KHWAAB (MAANEET FF) part 3 pg 5

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INTRODUCTION

A SMALL GIRL HOLDING A TROPHY CAME RUNNING TOWARDS HER HOUSE WITH A BIG SMILE PLASTERED ON HER FACE.COMING INSIDE SHE SHOUTED.

G- MUMMA'.MUMMMA KAHAN HO AAP?

BUT INSTEAD OF REPLY SHE HERAD SOME NOISES'.SHE MOVED TOWARDS THE ROOM FROM WHER THE VOICE WAS COMING SHE PEEPED INSIDE AND SAW HER FATHER SHOUTING AT HER MOTHER.

M- SAMAJHTI KYA HAI TU KHUDKO.MERE SAAMNE MOOH KHOLTI HAI.AND HE SLAPPED HER HARD..

L-MERI GALTI KYA HAI..YAHI KI MAIN APNE MAAP BAAP KE KHILAAF AAPSE SHAADI KI.AAP PAR BHAROSA KIYA AUR AAPNE MUJHE KIYA DIYA?

M- BESHARAM AURAT MUJHE ULTA JAWAAB DETI HAI'HE STARTED HITTING HER BADLY.

THE LITTLE GIRL GOT SCARED AND RAN TO HER ROOM CRYING ,SHE HID HERSELF AT A CORNER AND STARTED TO CRY BADLY.AFTER SOMETIME HER MOTHER CAME TO HER

L- GEET BETA KYA HUA AAP KAB AAYE AUR RO KYON RAHA MERA BACHCHA..KYA HUA.

GEET HUGGED HER MOTHER AND STARTED TO CRY'.

G- MAA PAPA BOHUT BURE HAI WO AAPKO KITNA MAARTE HAI..

L- NAHI BETA AISA NAHI KEHTE WO AAPKE PAPA HAI NA.AISE NAHI KEHTE MAIN TO HOON NA AAPKE SAATH..SHE HUGGED HER AND AAPKI MUMMA HAI AAPKE SAATH.AT NIGHT GEET SAW THAT EVERYTHING WAS NORMALBETWEEN HER MOTHER FATHER. THIS WAS THE DAILY ROUTINE FOR GEET TO WATCH HER FATHER-MOTHER FIGHT LIKE ANYTHING,HER FATHER USED TO BEAT HER MOTHER AND AFTER SOMETIME EVRYTHING BECOMES NORMAL.SLOWLY SLOWLY HATRED GATHERED IN GEETS HEART FOR HER FATHER .GEET STARTED IGNORING HER FATHER AND THE HATRED KEPT ON INCREASING.SHE ALWAYS USE TO TELL HER MOTHER TO GET SEPARATED FROM HER FATHER SO THAT THEY CAN LIVE HAPPILY BUT HER MOTHER ALWAYS IGNORES HER QUESTION

AFTER 10 YEARS.

GEET(23YRS)- DEAR DIARY,

AAJ PHIR SE WAHI SABH.JAB MAIN COLLEGE SE WAAPIS AAYI,HUMESHA KI TARAH MAA 'PAPA LAD RAHE THE.BACHPAN SE AB TAK YAHI DEKHTE AAYI HOON PAPA KA MAA KO TAANA DENA,LADAYI JHAGDA.MERE ITNE KEHNE KE BAAD BHI MAA-PAPA SE ALAG HONE KO TAYYAR NAHI.YOON TO WO KEHTI HAI KI WO MERE LIYE PAPA KE SAATH REHTI HAI PAR MUJHE YE PATA HAI KI WO UNSE BOHUT PYAR KARTI HAI.PAR YAHI PYAR AAJ TAK MERE LIYE AZAAB BAN GAYA HAI.JAB BHI MAIN DUSRON I FAMILY KO DEKHTI HOON TO MUJHE BHI LAGTA HAI KI KAASH MERE BHI MAA-PAPA AISE HI HOTE .

MERI ZINDAGI TO HUMESHA SE KHAALI HAI,KYA BHAGWAANJI KOI BHI NAHI HAI JO MUJHE PYAR KARE MUJHE APNAAYE MERE AKELEPAN KO DUR KARE.

MAINE BACHPAN SE EK HI KHWAAB DEKHA HAI KI EK RAJKUMAR AYEGA AUR MUJHE KHOOB PYAR DEGA AUR IS DUNIYA SE DURLE JAAYE.

