ArSha FF (new)- Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas- # 1 - Page 96

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Posted: 13 years ago
if u r asking what to do with ur ff then plz continue plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please Tish dont end your FF !!! Your FF"S are the only means of my Survival !!! I have quit watching D3 a long time back ... Cant bear KriYaansh"s and the Rey"S character slaughtering ... Your FF s one of my Fav on this forum !!! Please do continue !!! I bet there are many more ppl who want you to do the same ... I read many FF"S but yours is the only one on which I comment !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
tish please continue your ff as its only hope for us i have also left the show but cant leave arsha please tish we all want to read your ff please continue it please
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz continue yr
i love ur story a lot
plzzz...
don't break our hearts lyk dis...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
plsss plsss plsss tish dnt stp dis ff...plss tish u r a fab writer n dn't do dis wid us...as 4m dese ff we cn imagine arsha/kriyaansh together plsss dn't do dis tish...plss dn't break our heart 😭 😭
plsss tish... 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
i'd really love n appreciate it if u would continue...i mean we can always keep dreaming na...even if it's an unrealistic dream now...

you are an awesome writer and ur FF is mindblowing...one of best i've read...

but in the end, it's upon u to decide as u will be writing it...whatever ur decision, we'll accept it...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey tish i totally understand what u r going through. It really hard to accept this fact but we cannot do anything about it dear. Destiny is beyond our control. :( :(

Though my hopes for seeing ArSha together in real have been chattered but I would definitely want to see ArSha unite through ur FF. Dont let this love story incomplete. Kriyansh ki Love Story ko adhura chod diya D3 walon ne but I would like a happy ending for my Arsha. chaye woh imaginary hi kyun nah ho.

I know it will be difficult for u to continue with this FF and would totally understand if u wanna stop . I will respect ur decision.

But yeah one thg i keep asking myself why us Arsha and Kriyansh fans? Our hopes are being shattered all the time one by one?Getting deception after deception. Its like we are cursed yaar. I guess i have expected too much from life.

Anyways tish, I want just to say that i luv ur writing. U r a very talented writer. Thanks for giving us these beautiful ArSha moments.

If ever u decide to continue with this FF plz do PM me dear.

Take care and all z Best.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends…. I'm going to continue this FF…. at least till I finish with this story….. I'm sorry if I hurt anyone….. really, that wasn't my intension😔….. I just wanted your opinion….. but as promised I won't ditch you'll mid way….. and thanks for your encouraging words... this FF is dedicated to all you people only, how can i leave you'll beech main?!….. just wana say, I love you all.😳

so guys, here's the next part….. sorry for the delay... hope you'll enjoy it.😊

Part 26

Next morning he woke up with a big grin on his face….. he had dreamt of her….. near the pool…. in his arms….. wait a minute?... was that a dream?... his grin broadened.

Archie who had just stepped out of the bathroom watched him apprehensively.

Archie- dude?... you ok?

Amar laughed….. got out of his bed….. hugged Archie….. and went to the bathroom.

Archie was surprised by this sudden affection….. he looked at Shantanu, who was watching them.

Archie- usse kya ho gaya?

Shantanu shrugged and chuckled.

The boys started to get ready….. After a while Amar joined them.

Amar- so aaj kya hai?

Shantanu- Mehendi ceremony hai abhi….. fir shaam ko engagement hai.

Archie- blahhh!!….. mehendi?... uss main hum kya karenge?... chalo kahin ghoomne jaate hai.

Shantanu- haan chalo chalo.

Amar- arre par…..

He was interrupted.

Archie- chal na yaar….. natak matt kar….. main baaki ladko ko bulaake aata hun.

Shantanu- aur main Palki maam ko bataake aata hunk e hum jaa rahe hai.

They left.

Amar groaned….. kya yaar…. ladke mehendi kyun nahi lagate? (roll eyes)... uske saath kab time spend kar paunga?

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Shakti hurried to the hall where the Mehendi ceremony was to begin….. she was already late….. she had overslept….. thanks to Kunwar Amarjeet Singh who had wrecked havoc with her sleep cycle….. plus she had taken some extra time in front of the mirror….. not that she was trying to impress anyone, or that's what she told herself.

She joined the girls and looked around for him….. she couldn't see anyone.

Shakti- where are the guys?

Alisha- they've gone sightseeing.

Shakti- (surprised) sightseeing?... kyun?

Alisha- what kyun?... what would they do here anyway?….. they would have been bored to death.

Samantha- acha hua chale gaye….. warna humain pareshan kar dete.

They laughed….. Shakti frowned….. he dint even tell her, he was going….. she crossed her arms….. with an angry pout on her face.

The morning went by smoothly….. she was enjoying the ceremony….. everyone laughing, pulling each other's leg, dancing and singing around….. not once had she missed anyone…… Ok who was she kidding?... she had missed him but she hated to admit it.

It was afternoon now….. she was losing her patience…. Firstly coz she was waiting for her turn to get her mehendi done….. and the other that the boys still hadn't returned from their sightseeing….. she was getting bored….. she often kept glancing at the door.

