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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet-ohh yeah, i forgot that she is your girlfriend...how can you make love with her in-front of me.. sorry i am leaving now you guys all alone in this cabin.. you both want some privacy na... now you can made love with your girlfriend... maan couldn't take it anymore.. she is accusing him continuously , he raised his hand to slap her but stop in mid way.. dam he cant slap her because he loves her.. but she is furious and she is more angry on him for raising his hand on her...
She was furious after seeing the disgust sight of maan & pari... maan tried to say something but geet stop by raising her hand in front of him.. she don't want to listen anything more.. jealousy, agony, humiliation are reflecting in her eyes.. eyes are filled with tears... she turned immediately for going outside the cabin and maan trying to say something but continuously geet is refusing him.. she is not in state that she can listen something about his affair & so called friendship... she left from the cabin and maan & pari behind her...
Maan-geet please.. stop... but she is not replying him back walking continuously and whole office watching them... geet please listen me for god sake... maan pleading to her... she stop and turned to him.. looked at him with her teary eyes... what? What is left for talking ? huh? Tell me.. geet nothing is like that what you have seen in the cabin... he almost shout on her in front of whole cabin... she felt very insulted in front of all employees...he shout on all employees.. get back to work now... all afraid and back to their work... he captured her by her arms and dragged her outside the office and pari is also following them... leave me..she wriggle in his grip but he is no where to listen her... i said leave me... mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai.. leave me... maan left her immediately... pari is also try to say something but before she could say something geet left them behind and ran away.. maan also ran behind her but she sat in her car and drove off... it is almost night.. maan ran his hand in his hair in frustration... sorry maan.. because of me but maan cut pari in mid and said.. there is no fault of yours.. i am responsible for all this.. you can go home... maan almost broke down from inside... pari went from there and maan stood there at one place like a statue blaming himself for all this... what he was going to do and what he had done with her... he was furious on himself but there is something missing.. he was not able to understand that she is feeling something for him or not... questioning to himself why he had done this? Questioning to her in his mind... is any slight feeling in her heart for him? Is she really felt something for him that's why she behaved like this or that was just like that being a friend..? is she only considered him as a friend or something beyond a mere friend...? so many questions in his mind...
Do you know how many feelings i carry in my heart,
how do i end my day and how do i start.
Missing you and longing 4 u is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many unspoken words i wanna say,
how can i say i keep on finding the ways.
Loving you and praying 4 you is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many dreams i have in my eyes,
how can i fulfill them i keep on telling the lies.
Preaching you and caring 4 you is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much pain is deep in my soul,
how do i bear them and keep trying to come out of the whole,
Searching you and urging 4 u is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much I LOVE YOU,
i wanna tell but unable to do.
Missing u, loving u, preaching u, searching u , what else i can do,
I wish as i feel you feel the same too...

On the other hand geet was driving madly on the roads... she feared to lose him because of unknown reasons.. she doesn't know herself why she is feeling like this? why she behaved like this? Yes that is true that she hates pari... she hate that sight when maan & pari are together but why? Is she feeling insecure but why? why this insecurity with her a mere friend or he is beyond a mere friend for her? She doesn't know herself.. she is not making any sense for herself... she was really mad at him but now she is really mad on herself for behaving like this with him.. her behavior with him was not right.. yes she knew that she should not behave like this... both are suffering.. one is from jealousy & unknown reason and another is suffering because she is not making any sense... because she replying to him.. because she is not opening herself to him.. but what she can do.. she doesn't herself what she is feeling at this very moment... some silent tears in his eyes and her eyes are filled with tears... she went her home straightly barged on her bed… maan removed his cell from his pocket and dialed her number but she cut it… he again called her but she is cutting his call continuously…. But now this is unbearable for her…. His continuous calls are making her more mad.. she threw her cell away on the land and her phone broke down into many pieces…she is crying bitterly..