"KYA YE MERA KHWAAB POORA HOGA?"YA MERI BHI ZINDAGI MERI MAA KI TARAH HOGI???


CHARACTER SKETCH

GEET HANDA-


BELONGS

TO A MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY.SINGLE CHILD OF THEIR PARENTS.ALWAYS LONELY,SHY,BEAUTIFUL. GIRL,SCARED OF FIGHTS.

RANO HANDA-


A WORKING WOMEN.LOVES HER DAUGHTER VERY MUCH.HAD A LOVE MARRIAGE WITH GEET'S FATHER BUT BOTH USED TO FIGHT LIKE HELL.THOUGH LOVES HER DAUGHTER BUT MANY TIMES IGNORE HER FOR THE WORK.

KAPIL HANDA-


AN ARROGANT MAN,USE TO BEAT HER WIFE.CLAIMS TO LOVE HER DAUGHTER BUT DOESN'T TAKES ANY OF HER RESPONSIBILITIES BECAUSE OF WHICH HIS WIFE HAS TO DO JOB.KEEPS HIS MONEY TO HIMSELF.



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INDEX

PART1- PG 1
PART 2- PG 3
PART 3- PG 5
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reallyyy nice... plsss update soon d next parts dear šŸ˜›
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Awesome start

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PART 1

SCENE1(COLLEGE)

PINKY(GEET'S BEST FRIEND,KNOWS EVERYTHING ABOUT HER FAMILY.SUPPORTS HER LIKE A TRUE FRND)-ARE GEET MERI JAAN KAHAN THI TU,TUJHE DHUNDTE DHUNDTE MERE 2 KG KAM HO GAYE.MUJHE WAAPIS CANTEEN JAANA PADEGA.

G- PINKY TUJHE KHAANE KE ALAWAA KUCH AUR AATA HAI?APNA COLLEGE KHATM HO RAHA HAI AUR TUJHE KHAANE SE FURSAT NAHI.

P- ARE TU FIKAR KYON KAR RAHI HAI MAINE TO SAB PLAN KAR LIYA HAI?AUR WAISE BHI TUJHE KYA FIKRA COLLEGE KI TOPPER HAI TUJHE TO SCHOLARSHIP MIL RAHI HAI LONDON ME PADHAI KE LIYE AUR JAHAN TU JAYEGI WAHAN MAI TO AAUNGI.

G- PINKY MERI KUCH SURITY NAHI HAI MAIN MAAN KO CHODKAR KAISE JAA SAKTI HOON?

P-DEKH GEET TU KOI BAKWAAS NAHI KAR,TUJHE LIFE TIME OPPORTUNITY MILI HAI LOG TARASTE HAI AISI OPPORTUNITY KE LIYE.TU HI SOCH AUNTY NE ITNE SAAL MEHNAT KI HAI TAAI TU APNI MBBS KI PADHAI PURI KAR SAKE APNE PAIRON PE KHADE HO SAKE AUR AAJ TUJHE YE OPPORTUNITY MIL RAHI HAI.ISE KHO MAT.

GEET CAME BACK FROM THE COLLEGE AND HUGGED HER MOTHER FRM BACK.

G- HEY MAA'

R- HMM TO MIL GAYI TUJHE FURSAT APNI MAA KE LIYE..

G- KYA MAA AAP BHI'

R- TO SAB TAYYARI KAR LI JAANE KE LIYE?

G- MAAN AAP JAANTI HO NA KI..

R- HAAN HAAN MAIN JAANTI HOON TUJHE JAANE KA MAN NAHI HAI LEKIN BETA MERE ITNE SAALON KI MEHNAT AAJ SAFAL HUI HAI.TU KAAMYAAB HOGI TO MERI KAAMYAABI AUR BADHEGI,AUR TU MERI FIKAR MAT KAR JAHAN ITNE SAAL TERE PAPA KE SAATH GUZARE HAI WAHAN KUCH AUR SAHI.AUR BETA WO BHI TO KITNE KHUSH ..

G- PLZ MAA MERE LIYE UNKI KHUSHI KITNI HOTI HAI MAIN JAANTI HOON,JAHAN PAISE DENE KI BAAT AAYEGI PHIR SE UNKA WAHI CHILLA-CHILLI SHURU HO JAAYEGI.

