IPKKND: Fatal Attraction - 2 {Chapters 7-11}

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DISHA

@shinaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

O my got lots of undercurrent in the last para.and i have said it before n im saying it again you are evil undoubtedly.n thanks

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

ooo!! i smell somebody burning already!!

update soon!

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

jus read it n its lovly...cnt wait 4da update n thnx 4da pm

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: 18shabbo

its stagial...a blood infection in easier terms...it doesnt generally turns into a lymphoma...n im fine...great actually...
just this temporary diabetes is left ...
eeewww...ohkay...no speaking only reading...okie dokie!!!

Oh okay! Thank goodness you're okay! :)

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parit.mansi

@parit.mansi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#585

nice part

thanx 4 d pm

cont soon

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queenie11

@queenie11

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

okay, yeah youre completely evil

like almost shyam level evil for that cliffhanger, but without the creepiness and various psychological issues lol

i love the way you write - it's so easy to picture the scene in my head

and khushi's reaction to arnav = whoa

have you considered writing another chapter from arnav's point of view? i can't seem to be able to tell what he's thinking at all in this fic and it's maddening lol.

i can't wait for the next chapter !

queenie

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: queenie11
okay, yeah youre completely evil

like almost shyam level evil for that cliffhanger, but without the creepiness and various psychological issues lol

i love the way you write - it's so easy to picture the scene in my head

and khushi's reaction to arnav = whoa

have you considered writing another chapter from arnav's point of view? i can't seem to be able to tell what he's thinking at all in this fic and it's maddening lol.

i can't wait for the next chapter !

queenie

Hey! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it 😳
I actually posted an OS from Arnav POV some time back, though it will happen way down into the story after like a gazillion chapters :P
Here is the link if you want to read: OS: Addiction