maan kicked the tyre of his car & sat down in his car…and drove madly on road doesn't know where to go? Driving on alone roads….sometimes taking left or sometimes takes right.. driving in wrong directions….But he reached to some club where no one knew him.. where he can sat without any disturbance…. He is very angry on himself… what is the need of all this? why he had done this to her? Stopped the car in front of some club and entered there and sat in a corner…. Dipped his head in shame, in guilt, angry on himself…. Then manager of the club went to stage and made an announcement….
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Manager-hello everyone.. as you all know in our club every Saturday ,we called a celebrity singer here… so all of you ready for today's celebrity?
All in unison-yes..!!! clapping all the visitors…

Manager-now I am calling the celebrity singer here , and the singer is famous Atif Aslam… give him a big hand.. atif came on the stage and wave his hand to all… all give him a big hand…


Atif-hello everyone… how are you all? Before sing here , I want to tell you something that today's theme is emotionalism…pain..who is cheated in love or who has not love in their life… who is craving for love in their life or who lost their love, or who wants to do something good for their love but they did it wrong…. For whom who doubt their love…. Maan thought these all things are perfect on him.. he had done all these things with geet… and atif starts his song sitting between on the stage with his guitar….


La la la la

La la la la la la la la la - 3
Gulaabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gaya
Maan thought that first time he saw her eyes in park when she was about to fell down and he saved her from falling down then both rolled on the ground…..that time his heart missed a beat….maan sat there holding a glass full with drink… drinking madly…



and atif is singing….
Sambhaalo mujhko o mere yaaron
Sambhalna mushkil ho gaya
Someone please help maan.. after that he was lost in her… all day and night thinking about her… can't resist without her…..all are enjoying atif's song and maan is lost in himself… sometimes laughs at his situation.. and sometimes some alone tears came out from his eyes…
Dil mein mere khwaab tere
Tasveere jaise ho deewaar pe
Tujhpe fida main kyoon hua
Aata hai gussa mujhe pyaar pe
Main lut gaya maanke dil ka kaha
Main kahin tha na raha
All moments with her are kept in his heart… every moment he spent with her , he is relishing..like her pictures are on every wall of his heart… he has lost everything after falling in love with her…..atif is watching him continuously…. He sensed that he is the one who is in love…but why is sad and drinking….
Kya kahoon main dilruba
Pura yeh jaadu teri aankhon ka
Yeh mera kaatil ho gaya
What to say or what not… her eyes effected him so much… haunted him.. he is the one who made her cry.. he can't see tears n her eyes but he is the reason of her tears…. he gulped the whole drink...



Gulaabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gaya
Maan lost in geet and start sing the song….
Maine sada chaaha yehi
Daaman bacha loon haseenon se main
All girls drooled over him but her never gave a dam to them..
Teri kasam khwaabon mein bhi
Bachta fida naazneenon se main
He never saw anyone in his dream except her… he slept peacefully dreaming about her…..atif came and stood beside him… gave his guitar to him… and maan took it and start playing it with his song……
Tauba magar mil gayi tujhse nazar
Mil gaya dard-e-jigar
But don't know he fell in love with her… but now whey he is feeling pain….
Sun zara o bekhabar
Zara sa haske jo dekha tune
Main tera bismil ho gaya
Please listen me for once… please for once… he has lost when she saw him with her beautiful smile…
Gulaabi aankhen jo teri dekhi
Sharaabi yeh dil ho gaya
Sambhaalo mujhko o mere yaaron
Sambhalna mushkil ho gaya…..
atif sat beside him and asked what happened dude? But maan is no where to answer him back… he knew that he is in love but why he is sad? is anything happened with him? Maan replied him back instead of sharing his thoughts to him ..
Saza ye kaisi mili hamein dil lagane ki,
Ro rahe hai magar tamanna thi muskrane ki,
Apna dard kisey dikhau ye dost,
Dard bhi usne diya jo wajah this muskurane ki..


precap
maan is angry on himself

tell me friends hows it?
i know this if full of song and poem
but what can i do.. i love these so much so i can't resist and
i have added these in this part...
waiting for your response..
love neha..
please like this page...

