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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rtmcgreatfan

Hi! 😊I'm new to if. hav read all the parts of ur ff. honestly, i nvr liked supernatural stuffs, bt u created ff on rtmc n i cudnt stop myself.it is extremely gud. gr8 going n plz update. u've made me fall in luv wid this ff...



ye i know- not many ppl like or enjoy supernatural things...
but still i took that risk and wrote dis ...

its reallt gud to know ki em succeeding in eve attracting ppl of non-supernatural genre...😃

thnx for trying LSS...

keep reading n supernatural-ing


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Posted: 11 years ago
just read all the parts...
amazing as usual... missed you sweetie..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read all the parts and believe me this is the best ff I have ever read
Mind blowing imagination yaar you are just too good
From the starting the facts the colourr of their eyes their different colours
The different species and the thing I love the most is the names you gave to the houses rudheerakshi neelnayan just amazing
Swasleen are just mind blowing both have lovable heart and tones of attitude
The concept of the chits from vases is something very different
The best was when shaleen called his heartbeats as monotonous drum
Character of vicky is hillarious and I love it when he can get to know what shaleen is thinking
It was very sweet when in the markey shaleen bought the stole for swan in exchange of his watch
The vodka dialogue was damn hillarious
The best was the sword fight when swan jumped on him not to drink his blood but to kiss him
There helplessness and longing for each other was well portrayed
The temple scene was also very nice loved that u included daksh and dhwani even they are my favourite
The freshers party was just amazing the eyelock and themn dance I loved it so much 👏
Loved the way swan was jealous of that jhingola
And the library scene was damn amazing loved the way
He sald tumhare aur mere beach na koi hai aur na hi koi hoga
Loved all the teachers abhay piya shilpa karan
But whats this chakkar of geet and maan
Pls pls pls its a sincere request if u can then pls cont this I am dying to read further pld pls if u can pls cont
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virman223

Just read all the parts and believe me this is the best ff I have ever read
Mind blowing imagination yaar you are just too good
From the starting the facts the colourr of their eyes their different colours
The different species and the thing I love the most is the names you gave to the houses rudheerakshi neelnayan just amazing
Swasleen are just mind blowing both have lovable heart and tones of attitude
The concept of the chits from vases is something very different
The best was when shaleen called his heartbeats as monotonous drum
Character of vicky is hillarious and I love it when he can get to know what shaleen is thinking
It was very sweet when in the markey shaleen bought the stole for swan in exchange of his watch
The vodka dialogue was damn hillarious
The best was the sword fight when swan jumped on him not to drink his blood but to kiss him
There helplessness and longing for each other was well portrayed
The temple scene was also very nice loved that u included daksh and dhwani even they are my favourite
The freshers party was just amazing the eyelock and themn dance I loved it so much 👏
Loved the way swan was jealous of that jhingola
And the library scene was damn amazing loved the way
He sald tumhare aur mere beach na koi hai aur na hi koi hoga
Loved all the teachers abhay piya shilpa karan
But whats this chakkar of geet and maan
Pls pls pls its a sincere request if u can then pls cont this I am dying to read further pld pls if u can pls cont



welcome shelcome jiii!!...

thnku u so much for encouraging... its really gud too read ur cmnt.. thnku so much for making my day today!...

gud news is - mere first semester khatam ho gyaa h n yes- em gonna give veryy soon- in my winters holidays a few update...


keep supernatural-ing...⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo




welcome shelcome jiii!!...

thnku u so much for encouraging... its really gud too read ur cmnt.. thnku so much for making my day today!...

gud news is - mere first semester khatam ho gyaa h n yes- em gonna give veryy soon- in my winters holidays a few update...


keep supernatural-ing...⭐️

really thats amazing
You know what today I told your story to my friend and we both feel that u are an amazing writer and we salute ur imagination hum toh aisa kuch kabhi soch bhi nahin sakte
If u don't mind would u pls tell me where do u live
Actually I live in faridabad and reading about it in evergreen love I was very happy
Anyways would be eagerly waiting for the update pls do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virman223

really thats amazing
You know what today I told your story to my friend and we both feel that u are an amazing writer and we salute ur imagination hum toh aisa kuch kabhi soch bhi nahin sakte
If u don't mind would u pls tell me where do u live
Actually I live in faridabad and reading about it in evergreen love I was very happy
Anyways would be eagerly waiting for the update pls do cont soon


haaye oyee! tab tho hello shello choddo!!>..

RAM RAM...😃😎

hum bhi faridabad ko belong kerte h- jamn bhumi h meri!!...
ek dum haryaanvi jaan hu mei...
i live in dilli but!!>..


thnxx thnxx thnx alot for so so much praise... really delighting!!


