Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 46

WOW! OMG you story is so awesome I check IF everyday to see if you've updated your story please update the next chapter soon I can't wait 😊😊😊

Beautiful update hope their relationship takes the right rout now

oh!!!!! that was so beautifull, wana see her reaction

a little long, but, worth it. fantastic...keep posting...

this one had me feeling so many emotions. In just one chapter. I'm practically in tears it was so beautiful... oh gosh

that was so beautiful very beautiful loved the update that was so emotional the anger the rage and the helplessness he feels he wants to make it better but he does not know how loved it he made a starry night in the bedroom oh so sweet thanks for the pm

So beautiful. The meanie's a romantic at heart. Now I'm really curious as to what he saw when he was looking at Khushi.

That was just amazing... I am absolutely in love with your writing and this FF.

It's just amazing. I love the way you write them as humans who have flaws and emotions like everyone else e.g. Khushi finding it hard to forgive, Arnavs jealousy.

I loved this whole update. The way she ignored him and how he felt seeing her relationship with his family and the best part the ending. The conversation and then the bit where he showed her the starry ceiling. He spent all day doing that just to make her happy and realise her place in his heart and in his bed.

Even though I want her to forgive Arnav I'm loving the fact that it's not all easy for him and that they aren't both just forgetting about it because that's unrealistic trust and forgiveness takes time. Also im loving the fact that he's working to earn her trust.

I especially loved this line;
'He hoped she would read the meaning into that. That he expected her to sleep on the bed. With him. Under their own starlit sky.'

Like I said before your writing is amazing and you are an amazing writer not only because of your FF but because of how fast you update and how obviously dedicated you are to your work and i love the fact that you don't leave us dangling too long and yes that's a hint for you to update soon ;)

awww thats beautifull, he's done that for her, thats so sweet of him, cant wait to see what khushi's reaction is going to be, hope she's touched by it. please update soon and thanx for the pm