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Posted: 13 years ago
I am speechless and therefore have no clever analysis except to say that was beautiful!!!

Sometimes the readers are left hanging without closure of an ending but you did not do that. You gave the story a beautiful and satisfying ending while keeping the characters integrity and explained the motivations.

Loved it ...and will be back to reread like I read all my favorites again and again. Huge compliments!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika100

I am speechless and therefore have no clever analysis except to say that was beautiful!!!


Sometimes the readers are left hanging without closure of an ending but you did not do that. You gave the story a beautiful and satisfying ending while keeping the characters integrity and explained the motivations.

Loved it ...and will be back to reread like I read all my favorites again and again. Huge compliments!!!!


I am so touched! I am glad I could write something to get this reaction from you!

Thank you so much.

🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
U started beautifully n ended marvellously. Thanks for the pm ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
great work!...loved the ending!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY.. so beautifully written.. thank you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice. keep it up. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUL <3 ! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Perfect Ending! :)

It was really good and I hope you write some more SSs soon! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it, you writing is great:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome start...looking forward to the rest.😛😛😛😛😛😛

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