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Posted: 11 years ago




UPDATE 23-
(part 1)

ZOOLOGY CLASS-

"There are many reasons for immortality. Vampires are immortal because cells of their bodies attend a stage- that is no degradation and no regeneration-static. Muscle cells are not metabolically active. They derive their nutrition direct from blood- parasitic. Wizards have highest potential to regenerate their tissues. Werewolves' immortality is subject to their tendency to keep their cells fresh and active; their cells attain a quiescent stage. "- professor Karan typically delivered his lecture to a class consisting of frustrated vampires and sleepy non vampires.

"then why more energy need of werewolves?"-asked the zoology Professor with a interesting expression. He soon saw majority of them sheepishly nodding their head down to hide their faces.

Smiling vaguely to the class he continued-"because-keeping cells fresh and active in case of wizards, certainly requires less energy than in keeping old permanent cells metabolically active, which werewolves do-"

it was really hectic-not for students to bear the lecture.. but for prof. Karan to bear students sad faces, as if they are being subjected to so much torture.



WEEKEND-


EVENING-

Weekends in Takshila are jovial, peppy and naughty and the dates when guys and girls go to disco-lounge-party! But return before 11:30 pm. Takshila runs on rules and regulations.

Today, it's the time when sun is going to hide himself behind the horizon after 2 hours.

Few seniors of Takshila were playing "Dog and the Bone" on the green lawn stretches of Takshila. While other juniors were spectating the match, gabbling, chattering-all together making a spree and living free-hours of life in weekend. The contest was between boys and girls, today.

"Hey Swazy!..dear would you like to join us..we need more mates!"-girl house captain of Neelanayan offered.

"Yeah! Why not? How many more you need?"-swastika asked excitedly.

"We need 2"

"But my friends and me our 4!"-swastika's face faded.

"You all four wanna play?"-she asked in vague surprise.

"Why just we four- we all here sitting want to play"-swastika alleged.

The girls became super excited, whole interested female flock gathered on ground. Hence boys called their juniors too, yes, including Shaleen...

The interesting part of the game was- boys and girl were given alternative turns to chose themselves a competitor for the game..

Sia chose Vicky and Vicky chose to loose sententiously-her smile was far more important for him. And another reason was- he could just not concentrate on game in the happiness that Sia chose him..

Neither of Jaya and Uday chose each other, but senior wanted to have this combat between boy's and girl's monitor of 1st year. Uday lost a serious game with perfectionist Jaya. And it didn't hurt his princely ego- because losing to a beautiful girl with brain of Takshila was a no objection for him. The gentleness in their relation makes them go smooth with each other.

Mehul called Manyata for himself and even won. This competition was simple as Manyata didn't know to play, but she wanted to play.

Finally the climax combat-Shaleen selected Swan.

Neelnayan princess versus Rudheerakshi prince!

Its been two weeks, there had been no special encounters, apart from those routine fights between them

They both were bent over the blue cloth in a chalked circle with their eyes locked and steps encircling the cloth. Shaleen knew it's important for him to focus on his game than allowing his eyes to praise her waving black curls in front of her face.

"They could be disturbing her?"- he thought, without giving a thought that he himself is getting deviated by those.

Its not just him, swastika was finding it way much harder than him to concentrate. How could she??- when shaleen's bad habit of keeping his first 2 buttons always unfastened allowed her a very easy view of his chest- toned and mighty, as he did inclination on the blue cloth. This view always choked her throat.

In impasse-to continue with watching the interesting view inside hi shirt or win a score to her team, she bits her lower lip in weakness. From nook of her lips she slowly left her lip craftily, snatching Shaleen's attention- they looked extremely attractive to him..

TRAP!!!

His eyes completely diverted to her lips and tameless swastika grabbed the cloth. Not in moment, just next half second she spun fanatically around to run. She merely would have pressed the ground with her feet twice at consecutive places, after when she had no ground under them. She was being rudely pulled behind, with an ensnare of a strong arm around her waist. And in next half of same second, she was flying... Supernatural speed!!

Far from swastika's imagination, she had been scooped in Shaleen arm- she elicited this when she opened her squeezed eyes after her terrifying fear. She inhaled air to puff her lungs and cool herself-she is safe..she is in Shaleen's arms.

WAIT!-WHY AM I HERE? LIKE THIS?- it was quickly cerebrated in her brain, she alerted.

Her psyche screamed-THE CLOTH-she sighed finding it still in her hands. Swastika saw the boys' team roaring like mad to see Shaleen carrying her in his arms. Her brain screamed- INJUSTICE!