R- PAR BETA..WO TERE PAPA HAI

G- PLZ MAA MERA AUR UNKA RISHTA AAP MAT HI MUJHE YAAD DILAAIYE.MAI SIRF AUR SIRF AAPKE LIYE RUKI HOON.WARNA KAB KA'.CHODIYE MAAN MAIN BAS ITNA CHAHTI HOON KI JALD SE JALD APNE PAIRON PAR KHADE HOKE US INSAAN SE DUR CHALI JAAON.

SUDDENLY A VOICE CAME.RANOO'

G- LO AA GAYE..PHIR UNKE SAAMNE DRAMA KARO ZABARDASTI KA BAAT KARO''''''

R-AIA NAHI KEHTE BETA JAO UNHE APNI SCHOLARSHIP KE BAARE ME BATAO'

K- ARE GEET PADHAI KAISI CHAL RAHI HAI..

G-PAPA MERI PADHAI PURI HO CHUKI HAI RESULT AA GAYA HAI MUJHE SCHOLARSHIP MILA HAI LONDON JAAKE PADHNE KE LIYE.

K- KYA AUR TUM DONO NE MIL KE FAISLA KAR LIYA KI TUM JAA RAHI HO.MUJHSE POOCHNA ZAROORI NAHI HAI.MAA TO MAA BETI KO BHI APNE JAISE BANA LIYA HAI.

R- AISI KOI BAAT NAHI HAI AAP GUSSA KYON HAI ,CHALIYE KHAANA KHA LIJIYE..

K- TU TO CHUP KAR BETI KO BHI APNE JAISE BANA LIYA.RAKH APNE KHAANA APNE PAAS.

AND HE WENT FROM THERE TO HIS ROOM.

G(TEARS IN HER EYES)-DEKH LIYA MAA YAHI BATANE KO KEH RAHI THI NA,KITNE KHUSH HO GAYE NA AUR MUJHE BHI KITNI KHUSHI DE DI 'HAI NA MAA..(SHE SAID AND RAN TO HER ROOM)

R- GEET BETA SUN TO'.

GEET SAT ON HER BED AND STARTED TO CRY..

G- KYON BHAGWAANJI KYON AISI KISMAT LIKHI MERI,KYON AISA BAAP MERI ZINDAGI ME LIKHA.KYA MUJHE HAQ NAHI HAI EK DIN BHI KHUSH REHNE KA EK DIN BINA KISI KARWAAHAT KE REHNE KA'.AGAR MERI BHI KISMAT MERE MAAA KI TARAH HI LIKHI HAI AAPNE TO ISSE ACHCHA MUJHE MAUT DE DE''..(SHE SLEPT WHILE WEEPING).

SCENE2(LONDON)

A MAN SITTING IN HIS OFFICE SHOUTING AT HIS SECRETARY.

M-WAT D HELL.DIMAAG KAHAN REHTA TUMLOGON KA.MAINE MR.SHARMA KI FILE MAANGI THI.JUST GET LOST.

S- SORRY SIR'

M- PATA NAHI KAHAN DHYAAN REHTA HAI SABKA'NOW GO AND GET ME THE CORRECT FILE.

S- YES SIR

HIS PHONE RANG'

M- HELLO.JI DADIMA

D- MAAN AAP AB TAK OFFICE ME HAI..

M- DAIMA KUCH KAAM THA.

D- MAAN AAP APNA KHAYAL BILKUL NAHI RAKHTE..AAP GHAR AA JAIEYE.

M- DADIMA APP JAANTI HAI MAIN WAHAN NAHI AAOUNGA,BAS THODI DER ME MAIN NIKAL RAHA HOON.

D- TO THEEK HAI HUM FARM HOUSE AATE HAI.

M- NAHIN DADIMA AAP AARAAM KIJIEYE MAIN AAPSE KAL OFFICE ME MIL LOONGA.

D-MAAN KYA AAP UNHE KABHI MAAF NAHI KARENGE?

M- MAIN RAKHTA HOON DADIMA..

SAVITRI DEVI SIGHED,

S- NA JAANE WO PAL KAB AAYEGA JAB HUME HUMARE MAAN HUMARA POORA PARIWAAR WAAPIS MILEGA..HEY BHAGWAAN HUMARE MAAN KI ZINDAGI ME THODI SI KHUSHIYAAN DE DIJIYE.


