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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Thank you, thank you so much for your comments friends.🤗
it really inspires me to write.
i'll update part 3 by tonight.
thank u once again everyone.
Love you all.❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
dats really so sweet of u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
u have not PMed me ur 2nd part!
m in ur buddy list...next time plzz pm me!!
this part was great!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
omg DIS SOO FREAKING AWSUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZZZ updt faster nd pm me :P

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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
its freaking awesome...luved their chat...plzz update the next part soon n thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Dis 1s realy gud.,pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
amazing wrk...!! lov d concept...jealous shakti...n flirty Kunwar...😉
jst a suggestion if u dnt mind...cn u plz change amar to kunwar in future ff part...coz shakti calls him Kunwar n rest all call him amar...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

great part 👏
Shakti is really jealous with the thought that she has become a outsider and it is obvious.😔
Just love the way Kunwar was flurting with her n she was enjoying it.😉
Ahaan he was praising that new gal n she was getting jealous that's the start of the feeling called love. 😍
Kunwar misses her n more over she misses him n that shows she was insecure to think that anyone can take her place n it's natural n obvious .
Her tension made her eat that long chocolate bar.😆
How cute Kunwar, u love her i am sure even u don't want to share her dresses with anyone. 😍
Pls yaar try to update fast this time with longer update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
really cute sms convo!!!!
n my heart almost skipped a beat with these lines-

She knew he was kidding… but it still hurt to be called an outsider. L

[] Shakti- Argh!!! I hate you Kunwar Amarjeet Singh!! Get lost.

[] Amar- hahahaha… but I love you Shakti Mohan Sharma!!

OMG!!!!
do pm me soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Thank u once again for ur wonderful comments and suggestions... i'm sorry to have missed out on PMs... i'm new to this so just getting a hang of it... pls bear wid me... as per requested by lov_in_d_air, i'm gonna make Shakti call Amar "Kunwar" but only when she is addressing him... otherwise i'l stick to Amar cz i like that better 😉
Here is Part 3 for u all.
PART 3

One month had passed since Shakti had come to New York. She was thoroughly enjoying studying at the academy… but when she had to go back to her apartment it was another story… so she tried to stay at the academy and practice as much as possible.

She went out with her new friends often but it was never the same as being with friends in India… just yesterday she had gone for a friend's birthday party… where she was already asked out for 3 dates which she politely refused… one had even insisted on giving his number which she accepted and decided to never see it again.

Today her dance class had got over early… so she decided to head home to just chill by herself… she was relaxing and catching up on a novel when Mukti called…

Mukti- hi sis

Shakti- hey! hi muks… wassup?

Mukti- have u not checked ur emails or FB lately?

Shakti was trying to avoid FB as far as possible…

Shakti- Naa… just busy with classes… I get so beat after a full day of practice… all I do is crash at the end of the day.

Mukti- No wonder all ur fans are posting on my wall asking me about you coz u havnt replied to them in days.

Shakti- hmm

Mukti- what hmm? is everything ok, shaks?

Shakti- yaa baba… wats gonna happen?

Mukti- are you in love?

Shakti laughs… how does she make such weird conclusions out of anything so simple like not going online for long? My silly sis… Roll eyes.

Shakti- Muks… stop watching romantic movies… and give yourself a break.

Mukti- hahaha… the only romantic thing I've been watching lately is D3.

She frowned… now what?

Shakti- Acha? Aisa kya ho raha hai?

Mukti- khuch khaas nahi.

Shakti was irritated.

Shakti- fine… do you have to say anything else? I'm tired and I want to rest.

Mukti- ok got your hint… its dangerous to talk to you when you are in a bad mood… I'll call later.

Shakti- Sorry ya

Mukti- No problem sis… Tell me when you want to unload your burden.

She smiled… can anyone know me as well as she does? She's the best…

Shakti- I love you, Muks.

Mukti- I love you too sis. Rest now… Bye

Shakti- Bye

Shakti took a deep breath and went to switch on her laptop… I can't keep running away all the time… she logged in her account… she was browsing through her friend requests when she saw a request from Anjali Bhuta… oh isn't she the one? Maybe it's just a fake id… she saw her common friends… No it was indeed her… she hit the accept friend request button and was about to go back to her wall when she saw that Anjali had shared an album with her D3 friends.

She was curious to know what it was about… The album's name was 'on the sets of D3'… she saw Anjali's pictures with the entire D3 gang… they were just the usual goofy pictures which everyone posed for… but one picture caught her eyes… it was a picture where Amar was standing behind Anjali with his arms around her waist, his chin resting on her shoulder, a huge grin on his face and Anjali looking back at him laughing, with Palki maam at his side pulling his ear.

Shakti laughed… The flirt at work… She shut the album and logged off… she picked up her cell… and dialed a number…

Shakti- Hello, is that Brad?

Brad- yes?

Shakti- hi… I'm Shakti… we met last night.

Brad- oh yes… hi beautiful… wassup?

Shakti- nothing… the usual.

Brad- wanna catch up?

Shakti- I'd love to.

Brad- Great!! I'll pick you up in an hour.

Shakti- Cool

She quickly dictated her address and hung up before she changed her mind… and hurried to get ready.

PS- i'm sorry if you are disappointed... i know its short... plus the end makes u feel sick...well, i feel the same way😔... but trust me its needed for the future update which is gonna be long and fun.😊

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