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natashaa46

@natashaa46

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

it was sooo chweeet ! 👏 wonderful!

loved it 😊

sure Arnav wud be the world's gr8-st dad ⭐️

i loved the entire description ...awww and how in the end khushi sees both cuddled up n wht better she clicks a pic!! WOW ! 😊

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Sharmila

@ongongong

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Even i felt like waking up at 3:30 am and so i took my phone and ended up in IF and now the time is like 6:05am-6:15am and gosh now i should be waiting for school bus by 7:40am,urgg..anywhz'this one is fantablous,just loved it Gud mrng ery1 Have a nice day...

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

cute story.. but i felt it was far too elaborately detailed.

Dont worry, your writing style is good!
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Annu92

@Annu92

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

I want to give u millions n trillions likes yaar...it was... I dnt knw how to describe it...sooo cuuuttteee...keep writing...:-)

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shanthini

@suhanana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

it was really awesome and cute... u brought the father daughter relationship really well... now arnav would understand how hard is it to manage him and a child like him... i too wished to be cookie not to be in arnav's arms but to relish the fatherly affection...😳

do pm me on ur future works😊

Edited by suhanana - 13 years ago