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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think she hs left or is very busy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chod? Apne forum ko? Kabhi nahi... Busy... Quiet yes... I really do want to post... I feel so cut out... i think I am going to plunge into it right now!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for all your patience dear friends! and Trust!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The whole drive to the airport was silent… Aryan was driving… Dipika seated beside him didn't quite know how to handle this moment…. Relish this moment…. A drive with him… Or…. Be upset….😕

It was a fact, come what may…. He was going away from her for two days… Two whole days!!!!!! Coming to think of it, they had never been away from each other at all after they had accepted each other's love…. They used to meet every day… Because they worked in the same place, maybe a reason… But of them she knew, that even if they did not work in the same place, they would have met every day… Every single day….❤️

This was going to be the very first time…. Away from each other… And this caused a pain in her heart…. Looking out the window she tried to control her emotions, lest Aryan thought she was upset for the wrong reason….

They were waiting for a signal when he placed his hand on hers…. 😳

Past…

Vishal looked at the house wondering… He still had an unease about this case…. There was certainly something he was missing…. Too clearly…. But what? He still had to put his finger on that….
Taking a deep breath he approached the house… The police constable standing outside the house saluted him and let him inside….
As soon as he stepped inside, he heard loud conversation… He stood at the doorway trying to ascertain the direction of the voices…..
Upstairs…
Voice 1: …zidd mat karo… Ab kahan jaake dhoondhogi? Police apna kaam kar rahi hai…

Voice 2: (Seemed to be like Vasundhara's) Please maa…. Mujhe apni beti ke paas jaana hai… Vo dari hogi… Itni mushkil se use maine mere paas rakha hai…. Main use kisi ke liye bhi kho nahi sakti…

Vasundhara's Mother: Vasu…. Hosh me aayo…. Kuch nahi hoga bachchi ko….

Vasundhara: Nahi maa…. Main abhi uske paas…😭

Vasundhara's Mother: Vasu… Vasu…

There was a loud pattering noise and Vasundhara came down the stairs an elderly lady right behind her….

Vasundhara braked halt seeing Vishal… But immediately composing herself…

Vasundhara: Meri bachchi mili!?!😭

Vishal: Ji vo… (Looking at the elderly lady) Abhi tak nahi… Main usi ke baare me aapse….

Vasundhara: (Shrilly😡) Nahi mili… Nahi mili…. Kitne dinon se nahi mili…. Aur ab mujhe bahar bhi jaane nahi diya jaa raha hai…. Mujhe bahar jaane dijiye….

Vishal looked helplessly at the elderly lady, who took hold of Vasundhara by her shoulders and turned her around…

Vasundhara's Mother: (Sternly😳) Vasu… Hosh me aayo… Ab meri baat dhyaan se suno… Pehle aao…

Saying she took her to the sofa and sat her down… Going to the kitchen she brought some water and made her drink it… Then looking at Vishal…

Vasundhara's Mother: Aap?❓

Vishal: Ji main CBI se… Vishal Malhotra…. Niyati ka kidnap case main hi dekh raha hoon….

Vasundhara's Mother: (Nodding her head) Baithiye… App kuch poochne aaye hain?❓

Sitting down he looked at Vasundhara… She was still agitated… If possible she would be running out into the street right this moment… He could understand… A mother's cause and concern can make her do anything for her child… And here the matter was related to a young child… Who would not even know the danger she was in!

Vishal: (Looking at the lady) Aap inki (Indicating Vasundhara) maa hain?

Vasundhara's Mother: Ji… Seema Chauhan… (Looking at Vasundhara) Jab se ise hosh aaya hai, tab se apni bachchi ko milne ki zidd kar rahi hai… Lekin policewaale ise bahar jaane nahi de rahe hain…

Vishal: Ji… Ye to inki suraksha ke liye hai… Kal ke call ke baad, hum nahi chahate, ki inhe bhi kuch ho jaaye… Vo kidnappers jab tak phir se call nahi karte, hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte…

Vasu: (Sternly) Aap kuch nahi kar sakte to nahi kar sakte… Lekin main kar sakti hoon… Main abhi apni bachchi ke paas jaa rahi hoon…

Vishal: (Doubtfully🤔) Matlab aapko pata hai aapki bachchi kahan hai?