Its was just 1 and a half second she had been in Shaleen's carriage since then, she started struggling to jump off-"its not fair"-she exclaimed.

"everything is fair in love and war sweetheart!"-he wooed.

LOVE didn't matter now- let it go to hell!.. its now war between them now. Swastika was freakishly shaking her legs and hands to undo his grips on her body. Shaleen steps fumbled when he was carrying her to his team's border.

"You can't do like this- its CHEATING ..."-she chided, while sharply nudging his chest. Girls' teams could not believe what's happening before their eyes.

Shaleen tightened his grip on her thighs and around her back- he was not going to let her go so easily -"listen-"-he plainly asked her, though he knew she is not going to obey...anyways-"the only thing which will grant a point to my team is reaching of this blue cloth in team's border, which is right now in your hands. Aur kuch bhi ho jaye- you are not going to give me this!"he simply stated.

"yes-you are right!"-she blurted without resting her attempt to free herself, jumping in his arms like crazy. So actually she was listening to shaleen!

"and jahan tak mujhe rules pata h, there is no rule like I can't bring anything other thrash along with the cloth."

Girls team had already started screaming from behind to oppose this unjust action in game.

"Tum meri jindagi ki sabse badi aaffatt ho! leave me right now!"-she barked on him, still briskly trying to evade from his grasp.

Shaleen proudly reached the margin of boy's team and left her down to fall freely.

She was dumped down carelessly. -"aaaoocchh!!" she winced in pain, which started already healing supernaturally.

"how dare you leave me?"-

"what do you want from me haan?- YOU asked me to leave you!"- he mocked, he just loved to tease her. He snatched the cloth out of her hand, and winked mischievously to her.

Cloth has reached the boy's team boundary-VICTORY! Boys wolf-whistled in rejoice. Shaleen left her then and there like a non living item. She just could not believe it the rudeness of a boy can go this far..."bigde wolfy!" she threw the words in anger. She stood up, and reluctantly started walking towards girls' team. Girls flock ran to boys like hungry wild cats. Shaleen's innovative way to score a point was not at all appreciated by girls.

The quarrel starts- its cheating- no score!! V/S Cloth has reached the boundary -it's a score.!!

Boys could not manage their angry queens- they just escaped by saying-"chill darling- let's keep this a draw match! Neither you loose, nor we win! All equal and even".

It still didn't end.


To be continued...in next post.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


UPDATE 23-
(part 2)

Days passed. Some bonds became stronger, some more critical. Silent lovers Sia and Vikrant use to spend swastika -less and non-shaleen moments in library. Shaleen and swastika use to see face of library, haphazardly.

Bitterness between Swastika and Jhanvi increased day by day, they were all time ready to murder each other.

Manayata was carrying a trey filled with interesting fast food for her friends to their table. She was just crossing jhanvi's table from beside when Tina indulged her leg to her steps for her to fall. The trey fell on Jhanvi's table and the chocolate shake splashed on jhanvi's dress.

Jhanvi shot up- you DOLT!"-barked jhanvi and manyata's body racked, -"why the hell you are born on earth? Can't you carry even a silly trey properly! You lower middle class being, such uncivilized, are seriously something not correct"

Swastika boiled. She could not tolerate it, moreover her patience under royal hormones is almost negligible.

At the same time the Takshila's bell gonged to announce the beginning of another period of Black-magic class.

"there is seriously something wrong in you Mrs Nazi or to be precise- you r utterly wrong. You are born as a bunch of faults"-swastika roared, when sia tried to calm her down instantly and pull her towards the class. But swastika was in very generous mood today- she was not going to leave jhanvi so easily today. She wanted jhanvi to be no more deprived of knowledge about herself.

"let me actually point out all faults in you"-swastika offered to uninterested Jhanvi. Sia was still pulling her out of canteen.

"First of all, I don't understand that economic recession in Alaukiksthan has been so stringent that affected your palace so badly, leaving no grocery in storage of it and as a result your are starving?" (Jayashree to joined sia in pulling swastika out of this fuss, but swastika adamant to stand there, manyata was smiling at jhanvi's inflated face) "Secondly, what is there to be so haughty about being a princess?" (jaya and sia succeeded in pulling her one step away) "and next one- there is seriously something wrong with your face too- but I could not ever manage to point it out. (jaya started using her supernatural power to skid her out of here) ..swastika continued-"may be its your too much flared up nose. And about your oversized eyes- I suggest you to consult a doctor-you may be suffering from all time ophthalmia. (sia was happy that finally they are going out of canteen with swastika, very soon)- Swastika didn't care- she still continued to bark on Jhanvi. "and yes your swollen lips, they don't suit your withered cheeks,-" (swastika vanished behind the door of canteen ) "-so brush your teeth properly!" -she howled even out of canteen. Swastika sighed to relax, but she was happy that she delivered what she wanted to. Her lips sported a mischievous smile.

