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namirakhan

@namirakhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

pl. do chap 14 before u take that break !

the teaser was a real tease...!

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Wonderful update !!!

I just loved it !!!

I do understand you, but give us the next chapter as soon as possible !!!!

I just can't wait !!!

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simi888

@simi888

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

thank you for the update.

I was a bit hesitant to read the chapter to begin with as i knew it would deal with khushi's loss of her father and i knew without a shadow of doubt that you would do such an amazing job and that it would be a hauntingly real description of emotions which no doubt would leave me a lil sad.

The way you described khushi's pain, you could sense their fear and loss and you did complete justice to it. You did a splendid job in describing each emotion and they all flowed so beautifully. I was completely taken in by the pain Khushi was feeling and the sense of responsibilty she was showing.

Moving on to Shyam - what a creep! He is one seriously messed up dude! I actually found myself feeling sorry for him, thinking he needs to see a doc soon as he must have some issues - he had tears in his eyes for the guy he just killed himself!!

Was sooo pleased that arnav went to see her and it was a really sweet and sad moment when she cried in his arms. The precap, i was so glad that garima told arnav about the "proposal", i can see our main man stepping in to help!

It was one of your best chapters i have read, it began with sadness but i feel ended with hope. its a rocky road ahead for them but theres still hope! really cant wait to read more.

Thank you once again for a fab chapter!

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Grrr Shyam! I can't believe they would just try to take her like that. ACP Arnav to the rescue!

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ArnavKiKhushi

@ArnavKiKhushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

I just read the entire story and I'm wondering how the heck I missed it before. It's fantastic! I love the concept of the story. An honest policeman ALWAYS wins my heart, and Arnav is definitely not an exception. I love seeing his straightforward and serious nature complementing khushi's simplicity and bubbliness. Like in all of your stories, the chemistry between the pair is palpable and crackling in its intensity.

Poor shashi. His courage in refusing shyam's "proposal" was astounding.

Can't wait to learn the truth behind the khushi mystery! Lovely story! 👏

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schatten

@schatten

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

awesum update

plz buaji let khishi go with arnav

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Shruti

@...shruti...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#807

OMG shashi is really dead and shyam hate him FIL u murdered and now saying all that stuff

he is psychotic

i hope arnav marries khushi before anyone does

great update

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3llie

@3llie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

I don't know what you where worried about

The chapter wasn't too long in my humble
Opinion it could have been longer :)

The emotions you portray are beautiful as they are conveyed in simplicity though they are anything but simple. I feel what every character is feeling.

Every part was important but the part that gotta attention was, not the one you may expect. It wasn't when Arnav feels helpless, that he doesn't know how to comfort khushi. Often they are the center of my attention but this time Shyam stole the show with:

To gain something, you got to lose something He thought, Don't worry Khushiji, you may be crying right now, but I had to do this. Otherwise we wouldn't have been able to be together. Don't cry Khushiji. This bad time will pass, and then you will look back and smile at how beautifully I planned it all out for us.

It's amazing how delusional he is, he seriously thinks she will appreciate that he killed her father!

Well done Krani, can't wait for the rest

Thank you for taking your time to give us these beautiful stories