MAANEETSS-THE JOURNEY[epilogue:pg112-june12th]

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tamannA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

awsem update wanna a big epilogue

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rani1391

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

awsem update please give epilogue

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Its really awesome.I postponed to read this at nite becoz I wanted to read with concentration.When I was reading I think every thing is in front of me.First I wanna say one thing take that small girl to me I ll beat her as much as I can.Her silly mom how she not stopped her.

My Geet u r really brave girl lik ur boy 😳 . Maan to jo hai no need to tell anybody.U know I already told u this hijacks seemed real to me.SO many real life hijacks had same situations which u explained here but added bit masala which is much needed.

Poor bechara junior artist became real life hero .How all passengers helped to fight a big battle that should be appreciated .Pari played great role here.Even I can say from pari to that cleaner every body played their part.

But Brij ko thoda time deti Maan se pitne ka haaye kitna maza aata.

Thanx for ur lovey story. But where is epilogue U should also go for it.To show emotions of passengers n their dear ones.

Lov U dear

I also wanna beat those silly stupids who avoid these beautiful creations Sorry if I hurt any one

Hugs for u 🤗

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

wow!that was so superb...
Loved the journey and plan a lot..

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Simran Kaur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Amazing update dear 👏
loved it..

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

Jyothi and Mona...first of all this is for u both... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

For giving me the best SS I have read till date...It was thrilling from the word go and u both managed to keep up the exciting pace right to the end...

As for the last part...my heart was in my mouth literally when that little girl went back inside to get her doll...Not even for a moment did i imagine that the man would be so cruel as to plant a bomb on a little girl...But then since when did terrorists become human???

The end was so very surprising...Only a clever officer would have thought to get rid of all the terrorists (including real Dev) in one shot...

Brilliant SS dears...enjoyed reading it...Please write another such SS...and that too soon...

Bye for now...Waiting fro more to read from u both...Thanx for pm dear...