Pankti- Shaks….. kisse dhund rahi ho?

Shakti- (blinked) huh?... kisi ko bhi toh nahi.

Pankti- acha chalo, aajaao….. your turn for mehendi.

Shakti- great….. finally!!

She went and sat in front of one of the Mehendi girls.

Mehendiwali- madam, aap Shakti Mohan ho na?

Shakti smiled and nodded.

Mehendiwali- oh wow….. main toh badi fan hun……

Shakti- thank you.

Mehendiwali- (completed) Kunwar Amar ki!!

Shakti- oh

Mehendiwali- aur haan aapki bhi (embarrassed)

Shakti rolled her eyes.

Mehendiwali- woh nahi aaye hain?

Shakti- nahi, bahar gaye hai.

Mehendiwali- aaj nahi aayenge?

Shakti- (impatiently) mujhe nahi pata….. and could you please hurry.

Mehendiwali- oh yes….. sorry.

She took Shakti's hands and got down to business.

Shakti was busy watching the mehendi design being drawn on her hands….. she dint realize someone had come and sat behind her.

The Mehendi girl stopped….. Shakti looked up at her and frowned.

Shakti- kya hua?

She was staring past her and this made Shakti look over her shoulder.

Amar- hi

Shakti's voice was caught in her throat….. she swallowed hard….. he was sitting too close….. not a good sign….. she shook her head and cleared her throat.

Shakti- hi

She turned back and looked up at the girl who was gaping at him….. She could have laughed at the poor girl….. well, who knew Amar's effect on girls better than her?... she groaned silently.

Mehendiwali- Kunwar Amar????

Amar smiled at her.

Mehendiwali- oh my god!!... I'm a huge fan….. please, kya mujhe ek autograph milega?

Amar- ya sure.

Shakti rolled her eyes.

Mehendiwali- oh crap….. mere pass na pen hai, na paper….. if you don't mind could you write your name on my hand with this mehendi cone?

She handed him the cone and extended her hand out….. Amar looked at Shakti….. she was looking away, totally not interested….. he smiled at her attempt to act ignorant….. he took the cone.

Amar- how do I use this?

Mehendiwali- like this.

She held his hand and taught him how to squeeze the mehendi out of the cone…... Shakti darted them a look….. for all you know, she could have growled….. but that would be embarrassing….. when he looked up at her, she hurriedly looked away.

He wrote his name on the girl's hand…..

Mehendiwali- thank you so much. (grin)

She tried to take the cone back from his hand.

Amar- umm….. I'll keep that….. thanks (wink)

She blushed….. and Shakti groaned.

Shakti- shall we get back to work?

The girl looked embarrassed….. she quickly took Shakti's hands….. ducked her head and got down to finish her job.

Shakti heard his low rumbling laughter behind her….. but she dint turn back to give his male ego any satisfaction.

Amar laughed and laid down behind her on the mattress….. her pout looked too cute for him to resist….. she was sitting with her legs folded at her side….. he levered himself on his elbow and he reached out to cup her ankle with his free hand….. he felt her stiffen….. she tried to pull her leg away but he tightened his grip….. he leaned forward to slightly roll up the bottom of her churidar, exposing her ankle….. she turned around and glared at him….. he looked up and smiled…. She quickly glanced away.

She could feel goosebumps where his fingers grazed her skin….. she wished she could just get up and walk away…. They were in a room full people for Christ's sake!….. doesn't this guy have any sense?... she looked around the room….. luckily everyone was as oblivious as the Mehendi girl, who was busy doing her work.

Shakti felt something cool and slick on her leg and she bit back a gasp….. What the hell was he up to??... She looked over her shoulder….. he was making some silly mehendi design on her leg with the cone he had borrowed from the girl….. once again she tried to pull back….. but to no avail….. he had gripped the ankle real tight…. If only her hands were free, she would have slapped his hands off her.….. she sighed and gave up trying….. After a while she heard someone call him.

Macci- Amar…. dude….. Palki maam ne aaj shaam ke preparations karne bulaya hai…. chalo.

Amar- aaya.

He got up….. gave the Mehendi girl back her cone.

Amar- thank you. (smiled)

The girl frowned and took the cone, probably wondering why had he kept it in the first place?

He walked away….. the girl sighed loudly….. making Shakti glare at her.

When she was finally done with her Mehendi, she excused herself and went to her room….. she stood in front of the mirror and bent down to roll her churidar above her ankle….. she turned around to have a better look at his art work in the mirror….. She smiled and shook her head.

Shakti- pagal. (blushed)

[Amar's design]

~~~~ ARSHA ~~~~

Ps- I'll send the Pms….. if anyone wants me to stop their Pms, pls do let know….. you'll can comment if you'll like….. I won't force anyone, promise. 😔

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Posted: 13 years ago
u wrote beautifully.. u know ur an awesome writer..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww that was too cute and thanks for continuing and love this ff plzz plzz dont end it soon and plz continue till u r alive lol i know long time and loved the udpate and thanks for the pm

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