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Hiii
Congras on da new ff
Interesting start
Poor geet
Can't wait 4 maans entry
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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awesome update...
koi father apne daughter k saath aise kar sakte kya?
i really loved it...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
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GUYS I KNOW MANY OF U THINK KI KYA KOI FATHER APNI BETI KE SAATH AISA KAR SAKTA.BUT BELIEVE ME GUYS I HAVE FACED IT AISE BHI FATHERS HOTE.I HAVE GONE THROUGH THIS PHASE AND STILL GOING THROUGH.

ANYWAYS THANKS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES.I KNOW U MAY FEEL THE STARTING AND THIS PART TO BE BORE,BUT U WILL SURELY GET TO SEE INTERESTING PARTS IN THE COMING UPDATES.BUT THESE PARTS WERE NECESSARY TO GIVE THIS FF A BASE WHICH WILL EFFECT THE FUTURE COMING PARTS AND THE BASIC STORY.

PART 2

SCENE 1

MAAN RETURNED FROM THE OFFICE AND WENT STRAIGHT TO THE OUTHOUSE,HE SAW HIS GRANDMOM SITTING THERE WAITING FOR HIM.

M-DADIMA AAP, YAHAAN.

D- KYON HUM YAHAN NAHI AA SAKTE.

M- NAHI AISI BAAT NAHI HAI DADIMA.

D- MAAN AAJ HUM YAHAN EK ZAROORI BAAT KARNE AAYE HAI.MAAN HUM CHAHTE HAI AAP HUMARE SAATH GHAR CHALIYE.

M- DADIMA AAP JAANTI HAI AISA NAHI HO SAKTA,MAIN US GHAR ME KADAM NAHI RAKHOONGA JAB TAK WO INSAAN WAHAN PE HAI.

D-WO INSAAN AAPKE PITA HAI MAAN.

M- WO PITA JISNE MUJHSE MERI MAA CHEEN LI(HE SAID ANGRILY)

D- ITNE SAAL HO GAYE MAAN,WO AAJ TAK APNI GALTI KA PACHTAWA KAR RAHE HAI.KYA AAPKA FARZ NAHI HAI KI AAP UNHE MAAF KARDE,

M-DADIMA IS BAARE ME HUM BAAT NA KARE TO HI ACHCHA HAI.MAIN FRESH HONE JA RAHA HOON MUJHE KAL PARIS JAANA HAI MEETING KE LIYE.

SCENE 2

R- PACKING HO GAYI BETA.

G- HAAN MAA HO GAYI.BAS AB AAP DHYAAN RAKHIYE APNA AUR MERI FIKRA CHODIYE(SHE SAID WHILE HUGGING).

R- KAISE FIKRA NA KAROON,MERI BETI MUJHSE ITNIDOOR JAA RAHI HAI

G- MAA AA MUJHE EMOTIONAL MAT KARO AUR WAISE BHI AAPKO TO TIME KA PATA BHI NAHI CHALEGA,DIN BHAR TO AAP OFFICE ME HOGE AUR SHYAAM KO AAPKO APNE HUSBAND SE FURSAT NAHI.

R- GEEET AISA NAHI BOLTE.

G-ACHCHA CHODO,TIME HOGAYA MAIN AIRPORT KE LIYE NIKALTI HOON CHALO JALDI SE MUJHE LAMBI SI HUG DO.

RANO HUGGED HER AND PATTED HER HEAD LIGHTLY.

R- GEET BETI APNE PAPA SE MILKE JAANA.

G- JEE.

GEET KNOCKED THE DOOR OF HER FATHERS ROOM.

G-PAPA

P-TO MIL GAYI FURSAT APNE BAAP KE PAAS AANE KI.

G- NAI PAPA WO PACKING ME BUSY HO GAYI THI.

KA-SAARA SAAMAAN RAKH LIYA.

G-JEE.

K-THEEK HAI.FLIGHT KA TIME HO RAHA HAI,JAAO KAHIN FLIGHT MISS NA HO JAAE.ACHCHE SE PADHNA,HUMARA NAAM KHARAAB NAHI HONA CHAHIYE.

G-JEE,MAIN CHALTI HOON.MAA MAIN NIKALTI HOON DHYAAN RAKHIYEGA.

R- DHYAAN RAKHNA BETA AUR POHUCH KE PHONE KARNA..

