her''.

Shyam is also tensed'' Khushi ji aap kahan chali gayi hain'

In the Room Arnav notice a Paper in which his name is written on the above'..

He grab the paper and start reading it''.

Arnav Ji'' hum jaa rahe hain''.. hamesaa hameesa k kilye aap logon ki zindagi sey. Door'' Humey pata hain janey anjaaney humney app logon ko bahut dukh diye hain, ho sake tho humko maaf kar dena'' ab hum jaa rahe hain'.. aasha (hope) karte hain kii hummaare jaaney key baad sab theek ho jaye''. Humara naam tho khushi hain par hum kisi ko bhi Khushi nahi dey paye'. Hummaari vajah sey Ajaliji ko kitney dukh pahunchey, Hummaare hi vajahsey humaare babuji kii yea haalat hain'' Par ab hum ja rahe hain'.. aur humey pura yakeen hain kii humaarey janey k baad sabki Khushiyan Vapas aa jayengi''. Humko iss bath ki khushi bhi hain ki jaaney anjaaney humney apko kai baar hasaaya bhi hain, par iss baath ka dukh bhi hain kii ab joo apkey jeevan main dukh hain voo bhi humaare hii vajah sey hain'' Apkey aur apki parivar key saath humney job hi waqt guzaara hain vo hum khabhi nahi bhulenge'. Jiji aur Amma Babuji aur Buaji sey bolna kii humeny unkii bhi yaad aayegi'.. Humey kabhi apko bataya nahi par aaj hum apsey kehna chaahtaey hain kii hum aap sey bhaut paar kartey hain, aur agar apney kabhi bhi humsey pyaar kikya hain tho humaari ek baath manegey''.. aap haste hue bhaut aache lagte hain'.. aur hum chahatey kii aap zindagi bhar bas haste rahe'.

Aapki aur Sirf Apki Khushi Kumari Gupta'..



After reading it a tear roll down from his eyes''

PART-3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. Waiting to see what happens next. Khushi left. And i am really happy about it. Please pm me if you update.
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tht letter was soo emotional..but where did she go?

plss update soon. will be waiting for the nxt part😊

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