KRIA: My Return 2 My Changed World (last part pg8) - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Hey..I've not read it completely..!!
I'll read it after gathering some courage..!!Don't know from where..!!
Do anyone have some extra courage to lent me??
Waie issmein courage ki baat kaise aayi...Why am I scared to read this?? :SSS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
😭😭😭..perfect beginning...lov Kriyansh/Arsha...❤️
its perfect..m speechless...all gang together...reyam...fire exit..Kria's proposal...everything...
wish dat it wouldnt had to end...n really hope dat u cum back...lov ur writing...its megical...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
😭 i just loved it... really felt like will miss an integral part of my life... they really made me fall in love with them... really hope and pray that they came back :(
🤗 and krithika... beautifully written... loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

I really don't know what to say after reading this part and ur note of quitting IF.😕
U know just like u i m too not happy to imagine that KriYaansh is ending but leaving IF wil nt help.
I really want u to be here with us to keep them alive in our fics and memories. 😍
Coming to the update i would love to say great part 👏
Rey's reaction was natural and obvious, how can he be normal after that disaster which led him here.😔
Sharon was awesome in her act and loved the way she made all of them realize Kria's pov.😊
Finally Kria got her dosti with help of Sharon and gud that if she wants to win her love Rey with her own.😛
The way Swayam was in plan and he informed Rey that Kria is leaving again was super cute.😉
How can Rey let his life leave once again so he ran to meet her and stop her @ their usual place n found her, hugged her tight doesn't want to loose her once more.😍
Wow Kria, how cute u proposed him and he accepted his feelings for her and finally Kria's life cycle completed with her dil,dosti and dance .😃
I really wish this to be happen in show and that wil b the best thing for us. 👍🏼
Love u loads for it n here it is 🤗 for u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

OMG!! DIS WS OUTTA THE WORLD…I had almost overcome my agony n grief but dis lit back evrythng :[
I SO WISH DAT SOMETHNG LIKE DIS HAPPENS
the start whr u mentioned ur mind fiasco abt switching to V or no….GAL TRUST me I feel sooo sad at 7 pm n dis confusion KILLS ME :[ :[ :[ WHY DID DEY HAVE TO DO DIS TO US ??
coming to ur SPLENDID OS,

Parts I loved-
AmAZING IMAGINATION & CONCEPT <3
LOVELY START n END…I've always LOVED ur poems as the beginig note…I've neva cmented on ur othr FF but REALLY LUV UR POEMS….did u ryt'em?

Kriya was entering St.louis after 4 months...and even nw she felt d lull of her sudden departure hanging in the air ….LOVELY WRITTEN

Swayams staying back n talking to her…hes sucha GREAT frnd n u've put it here very well.

sharns conversation ws TERRIFIC <3

I HAD GOOSE BUMPS WHILE DIS-
Sharon: thankyou kriya tumhari waja se maine apne best frend theek se pehchaana..tumhare best frend ko theek se jaana..tumhare jaane k baad sab toot gaye the..main tumhari ehmiyat jaani..i learnt hw important u wer nt just 4 ur team but mine too...tumhare jaane se main tumhari qualities ko parkha...wo adoorapan maine sabke including apni life main dekha..tumhare jaane se aur rey k dard ko dekhke maine ye jaana ki agar pyar ho tho usse confess karna kitna zaroori hai... aur haan kriya aaj bhale hi sab tumse naraaz hai lekin wo isliye kyunki dey really luv u a lot..
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Sharon: dont tk her name..u guys hav no rit...aaj agar hum dono aur hum sab saath hai tho sirf aur sirf kriya ki waja se...aur tum log..neha bhul gai kaise kriya ws d reason y u and vicky came 2gthr..hum sab including vishakha wer against it but kriya ne tumhe support kiya...aur vishakha jo itne proudly louian bol rahe ho ye sab kaise hua..ye divide kaise hata..its only bcoz of kriya...and u call urself frends...ek baar kisine poocha kyun???y did she leav??? aisa kya hua ki uske life ki sabse important cheeze wo chod k chali gai...did anybody ask????? frends support each other lik she used 2 support u nt ignore and brk der hrt...theek hai usne nai bataya par kyun kisi ne koshish ki pata karne ki???

D3 title track <3


He slowly walked in2 d dark area..his hrt beating...it was months since he had cum here...dis place held d secret to der growing relationship...dey were here wenever dey cud steal time from d world and be wid just each other ……LOVELY WRITTEN AGAN!


he ws so glad 2 see her dat sitting der he just hugged her around d waiste and cried..he cried and cried as he clung on2 her..she wrapped her hands around him tightly and kissed him on his head...dey both just stayed der lost in d moment...all dat mattered was dat dey were 2gthr... ……. INCREDIBLEEE <3 <3 <3

Rey: tumhe aaj k baad mere samne kabhi jhukne ki zaroorat nai..wo mera kaam hai ….AWWW!! HOW MUCH I LUVVV HIM

U STOLE MY HEART WID DIS -
Kriya: ajj perfect ending hai..mujhe mera dil,meri dosti aur mera dance theeno mil gaya..

Rey: isse ending nai perfect beginning kehte hai...


AFTA READING DIS HEAVENLY PIECE OF WRITING,I REALLY WISH I CUD CUM N GIV U A HUGGGEEE HUG. U REALLY MADE ME EMOTIONAL WID DIS. BEING STRANGERS I FELT SOOO CONNECTED & ALLURED TO U ! :P ( Not in a bad way though)
N dis ws again as shattering as krias leaving - Hi guys dis is my last post on india forum

PPPLLLZZZ DON'T LEAVE DIS IS WT KEEPS THE KRIYANSH ALIVE FOR ME NAO. N WEN AN AMAZING WRITER QUITS IT REALLY HURTS…IT FEELS LIKE D3 IS REALLY NO MORE FOR ME NAO.
PLZZZ DON'T LEAVE ! I WISH DESE wORDS CUD REALLY MAKE U STAY
N A HUGE THANK YOU FOR DIS AMAZING OS N UR OTHR FF GOREVER MINE…PLZZZ DON'T LEAVE N KEEP DEM COMING
LOVE U !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
a perfect beggining
loved it dude..it was sppechless n emotional
awesomely written
at least here they r uniyed
i just hpe 2 see u back here
miiisss uuu a lottt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
it was amazing and loved it too much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
yaay i was the one who got u to page 14
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Soo many Fans are heart broken n due to this either they have left the forum or they have become silent readers this is really sad that kriYaansh fans are all heart broken really wish shakti comes back n all kriYaansh fans come back
Edited by sima123ful - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLZZZ STAY!!! 😭

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