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IMPORTANT NOTE'.

Ok an announcement,, we have made a page in FB where we are starting new ffs for Geet season 2,, means many writer will write a new story once in a weak so that way reader will get everyday a new story to read and writer will have their own sweet time to write next part,, one writer will post one update in a week,, but have to particular on it,, u can choose any day for it also'. Till now 7 or 8 writers are ready to write we are waiting for more response, so writer if u want to write for Geet season 2 please come on the page' or pm to Tich Mg

U will have ur own story with ur own tittle,, u can make it as fb note or IF thread anything u want'. Only one option'. I don't thinks if difficult to write one update for it in ONE WEEK'. So please come guys we need u'

We will start the story at 5th April,, the auspicious day of Geet anniversary,, if u are interested to write for it please give a prologue or chr sketch on 5th April atleast' SO COME ON,,, GIVE ME UR VIEW'.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nehaaa... 🤗🤗
gusse mein ho kya... oopsss i am so so so sorry... kaan pakding...
coming to the update...
awesome update dear...
loved it... but angry on u...
yeh kya horaha hain maneet ke beech...
why maan is acting like this... even though he wants her to confess but this way...
poor geet so sad, jealous n restless...
aur daadi-dev part was funny... daadi is so sweet...
n meera teasing him n dev blushing... hahaah...
hmmm oops pari on maan's lap... n geet saw that...
hey babaji maan tried to slap geet... oh nooo...
where all this is heading to...
eagerly waiting for next update...
cant see geer like this n office rumors... oh god...
continue soon dear...

love u...
hugs to u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey neha... awesome update dear...
loved it but its so painful n that oh god...
so painful... i loved each n every word in this update...
u wrote very well about the feelings of maan...
geet is also very sad, angry on herself...
maan drove in no direction n reached pub... n started drinking...
atif aslam... wow...
he is thinking of geet n only geet...
both r suffering like hell... me too crying for them...
cant see them in pain... do something neha...
continue soon neha...

love u dear...
hugs to u...

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part a lot..
Song was really an apt one...
Can't c maneet in pain...
Maan again confused with her behavior!!!
Nw its tym for geet to realize her feelings for maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
feel bad for maan...,,n geet too...coz she is unable to name her feelings for him n in turn having more pain...

continue soon...

thxn for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

nehaaa... 🤗🤗
gusse mein ho kya... oopsss i am so so so sorry... kaan pakding...
coming to the update...
awesome update dear...
loved it... but angry on u...
yeh kya horaha hain maneet ke beech...
why maan is acting like this... even though he wants her to confess but this way...
poor geet so sad, jealous n restless...
aur daadi-dev part was funny... daadi is so sweet...
n meera teasing him n dev blushing... hahaah...
hmmm oops pari on maan's lap... n geet saw that...
hey babaji maan tried to slap geet... oh nooo...
where all this is heading to...
eagerly waiting for next update...
cant see geer like this n office rumors... oh god...
continue soon dear...

love u...
hugs to u...


finally you have commented,,,
hmm i was little bit angry but not now...
thank u so much dear...
jo kuch ho raha hai maaneet ke beech achhe ke liye ho raha hai...
yeah dev wala part was funny...
love u too,,,
hugs back to you...

Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm updt
bt
maan ye kya kar rha hai...😕
geet j...oops😆
cont soonnn

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058


finally you have commented,,,
hmm i was little bit angry but not now...
thank u so much dear...
jo kuch ho raha hai maaneet ke beech achhe ke liye ho raha hai...
yeah dev wala part was funny...
love u too,,,
hugs back to you...


ahh thank god u r not angry...
jo kuch bhi ho raha hain ache ke liye but both r in pain... 😭😭
when geet will realise her feelings... 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


ahh thank god u r not angry...
jo kuch bhi ho raha hain ache ke liye but both r in pain... 😭😭
when geet will realise her feelings... 😕



yeah i know both are in pain.. but next part me she will realize her feelings and then hoga dhamaka...i am so excited about next updates...

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