SS: Those eyes (Updated Pt9 Pg 24)

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Arhifans7

@Arhifans7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Please... dont MAKE ARNAV 35 n KHUSHI 19...!!!
She's is 23 in d show n he's 26 !!!! tumne toh...had kardi !!!!!

BUT I LOVED D STORY !!!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

found this fic very recently.. wow!
love the way you write their perceptions .. everything from the smell to the feel of their skin..

and i loved how you cured anjali of the "walk into chotey's room" syndrome.
hope they do something similar in the show!!

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Arhifans7
Please... dont MAKE ARNAV 35 n KHUSHI 19...!!!
She's is 23 in d show n he's 26 !!!! tumne toh...had kardi !!!!!
BUT I LOVED D STORY !!!

Shyam is 35 and Khushi 19.. Anjali is older than Arnav by a few years, maybe 33, so Shyam is older. I got Khushi's age from the Star plus IPKKND site...

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Six days over... Please update soon.

Loved your SS.😃

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

awesome story !!! please send me a pm for further updates !!

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Amazing amazing amazing!!
I loved it update soon!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Hey- I know you said way back in March that you were not confident of updating this story...

But please reconsider? It was such a tautly plotted and well written SS, even if you need to do just 2--3 more chapters to finish off, would be lapped up by eager readers like myself who loved your style!

Get what you mean that you were discouraged by the lacklustre track in the serial, but maybe you could think of your SS as a stress buster from the dragging track on the show!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Such an amazing story but yet uncomplete =/ Please do update.

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

@Neemsundari: Nyc SS!!!!😊

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ipkknd_gbdfan

@ipkknd_gbdfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

You should continue writing this! The balance between descriptions, emotions, story line, etc. is perfect - and that is something that many stories lack! I loved reading what you've wrote so far, and I would love it if you continued.

If you do, please PM me!