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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

wow..the way you describe their thoughts is simply AMAzing! loved this update

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

wow enjoyed their little conversation.. arnav's action of using her pallu to dry himself petrified khushi.. which was enjoyable..

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

awesome update loved it loved how he listened and did not blow a fuse he just listen and then talked an thanked her for taking care of his sister and loved how he told her the he loved the coffee made by his wife and how he took her sari palu wiped his face and was so cute terrifying poor khushi loved it thanks for the pm awesome up date good luck in your exams

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

wow...this had me smiling...awww they r sooo cute together...thnx 4da pm dear

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

tht was a superb update..cant wait to read more...:)

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

I honestly have no words. I felt every emotion of the characters, up and down, as I was reading this. The flow and continuity in your writing, its so good, that the CVs on the show ought to take lessons from you!

As for the update, I'm glad you bought in Khushi's doubt that Arnav would think she was asking because she cared for Shyam. I actually hadnt thought of that at all! :) but she got it all out inspite of that. So thats victory for her. :)

And the sneeze and her concern. I was smiling along with Arnav :D
The pallu scene reminded me of Haldi morning in RM ! :)

Cant wait for what more the rain has in store for us!!!! :) I'm in Arhi-land. Shyamu can go to hell for all I care.

Thanks for the PM! :) Will miss your writing. Good luck with your exams!

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asumi

@asumi

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#777

the last two chapters - sOOO adorable!!

loved their understanding!! loved how arnav reacted for every nervous word of her observation!! loved the way they are falling deeper in love!!!

best of all was how he took her pallu and dried him self!! soo damn cute!!! 😆 despite the seriousness- i cant help but smile at their cuteness!!! superb update and you write beautifully!! :)