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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

well this chapter really made me cry too. you wrote it so brilliantly K.!

i really admired your work here.! the confusion going on in his mind whether

to hold her or not was so perfectly written.! i really appreciate it.! but now m curious

as hell after reading the teaser, i mean why did her buaji stopped arnav..? i mean he's

a good guy and she will also not be wanting her to become one of the Jha's so why..?

do continue soon..😊

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Arshi4evrnevr

@Arshi4evrnevr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

That was really good 😃

Loved it and thanks for the PM 😊

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#853

I know as a writer you expect criticism but do not doubt your work. It personally offends me because I love your work sooo much.

This ff is like a movie and all I'm missing is popcorn which I would eat if I wasn't hacking and coughing. Gross.

I hope you update soon...like oh I don't know...today :)

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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#854

RES yesss finally

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Ughhh

Hate that S*lt shyams ughh you k that b I t c h along with his older bro

Great part it's so emotional 😭

Feel terriable for Kushi !! And just amazing and wonderful updates

!! I love how the story is progressing !

And am now excited about the next part update ASAP k

Pleaaase love the teaser omggg yeses waiting impatiently loots of love thank u for pm looking forward :)

Xoxox

Hira

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Its really soo good,...

I love the scene between Arnav and Khushiii..

and you really made me think Arnav as a Police Officer... Thank yous ooo mcuh

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

ah lovely chapter, full of tears though! :( omg... shyam is a rakshas.. seriously! i can't believe they didn't give the family a single day to mourn over babuji's death! where is akash and payal??? i was hoping they'd be there already... :/ oh god... why is buaji stoping arnav from saving khushi's life??!! ugghh

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#857

Tht y awesome update.
Shyam is a mental.
The teaser looks awesome.
She was so scared n she is sharing her fear with Arnav.
Hope Arnav marries her there in front of Buaji n Garima.
Bt wat is khushi's past.
I hope Garima reveals tht to Arnav

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#858

OMGGG... i am dying for the next part!!!

she needs to gooo with him!! he needs to save her!!

this story just keeps killing me!!! Love the plot!! just dont kill them... lol

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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#859

shyam is a sick man! a very delusional sick man!
hate him for causing kushi this big grieve! 😡

but thank goodness arnav came early or else...

kushi has someone to protect her now...ah...this is good...
so pls dont stop him, buaji...

and thank u so much for the translations..
it helps... a lot! 👍🏼