ArhiFF:Price of freedom~Thread 2 (T2)

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Aparna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Awsome work
its so sad and heartbreaking for arhi and mee tooo.::(
khushis is right as she believe in marrige.
Feeling sad for arnav but he i man with few words
wants to know what he is planning and precap -interesting

BEST OF LUCK FOR EXAMS

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kohli4ever

@kohli4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Just caught up with two updates..

Ur an excellent angst writer...

Cant wait for nxt update..

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

It was a brillant n a fab update. Actually i found it very nice bcoz sepration was very imp for arnav to reliase it truly n give the relationship a name. SJ was really very helpful yar. But the precap seems really interesting wat the big deal in the newspaper that every one is hooked to it. Just waiting for next update. Best of luck for the tests. See u at 48/49.

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

awesome update zee ..loved it..
arnav's restlessness, helplessness and the fear of losing K has been penned down beautifully
knowing arnav, he is not going to sit back and let K go...and i am happy he is going get her back by hook or crook...👏

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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Ohh by the way I forgot lol that I cant waite to see Lavanya's punishment *muaahhh*- evil laugh lol!! i know Im such a stalker lol :P

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

emotional and ntense n beautiful... amazing update zee

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sanj1234

@sanj1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

OMG what an update Zee!!! I loved it! Yes sure I am a little heartbroken by their separation but on the other hand Im also thanking SJ for doing this coz because of him Arnav finally realises the value of Khushi in his life and this time he wont be afraid of the commitment and will make Khushi his by hook or by crook!!!
Eagerly waiting for ur next update and BTW good luck for ur exams dear!!!

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

umm what happened? as in, who was that because of whom you dint want to update? you write really cute stuff!! and that too incredibly, so be it anyone- don't let them effect you 😊

coming to my arnie and the update 😃

hmm what he is saying is partially true, he is still not ready for "big" things, her side of the argument is true too- she cant be a PA forever, but - i dont know- i loved that drama 😊

"then what have i done" soo true- she changed every thing for him.

aww- "am i making it harder? good coz i dont want it to be bloody easy" SOO ASR like!

SJ!!! good good!! go for it- Arnav would realise it only when she leaves - though i feel bad for him, its needed!!

loved loved loved the update! Lavanya- she better not go away easily! 😉

Wonder what is in the news paper!! 😳

p.s all the best for revision and tests 😳

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Brilliant update!!! SJ is a good man.. he helped her... but am sad she left.. :(

ok now wanna see arnav's plan of action..excited!! and also what happened to LA :@ he should fire her..

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dnyd

@dnyd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

contrary to what we are seeing in the actual play nowadays this is such a nice breath of fresh air. Here Khushi stands up for herself.

Loved that when it comes to Khushi Arnav has no ego. He leaves his ASRness behind. His world revolves around Khushi. Its not that he is wrong with the whole don't need marriage bit its like he never thought any other way. The thought did not occur to him at all. it was never necessary.

But now he will think. He has found his soulmate. Hope you have a self realization part in there where he actually comes to that conclusion and then wants it so bad.

I am so excited for the next part.

Take care. Good luck

cheers!!