Inside canteen, scrawny Jhanvi stood shock-stricken, shrinking even more in insult.

Its not just Swastika and Jhanvi's hate-story rocking around- there is another relation going through juncture.

The craziest coincidence Takshila ever had in its history was- Shaleen's locker was neighbor of Vishal's locker in boys' common room.

Just once Vishal's paper sticker of a wrestler crossed it limit and its 1cm square units was proudly sticking on door of shaleen's rack.

Shaleen saw it and expunged the whole stickler out of vishal's locker.

Vishal bellowed-"what the f88k is your problem dude!"

"my problem is you blockhead"-frankly said shaleen.

He was just about to leave when vishal caught his collar and barked on his face, just 20 cms away from his-"let me finish it all today-either you or me alive here!"

He pulled vishal's collar to 3inches this time to see right through his eyes. "for your factual information-do you have a mere idea how much damage will be caused to my knuckles if they hit your nose?"-said shaleen to intimidation.

"how much?"-said vishal.

"not at all!"shaleen flamboyantly said after a breathe. "and do you have any other idea how your nose could suffer?"

Vishal didn't dare to ask it.

"it will be eliminated out of your face!"-he warned.

Before wrath of these contenders could consume each other, they were brought apart by other boys in the hall.

Its all that's not only wrong things happening. Forgetting all about her ego and royalty-swastika learnt to be self-reliant. She could now spread her bed sheet by own, fold her cloths nicely, iron them too and stitch a button in emergency. Even polishing her shoes. Another thing she loved to learn was the typical uncivilized hindi words- velley (unemployed), gannta (boring), pakao, dabba (empty-head), thengaa ... and few filthy words in addition.

"jab bhi fight reaches the time you can't tolerate- you have to roar- TERI MAA KI-" explained Sia, while literally imitating a scene in front of swastika.

Swastika waited for next. 5 seconds passed plainly.. "iske aage?"-she asked curiously.

"iske aage kuch nahi! Bass TERI MAA KI-"sia shrudded her shoulders.

"aise kaise? TERI MAA KI- ...iske aage kuch tho hona chahiye!"-swastika objected.

"samjhne wala samjh jayega swazy! Tum bas itna bolna"-Sia tried a excuse to escape.

"haan thik h- but muje bhi tho samjh aana chahiye naa!"-she said with a dropped face, stubbornly.

Sia helplessly nodded in despair. She knew it, she damn knew it that one day the royal Neelnayans- The NAZEER DELLORE's will behead her for debauching their princess SWASTIKA NAZEER DELLORE.

Another major event were elegant love story of monitor of 1st year Uday and Jayahsree and slow moving love track of Mehul and Manyat.

Swastika was living her life to fullest- a non-princess-ness life. She could scream, dance, fight, comment, taunt-everything which is prohibited in her palace-a ocean of etiquettes.

Shaleen enjoyed every breathe he was filling in Takshila. He furnished his sports skill. And yes- he never use to bunk a couple dance classes.



HALF YEAR PASSES...

Destiny and god, reunites again to bring the fates of ACE OF SUPERNATURALS together.

Here on starts a series of plots and games being played by them to crescent the supernaturalism of the world ALUAKIKSTHAN to zenith.

The story is in full swing again...

Precape- a promo to next threat 😉

Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
YEH BHI PADAIYE PLZZZ-



hello guys!!...
belated merry Christmas and a happy new year!!

this is going to be last update of this threat...

a short interesting promos will be added soon...

since i want it to be completing its 150 pgs.. so do help me-all kinds of discussion and doubts are invited... its good to see many new readers here... it really delighting...

plzz do not put res if u hav no plan to edit it!!- coz dats really annoying...

most important- keep supernatural-ing!!!!😉

lov yaa all!

-sweetsanyo


Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rashmi! !!!!!!!
I can't even tell u how happy I was to see that you have updated
Seriously it was mind blowing yaar
The dog in the bone scene was damn amazing how innovative and romantic thought by shaleen

But then bechari ko chor ke chala gaya
Loved the way swazy insulted jhingola
And vishal and shaleen fight was awesome loved the way he said not at all
Sia teaching uncivilised words 😆
Doubt tha yaar
Jaya uday , mehul manyata ,vicky sia sabki story aage badi ye swastika shaleen ko kuch feel nahin hua?
But bahut accha update tha thank u so much
Please update soon 😛

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