IPKKND: Ineluctable Fate {Mar. 26 - Page 46 *NEW} - Page 45

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

I just realized! i meant proffesional, not unprofessional.. grrr.. i'm such an idiot. :/ sorry if you felt bad! that must've sounded sooo f**king rude.. 😡my typing has gone for a toss (blame it to the wretched IB system :P )

Originally posted by: sharneil92

RESWA! :P

damn shreya, I missed ssooo many of ur works! :( saddens me a great deal! :(

EDIT -

Well Shreya. It's too tough for you write this eh? 😭 Okay. Then even I'll review in PROPER ENGLISH! 😆 Okay! So I'll give you some company.

Thus begins my sea of incoherent words formulated together trying make as much sense as they possibly can.

Prologue -

Ah! Bravo! I see that the leads have met at last! On the Bombay docks, nonetheless. Fascinating indeed, madam.

But I rather love the impression of 1800s proprieties really coming back to life! Almost as if we have been taken to a different world. The mannerisms, the clothes, the behaviour. Lovely indeed.

Characterisation -

Pray, what kind of journey will this narration take us into? Unhappiness, romance, humour? I cannot think of what you could possibly have in mind. Some help would be gladly accepted here!

Chapter 1 -

So Mr Raizada has his eyes upon the lady. Interesting, indeed. And if I'm not wrong, she'd be off with her best friend and her husband to London? But I feel angered against Khushi's brother. He could not possibly say that she would not find a good man in India. For heaven's sake, she just met Mr Raizada in India! Incorrigible man! What conceit! 😛

Chapter 2 -

Ah! I see! The romance is alive! Oh good Lord! WE ARE SAVED! 😆 I hope to see more interactions between the love-birds. And love, do make it... inappropriate for certain people. 😉

okay. So that was me in the 1800s. I think that Sucked. BIG TIME. 😭

But I have given you my word. And I shall stick with it. 😳