ARSHA...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ff) - updtd pg 82 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...WOW...
it waz just superb...
update soon and thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
note: guys dis is not happenning...i have 107 members in mah buddy list but wat i get is just 20-30 cmnts and likes????? sorry to say guys...maanti hun meri ff sab se achi nai hai...agar sach me acha nai lagta to remove me 4rm ur buddylist...are kam se kam 40-50 cmnts and likes toh expect karoongi na... late se hi sahi ...par lamba updates deti hun na????? sorry to say guys but accha nai laga toh kehdijiye... i will discontinue it...sorry if im being rude...but try to understand...



and agar update chahiye toh kahiye...i can update today but woh lamba nai chota hi hoga...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
plsss discntinue krne ki baat mat sochna...n noo deetha its awsummm i luv ur ff dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am not getting pm's
uan uan😭😭😭
jus read all the parts
it is lovely
love their adorable friendship
but plzzz next time pm kar dena
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ya plss don't discontinue it..as der r ppl who always comment too..😭
N pls update it today no problem even if its small...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok...here i come...with next update...firstly i warn u..dnt expect long...its short...


ARSHA...!!!!!!!!!!

K: shaks!!!!!!!!! hum yaha kal aaye hai par abhi tak kuch ghume bhi nai...dekho waha ...lake...!!!!!

S: haan kunwar...chalo chalo chalte hai...

they rushed 4rward...they even dnt bother to ask the others to accompany them...

Al: dekha vinti...these two are such an annoying ppl...aaj tak jab jagad rahe the...hamare aas paas ghoomte the...aur ab dekh firse apni duniya mei...

Vinti: yeah dude!!!!!!!!! they r unbelievable...wapas aane do tab dekhenge...

all: yeah!!

archie: guys kyu na hum unhe disturb kare???

shan: disturb chod...alisha and vinti i wanna ask u smthng...

alisha and vinti: wat???

shan: kya tum logon ko sach me lagta hai ki ye dono sirf dost hai???

alisha: humne kab kaha??

shan: then they are a couple!!!!!!( excited) ...but y r they hiding 4rm us...

vinti: dude unhe pata hoga tab na hume batayenge ki they love each other...


cut to lake...


both were walking side by side luking in different directions... it was wierd fr them...they never kept quite when they are together... but they are happy...they felt light and excited today...coz today they got back deir frnd...the one with whom they ould share each and every bit...fight laugh...actually they felt that the big part missing in their lives was back...but both thought of breaking the silence...suddenly they both spoke at a tym...

K&S: bas yaar aur nahi...

they paused...luked at each other with a qsn."are u thinking the same wat im thinking " ...they burst into laugh...they laughed their heart out...went and sat beside the lake...

K: shaks...bohut dinon ke baad aise dil se hasne ka mouka mila...

S: ( both stopped laughing) sorry kunwar sab meri wajah se...

K: are shaks bhool jao na jo hua so hua...chalo na pani me chalte hai...

S: haan chalo...

they went in and played like small kids...spilling water on each other...finally they decide to return when shaks in excitement turned and slipped ...but ...as usual...yeah u expected ri8...shoud i say...she was caught by a muscular hand around her waist...she opened eyes and saw him and he was abt to leave her when she tried to walk and felt a pain in her ankel and was abt to fall again...but amar pulled her tight against him...she gasped...his grip on her waist was forming goosebumps everywhere...he called...

K: shaks kya hua are u ok??

S: huh??...oh...haan...i think i got a sprain...

soon he lifted her in arms and strtd moving out...

S: arre,,,,,,,,,,yeh kya kar rahe ho kunwar ...let me down i can manage...

K: sshh!!!!!!!!!!! even i too can carry u kk...and remember...tumhe mujhse jyaada achese koi utha nai sakta...

S: she blushed...wait!!!!!!!!! why am i blushing...???? and why am i getting goosebumps on his touch...oh cmon shaks...he lifted u many tymes...itne dinon ke baad touch karne se ye haal hai kya...wait ..kya haal ??? shaks...just shut up ...

she looked into his eyes...gosh they are mesmerising...whats hapenning to me...y am i feeling dizzy...gosh...it were those eyes which i saw into most...not even into my moms eyes...but yes i looked into his eyes more than anyones...haan...after all our eyelock is the main plus point of our chemistry...but whats different today????



acha...padhliya shaks ki thoughts...to read kunwars wait ...😉 till my next update,...kk guys bye gud n8...its too late ...pmz later...😳





Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
uan uan
itnaaa chota
koi baath nhi agli baar lamba waala hoga na
plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
bhaut chotu sa part tha but it was awesome and amazing as always
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
i totally love ur ff..
all the parts r AWESOME...
plz. update soon and do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love your FF totaly . Update super soon.

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