ARSHA...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ff) - updtd pg 82

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Now this is the peak of patience yaar!! Aur kitna wait karwaogi? I think u have totally forgot about this FF.. You know, it's one of ur best writings, waiting so desperately for update.. Can't wait more.. Pls don't test our patience! Pls continue ASAP

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sukanya

@sukanyaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

awesome...

(actually tujhe ab mere comments back to back dikhenge... as i am reading the old pms as well...finally hav sum tym today to read all the updates...)

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

readed all the parts from starting...

i guess the best arsha ff...

pls update the next part soon...

i guess u had forgotten about this ff...

pls continue it... it almost more than a month u had not updated this ff...

eagerly waiting for it... and pls do pm me whenever u update next...

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

we want update

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

this ff is awesome...

plz update soon n plz pm me..

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#497

DEETHA DIII...

Pls...

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FAST... I NOE U HAVE FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS FF...MEINE BAHUT LATE CMMNT KIYA SO SORRY..BUT I JUST READ ALL THE CHAPPYS IN ONE GO...* PHEW * HO GAYA... BUT U R ALSO NOT UPDATING...

I noe bahut ho gaya rona dhona...par ye rona dhona anger mein badle uska wait mat karo...jaldi update karo...

Edited by cherrydrops2 - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

kyun karun?????????bas 8 pages ki cmnts???usmei bhi kam se kam do teen update keliye poochte hi hogaya aur bas 72 likes????/ i think atleast 80 banta hai...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

hehe im back...here goes the update...aaj kuch bhakne keliye nahi hai😛

days passed all were busy in their own works,...and finally came the day...where kriya asks rey for being frnds...

sh: friendship aur tujhse??? wo bhi flower deke...hey universe ji kya din aagaye?

k: kya universe ji???? hmm...kriya banti jaa rahi ho...waise agar kria ko frnd nahi ban na toh seedha girlfrnd ban ne keliye bolo...rey ko koi problem nahi...

he said sitting beside ...their arms wer touching and he could easily feel her slightly shiver under his touch...he smiled

they were in the fire-exit as usual reading and sitting there...the crew went out as it was free tym...

sh: kyun kria kyun ladke ko confess karni chahiye...

k: toh tum chahti ho ki mai confess karoon pehle...

he asked suddenly in her ear whispering which made her shiver... (remember the locker scene guys)

she gasped as he suddenly spoke and he being that close to her made her shiver and goose bumps took place on her skin...

k: bolo...he again whispered...

sh: huh?????? she sighed along with asking him ...

kunwar went back to a maintainable distance a small naughty smile playing on his lips...

k: i mean...rey...rey ko pehle confess karna chahiye kya?????/

thats when she came to senses...she rewined what happened ri8 now and a blush creeped on her cheek...

god knows how he maintained himself from kissing her...the rush in his body was making it more difficult for him...he just want to kiss her...but how???? he sighed ...

palki: arey chalo jaldi unka khatam hogaya toh inki karte hai...

sidharth ...ya...

sam : hume bhi dekhna hai...hum bhi chale????

palki: umm...kk

all went to the fire-exit but as soon as they opened the door they found no one in it...they searched here and there just to find shaks mobile lying on the steps...

they called amar...but he never attended the call...they were tensed now...finally they received a msg...

"hehe...dekha kisiko bina pata chale utha ke leke aaya na" came his msg...

all bet their foreheads...

palki: sachi sid im gonna kill him set mei sabse chote bacha banke phir raha hai...

sid: argghhh!!!!!! ab ek poora din shooting gaya...huh

the gang chuckled imagining kunwars state the next day...

she was still unconsious...he drove slowly taking in the moment...lonely road...she with him ...a silent drive...what else he want????/ but suddenly the car stopped...he got down and checked the engine...

k: shit...abhi kharab hona tha...he kicked the door which closed and the cor got locked...

k: f**k ur a j**rk amar...ab baite reh baahar jab tak wo hosh mei na aaye...

...he looked around...it was getting dark...it was a lonely place looks like neer a vehical takes this way...

k: kaha agaya mai????/ aarrgghhh!!!!! shaku bai sab teri wajah se ...behoshi mei bhi mujhe disturb karti hai...

he sat on the foot path waiting for her to gt up...finally after 2-3 hrs he saw her looking around in the car...he can say she was tensed...he rushed and knocked the door...she saw him...she opened the door quickly pulled him in and locked...

she was in passenger seat ...he was almost on her...his head dug in her hair...he breathed in the fragnance...after closing she hugged him tight making him settle on her lap...

sh: kunwar hume yaha koun leke aaya ...aur mujhe andar kisne lock kiya...acha hua keys andar hi reh gaye...tum bahar the na...tum theek toh hona...

she chanted in fear...

k: shakti...shakti ...shaku bai chup...pehle position change plzz...

she was still feared...he adjusted himself beside her by the window,...still she was hugging him...

k: shakti hua kya hai????

sh: wo jab tum paani peene gaye the kisine mujhe beshosh kardiya ...she complained like a small kid crying...

he tried but burst out laughing...she looked at him confused...

k: yaad hai/...one week pehle maine bola...

then it clicked her...she was punching him hard...he first resisted but later lost temper and pulled her by waist towards him...he was getting hurt...she can see that..but she was angry she tried freeing herself...but he pulled her more close...she breathed hard as she looked at him whose face was mms away from hers now...suddenly her car inner light went off...

she screamed once hugging him tight...

after a lot of consoling that he had already switched on the cell torch she pulled back but still eyes closed in fear...he focused the light on her face fron forehead to her lips where he got struck...he slowly leaned in taking her lips into his...she snap opened her eyes when he was softly kissing her his eyes closed...he was just sucking her lips when she moned closing her eyes leaving him to explore her mouth...they were soo lost in the moment when they heard a horn...which brought them back into the earth...they parted and kunwar got down never looking at her...she was blushing to core in there...he went out and found the mechanic he called for...finally after an hr they led back to their homes...the drive was silent...they never looked or peeked at each other...

he dropped her at her home and took and auto to his house...

she directly went into her room and stood before the mirror of the washroom blushing...she tuoched her lips...

his lips were too soft...she still can feel the softness...she made her lip with her tongue but felt his lips on hers...she closed her eyes still feeling his lips over hers...

she was in her dreamland when mukti shouted into her room telling her to reach dining table soon...

she went to eat but each and every thing which touched her lips made her remember his lips over her...she ate fast and went into room quickly to hide the blush...she fell on the bed and blushed smiling wide...she caressed her lower lip and blushed more and slowly drifted to sleep thinking abt him...

length ki baat mat karo plzz...

adjust i already gave and update so adjust...

pms tomorrow mrng...

like and cmnt plzz...

love u all

deetha...😳

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago