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Part 40



"tum is waqt yaha kya kar rahe ho ?.." asked geet trying to bring maan to his senses

maan closed his eyes and he understood he was very much engrossed in his thoughts, on opening his eyes he smiled at geet n replied, "tera hi waqt kar raha tha..meeting me etni der ho gayi ?.."

geet sighed, "haan wo sameer..."

sameer's name was enough to do d trick as he instantly cut her, "sameer..wo tuze pareshan kar raha hai kya ?...me usse baat karu ?..."

geet rolled her eyes as both sat on d jhoola, "maan tum bhi na...har waqt gussa...usne mujhe pareshan nahi kiya.."

maan sighed disappointed, "ohh.." but geet's casual talk about sameer didn't go well wid maan as he didn't even realize when his smile vanished and disappoinemnt creeped his mind. he knew, how flirtious sameer is, uff all he could remember was deir dance..

"geet tu bahot bholi hai...esliye me tujhe warning de raha hun..us sameer se door hi rehna..ek no. ka flirt hai wo...samajhi tu.." commanded maan instantly..

geet rolled her eyes as she replied, "maan kya tum bhi..us bechare ne mujhe company di aur tum usiko bura bol rahe ho..."

"company ?.."

geet confirmed, "yes company, meeting ke baad, i was so hungry so he accompanied me for d dinner to near by hotel..ohh dat reminded me how was ur dinner wid suzeil ?.."

maan didn't hear a single word aftr her revealation of her having dinner wid sameer.his body sniffed at he understood sameer was being oversmart wid geet..

"tujhe uske sath dinner karne ki jarurat kya thi ?..haan..ek baar mujhse puchh nahi sakti thi..." snapped maan in anger

his sudden anger left geet in confusion, "maan u r over reacting..i was d 1 who asked him for dinner..and he is ur frnd right..y u acting so different..?.."

maan stared at her frustrated..all he was hearing from geet is how good sameer is..for god sake..he can never handle geet taking any other person's side then him, "how m i acting different ?...tu meri ek baat dhyan se sun le..dobara tu uske sath kahin nahi jayegi..samajhi tu..."

geet sighed as she nodded, "thik hai baba...nahi jaungi..vil u calm down now...etna muh fulayega...toh muh fatt (blast) jayega..." saying so she started to giggle at her own imagination..

maan looked at her angrily but couldn't strain it as a smile slipped from his lips and he joined her giggle...he pulled geet closer into his bear hug to which geet gave in willingly..both were reminded of deir beautifull past..godd..how much dey loved deir past..wish dey could be back kids again...

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suzeil smiled sadly as she saw d entire conversation from her balcony.a tear rolled out of her eyes n she wiped it instantly not wanting to get weak..she had long understood it. his care for geet wen he was in london..24/7 he talked about geet..geet geet n geet..dats all his life contained...she sumtimes even felt jealous of geet..but his single i love u word would vanish all her bad thought..she smiled sadly wid tears n she knew..sumwhere she was sure..she was loosing maan...or may be understanding d fact dat maan was never hers..

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d sun rose as d sky brightened into reddish yellow shade.cool air passed through making geet cuddle more into sumthing warm she was holding to...she opened her eyes lazily only to find herself wrapped in d arms of maan..both still on jhoola...startled and disappointed at her own action, she tried to free herself but in vein maan pulled her more and shifted back to sleep..sighed, geet waited for maan to free her and instantly backed away from him..it was nothing new wid dem sleeping in each other's arms..she could remember unlimited memories wen dey used to sleep in each other arms..further cuddled into dadi who used to tell dem lots of bed time stories...but now d thing was different.

geet straightened herself n stood up..sighed, she was about to walk in but her eyes fell on window and she stood dere shocked.suzeil had fallen asleep by window only, lost in her thoughts..geet was shocked to see suzeil sleeping near widow of her room n den she knew..suzeil must hav been very upset about d closeness between her n maan..sumwhere geet felt guilt for being reason of distance between maan n suzeil..maan should spend more time wid suzeil and here he is cuddled wid her...wat if suzeil might hav seen d enitire conversation...no way geet wanted to be reason of any misunderstanding between dem...dis was d reason she wanted to stay away from maan...she alwz knew maan...for him, all matters is his priority...when it cums to her, suzeil or dadi..whoever it is..his main problem is he cnt digest being at 2nd priority..he alwz had been 1st and vil alwz want to be..

geet instantly walked in n locked herself in bathroom..d cold water ran from her warm skin as she let d water wash away every single memory of last night...she would never want any problems to create between maan n suzeil dat too bcoz of her...determined at her thought, geet freshened n made her way to dadi's room and found sam dere...

"morning ladies.." said geet as she entered dadi's room..

both dadi maa n sameera payed deir attension to geet and wished her back..geet sat nearby dadi n hugged her side wise...

dadi smiled n hugged her back, "kya baat hai...aaj mera bachha dadi se kyu chipak raha hai ?...kya huva geet..."

geet made baby face n hugged dadi even tighter, "dadi i love u..."

sam smiled at geet's antics n rolled her eyes, "dadi..aaj apki khair nahi...geet aise nakhre tabhi dikhati hai..jab usse koi baat aapse manvani hoti hai..."

dadi n sam giggled while geet made baby annoyed face...

