Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

wow great writing all the way...keep posting...good luck for exam...

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lollipop4u

@lollipop4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

love love loved it!! :D Good luck on ur exams! :D

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Superb update...loved what he did at the end,taking kajal from her eyes and then put the dot behin her ear...very romantic.

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kajal

@kajal620

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

kisi ki nazar na lage.:)...superb

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Hey that is most beautifully written!

Loved reading it! Their love was much like a poem in ur story!

Thanks for the PM!

After reading this, I'm sure "Meri nazar aapki writing per lag gayi" (Sorry if that isn't correct, not a Hindi person at all)😊

Edited by Sivaranjani - 13 years ago

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

aww such a cute update!! sry for not comment the past few times had exams week 😳 but thanks for the continual pms really appreciate it 😊

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Dimple

@scorpionsavenge

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

I was all smiles reading this. I kept reading and reading, and it just ... ended! You write so beautifully, I love your metaphors and your writing style in general. Thanks for the PM!

I cant wait to read about what happens next

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Amazing Part :) 😳

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#399

oh gosh that was so sweet...kissi ki nazar na lagay... oh my...how romantic, i loved it.
please continue soon and thanx for the pm

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#400

This was an absolutely gorgeously long update and I just wish I had more time to comment on every aspect that I loved. But instead I will just again mention how much I love your use of evocative language :)