IPKKND: Temporary Insanity Part 17:Pg 103

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Hahaha, the update was sooo funny! Loved it!

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: nyxx

ahah, I like that 😉

and you must make me a part of this Nayika Dictionary of yours..😆

But I must say since Ive gotten hold of you, that you write wonderfully, and comedy is a genre that is very easy to fall in love with because it makes smile, and laugh...and its also a peice of writing that is hard to write and depict to the readers. So kudos for that, girl!!

and you've also raised my hopes for a character like Dhruv in the show as well! 😳

Haha, basically I tend to add -age to a lot of words and that's pretty much it. Also I say dude and dudette a lot in real life.

You always have a hold of me! Send me a PM or a scrap, I don't bite :P

So glad you like it, I do think comedy is the hardest to write so I'm so happy people like this FF.

Oh man, Dhruv is going to be such a disappointment to me when he turns up on the show, I just know it!

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: reyabear
HAHAHAHAHA 'stay right where you are, i swear on Devi Maiyya' hahahahahh! Aww KKG is so cute trying to sound all threatening and all. And hahahahah, Akash ewww why would you want to disclose personal bedroom details to your brothers?? Blech blech! And he still calls her 'Payal JI' 🤣
I find that hilarious! And Dhruv! Hahahah, cricket bat! Hahaha! This has got to be my most favorite update in this FF yet. Loved it! 🤣

Oh come on, he had the sex talk from his Bhabi/Sister in law! All propriety flew out of the window there and then!

Haha, it was actually my favourite part to write as well :D

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: nayika

Haha, basically I tend to add -age to a lot of words and that's pretty much it. Also I say dude and dudette a lot in real life.

You always have a hold of me! Send me a PM or a scrap, I don't bite :P

So glad you like it, I do think comedy is the hardest to write so I'm so happy people like this FF.

Oh man, Dhruv is going to be such a disappointment to me when he turns up on the show, I just know it!

Thats a good thing, and I feel its better if you use such vocab or certain words, because that only makes the readers more comfortable in imagining the story, and also, you feel a deeper connection to the characters, and the story itself.

and ahah I surely will next time, but with Pre-med taking a toll...I barely have time to come here and just surf in peace...its more like my bedtime thing nowadays..

Dhruv I find will be a refreshment or atleast a pivotal character in the story when the time comes, and Im hoping against hope here, but I'd like them make use of him and develop the character, and not leave him hanging like theyve done with NK or Akash...and even before that, it better be a good actor 😉

I'll stop spamming here...see ya around😳

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Well I get that you wanted to surprise Khushi and that the helicopter arrived late, but what exactly was your face doing by her knee? HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAA!!!! You're the best!!! no joke! hands down!

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Marci

@Marci

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

🤣 🤣 🤣 EPIC!!!!!

Lmfao, Dhruv is hilarious!!!!! Akash, oh gosh, trying to give details about your wife and you getting it on is so Not cool!!!

'Well I get that you wanted to surprise Khushi and that the helicopter arrived late, but what exactly was your face doing by her knee? ...no wait actually, we don't need those kind of details.' lmfao, priceless!!

Awww poor Arnav, swollen jaw and bruised arm!! Poor baby!!!

Loved this update dear, loved the humor!!!

Please update soon!!!

Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 13 years ago

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

HAHAHA!!! NK coming in with a hairbrush!!! that's so dangerous! for a mosquitoe maybe. 🐷 n getting hit with the icepack! what an image!!!🤣

n dhruv narrowly escaping wiv the cricket bat...lol!!! 👏poor akash!! sixer huh?? i don't wanna know where it connected...but i do know payal is sooo not having a honeymoon🤡

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is on a Barun Sobti detox program. Not luking at his pics 4 more than 2 secs.Closing my eyes when he comes on screen. In all Honesty. HA.