"di aisa kuchh nahi hai ok..btw dadi..me soch rahi thi ke aaj ghar me ek chhota sa get together rakhu..idea kaisa hai.. ?"

dadi n sam became exscited wid d idea..

dadi smiled, "ye tumne bahot achha socha..btw geet..mujhe tumse kuchh jaruri baat karni hai.."

sam understand it was sumthing serious and left from dere taking dadi's permission...

as sam left, dadi asked geet to close d door and geet did..

"kya baat hai dadi maa..." asked geet as she settled beside dadi..

dadi maa sighed, "geet us din delhi me hume aapse kuchh baat karna chahte the..usi bare me.."

geet reminded of dat, "haan yaad aaya..kahiye na..kya huva.."

dadi maa took geet's hand in hers and uttered, "geet..hum apko khush dekhna chahte hai...beta.."

geet eyes filled up a bit but she controlled herself and faked a smile, "me khush hi to hun dadi maa..hum sab ek sath hai..me bahot khush hun.."

dadi slightly slapped geet's cheek and frawned, "aap humse jhoot bolana bhi sikh gayi beta ?..."

geet sighed and stood up, "dadi maa please..."

dadi maa pulled her back and forcefully made her sir, wid stirn voice, "hum kuchh sunana nahi chahte geet..aapko aaj humari baat sunani hi padegi...i want u to move on.."

geet looked at dadi and her eyes filled wid unshed tears, "kaise dadi maa..kaise...aap samajhati kyun nahi..ye munkin nahi hai..."

dadi maa was not ready to give up, "kyun nahi geet..agar maan kisi aur se pyar kar sakta hai..to tum kyun nahi..."

geet closed her eyes frustarted, "usne jo kiya so kiya..par mujhse ye nahi hoga dadi maa..aap janti hai..mein ab maan ki nahi ho sakti..par me kisi aur ki bhi kabhi nahi ho sakti..dis is just not possible..."

dadi maa was angry now, "all u r saying is no, no n no..cnt u just try for once..humare liye...apne bare me nahi to kam se kam apne maa-papaji ke bare me socho..kya unki atma ko aisehi dukhati rakhungi tum.."

geet looked at dadi wid pain and tears...

dadi maan continued, "kya unhe dukh nahi hota hoga..tumhe aise dekh kar...jawab do mujhe.."

geet stood up n walked towrds window...dadi maa could never understand..she could never love sum1 other dan maan..maan is d soul of her existance..he can love sum1 else..but she cnt..dats when d scene of last night stucked her night..maan being jealous towrds sameer..suzeil sleeping near window...she knew, maan was jealous wid sameer..he never liked sumbody cuming close to her..it was alwz wid him..he alwz loved to be her 1st priority n now since she talked good about sum1 else..he is scared of his importance in her life..but maan hav to understand..he is grown up now...his stupid behavior might hurt suzeil badly, watever he did last night..could never be accptable by any gf..suzeil is sweeteahrt..but it doesn't mean. maan vil take disadvantage of her innosense..maan hav to understand..he need to be more carefull n caring towrds suzei..and for dat..he need to realize dat he is no more imprtant in my life..i hav to make him realize dat..he is not important for me but for suzeil..agar iske liye mujhe kisi cartoon ko pakad kar closeness ka natak bhi karna pada..to i wud not mind..aur ko aur kyu..sameer buri choice nahi hai...but should i do dis..me maan ke khatir..sameer ke feeling ka mazak nahi bana sakti..dat vil be so mean..i think mujhe sameer se is bare me baat karni chahiye...nahi nahi...i cnt do dat..koi gadbad ho gayi toh..me is bare me kisi se baat nahi kar sakti..i just hav to do sumthing dat maan vil realise i hav a life of my own and his life should revolve around suzeil and not geet handa...

determined at her thought, geet tuened and looked straight to dadi, "dadi..im ready to take second chance..."

wid dat she left from dere, leaving a surprised, shocked and extremely happy dadi maa behind...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnxx dear 😊


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wow!!

awesome parts...😛...

loved it...

continue soon...

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Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

wow!!

awesome parts...😛...

loved it...

continue soon...


thnqqq anisha

thnqq so much 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow double update
super updates
loved it

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awesome n wonderful update...
lo ho gaya kamm tamam...abb geet sameer ko pyar karne ki natak karegi...fr me nw its tooo much...i cant tk more...m sorry...may b its good fr both of dem n may b maan can realise his true feelings fr geet but i cant tk more...i deperately want to see maan n geet together...nothing more nothing less...plz help me...
really loved it...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome parts. Suziel ko samajh aa gaya that Maan can never b hers. Infact only Geet's, lekin Maan ko kyon nahi samajh aayi ye baat? May b Geet ka natak usse line pe la dega.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kahkashansakina

wow double update

super updates
loved it


thnqqq sakina

thnx a lot 😊


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Originally posted by: rupzloveu

awesome ...

loved the updates...


thnxx rupz

thnqqq 😃
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Originally posted by: meena..

both are amazing dear


thnqqq meena...

thnx a lot 😛

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