GEET MOVED OUT BUT FORGOT HER MOBILE SO CAME BACK IN D HALL WHEN SHE HEARD HER FATHER SAY.

K-AKHIR APNI HI MANMAANI KI TUMNE,BHEJ DIYA USE BAHAR PADHNE KE LIYE.KYA HO JAATA AGAR WO YAHI PADH LETI?

R-AGAR BHEJ DIYA TO KYA HOGAYA.USKI BHALAI KE LIYE HI TO HAI.YE USKE CARRER KE LIYE BOHUT ACHCHA HAI. AUR MUJHE APNI ETI PAR POORA BHAROSA HAI.

K- HAAN HAAN DEKHENGE.JITNA SAR PE CHADHYA HAI NA BHUKTOGI.

GEET JUST MOVED OUT OF THE HOUSE WIPING HER TEARS WISHING IN HER HEART(EK BAAR PYAR SE SAR PAR HAATH HI PHER DIYA HOTA PAPA PAR AAP TO..KHAIR AAPSE UMMEED BHI KYA KI JAA SAKTI HAI.BAS EK WAADA KHUD SE KATI HOON PAPA KE ITNI KAAMAAYB TO ZAROOR BANOONGI KI AB AAPKO APNI AUR MAA KI ZINDAGI ME DEKHNE KI ZAROORAT NA PADE.

WITH THIS THOUGHT SHE MOVED TOWARDS THE AIRPORT.

THEIR SHE MET PINKY AND BOTH OF THEM BOARDED THE FLIGHT.

P- KYA HUA GEET ITNI UDAS KYON HAI?GHAR PE KUCH HUA KYA?

G- NAHI YAAR KOI BAAT NAI HAI.

P- ARE YAAR AB AUR UDAAS MAT HO SOCH KUCH DER ME HUM NEW YORK ME HONGE.HAYE NAI DISHES KHAANE KO MILENGE AUR HANDSOME HANDSOME LADKE HAYEEE..

G- PINKY TUJHE KHAANE AUR LADKON KE ALAWAA KUCH AATA HAI KYA?HUM WAHAAN PADHNE JAA RAHE HAI KAAMYAAB DOCTORS BANNE NA KI MASTI KARNE.

P- HAAN ,MERI MAA..BAS KAR AB THODI DER ME NEWYORK POHUCH JAAENGE .

G- HAAN AUR SABSE PEHLE JAAKE HOSTEL ME ROOM BOOK KARNA HOGA KYONKI ROOM KAM HAI AUR STUDENTS ZYAADA.US COUNCILLOR NE KAHA THA KI AGAR ROOM KHATM HO GAYE TO APNE REHNA KA INTEZAAM KHUD KARNA HOGA ISLIYE BEHTAR HOGA PEHLE ROOM BOOK KARWALE WARNA IS NAYI JAGAH PE REHNE KA INTEZAAM KAISE KARENGE AUR KAR BHI LIYE TO PATA NAHI KAISE LOG MILENGE.SAMJHI.

P-HAAN YE BAAT TO TUNE SAHI KAHI NEWYORK POHUCHTE HI PEHLA KAAM YAHI KARENGE.

SCENE CHANGES TO KHURANA MANSION

MAAN CAME DOWNSTAIRS AND SAW HIS DADIMA SITTING AND WAITING FOR HIM.

M- ARE DADIMA AAP ITNI SUBAH YAHAN.

D-HAAN BETE AAJ SUBAH KOI KAAM BHI NAHI HAI TO SOCHA AAPSE MILLE AUR AAPKO AIRPORT CHOD AAYE.

M- AAP MUJHE AIRPORT CHODNE JAAYENGI TO PHIR AKELE WAAPIS KAISE AAYENGI.

D- MAAN HUM BACHCHE NAHI HAI JO AKELE WAAPIS NAHI AA PAAYENGE.WAISE BHI HUME AAPSE EK PROJECT KE BAARE ME BAAT KARNA HAI.

M- THEEK HAI DADIMA CHALIYE CHALTE HAI.

BOTH SAT IN THE CAR AND THE DRIVER HEADED TOWARDS THE AIRPORT.THE OTHER SIDE GEET AND PINKY LANDED AT THE AIRPORT.

PRECAP-"'SOMETHING UNEXPECTED"

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awesome update...
maan n geet...first meeting?lets see wht happens...
really loved it...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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