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nj123

@nj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

very well written. I need a BIG box of tissues now.😭

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mikku87

@mikku87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

I love this story

khushi has the right to live happily after being treated like a crap by her husband👏 climax was superb...someone who wholeheartedly accepts her with all her past...thats really so sweet👏👏

ther is really a huge difference in accepting a person ,knowing the bad past of that person and acceptin her wen she is free from all accusations...

i prefer the first...so i prefer ur climax than khushi arnav reunion...

really a good thought...u gave her full dignity as a women and a human being...👏👏👏👏👏

really gud...

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

U know you really hit it with this one. I have read your works before but you really hit the dart with this one______ straight to the heart. So beautifully written and so sad too. Loved it but would like to request you to write something equally poignant but sweet and romantic PLZ. And do PM me.

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sanj1234

@sanj1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I cant tell how heart broken I am right now! A heart wrenching OS!!! 😭
Wonderfully written dear!!! 👏👏👏

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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

really nice story, but why did u seperate arnav, kushi and their son...😭

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anu

@anu17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

thanks yaar for the os lovely

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Amudha_Arya

@Amudha_Arya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

hey suddenly i haa a thought yesterday after reading this OS...what if this is the twist they have mentioned?what if this happens in the show..oh i cudnt imagine...

this is just an imagination...