Vasu: (Stunned😲) Ji… Na… Nahi… (Tears rolling down her eyes😭) Mujhe kaise pata ho sakta hai? Meri bachchi… Meri wajah se use kya kya sehene pad rahe hain…

Vishal: (Still suspicious, but consoling) Vasundhara ji… Isme aapki koi galti nahi hai… Aap to apni zindagi ko sawarna chahathi thi…

Vasu: (Looking at him) Zindagi sawarna? Haan…. Yahi chahathi thi… Lekin meri wajah se koi aur takleef me pade… Ye main kabhi nahi chahathi thi…Lekin ab…

Vishal: Aap apne aapko doshi mat theherayiye… You thought only well…

Vasu: Mr. Vishal… Main aapse ek vinti karna chahathi hoon…

Vishal: (Wondering at the sudden change of subject) Ji… Of course… Jo kuch mere bas me ho…

Vasu: Ye police protection nikaal dijiye please…. Mujhe bahar jaane dijiye… Mujhe apni beti ke paas jaana hai… Aur jaan pada hai, aapne mere ghar ke phones ko tap kiya hai… Agar aisa hai to koi mujhse kaise baat karega?

Vishal: (Looking at Seema and Vasundhara) Vasundhara ji… Aap samajhne ki koshish kijiye… Ye sab aapki protection ke liye hai… Kidnappers wapas zaroor call karenge… Unhe trace karna hai… Aur pata nahi vo kis tarah ke log hain… Aapko bhi haani pahooncha sakte hain… Aur kal ke baad to aapke pati Rakesh bhi aapse bahut gussa hain….

Vasu: (Standing up shouting😡) Mujhe kuch nahi pata…. Main abbhi bahar jaa rahi hoon… Ho sake to mujhe rokiye… Lekin main yahan baithi baithi…

She faltered and staggered…. Her mom caught her just in time and sat her… She was trembling from head to toe… Sweating heavily…

Seema: (Scolding) Vasu… Tumhare ye tensions sehat ke liye achcha nahi hai… Kitni baar kahoon… Ruko…

Saying she hurried upstairs… Coming down she gave Vasundhara her tablets… She was not ready to have them, but her mother forced them with a glass of water….

Vishal: Vasundhara ji… Is tarah tension hone se aapki BP hi high hogi… Aapki bachchi ko aapki zaroorat hai… Lekin uske liye aapko apni health ka dhyaan rakhna padega…

Vasu: Meri health tabhi maiyne rakhti hai, jab meri Niyati mere paas ho… (Yawning🥱) Tab tak… (Yawning🥱) Maa mu… mujhe neend aa rahi hai…

Seema: Bahut thakhi ho… Let jaao…

Saying she made her lie down on the sofa… Vishal helped with the cushion for her head and soon Vasundhara was fast asleep…

Vishal: (Looking at Vasundhara's mother) Aapne unhe sleeping pills di?

Seema: (Nodding) Doctor ne kaha ki agar vo zyada hyper ho jaaye to use sleeping pills dena hai… (Smoothing her head) Warna use control karna bahut mushkil ho jaata hai…

Vishal: Ji main ab chalta hoon…

Instructing the police officers outside Vasundhara's house to be extra careful, he drove off… To Niyati's school…

Madhu came inside the cabin hurriedly just as Dipika gave print on the screen…

Madhu: Sir! Mam!

Aryan looked at her and glanced at Dipika wondering why she was overly excited…

Madhu: Humare case ke baare me news me dikha rahe hain!

Dipika looked at Aryan expectently… It was about time… Both of them got up and went to the pantry…

They were showing Suman's house and saying about her gone missing…. Speculating her death… Source an anonymous tipper… This of course would be the security person at her home… Even though they had sealed the place, they had not officially placed guard in her house… They had sent two men to keep watch over the house discreetly… But now seemed the men had to come out of their coves and guard the house officially… They did not show about the crime scene, guess that is to catch up yet… But as expected they linked her death to Niyati's kidnap and her been the obvious suspect and now Niyati is with whoever murdered Suman…😲

Shotgun: (Shaking his head) Investigators hum hain ki ye? Their detailed speculation is more than what we know about the case!?!

Aryan: (Dialling in his mobile) Press… Media… Shotgun… They are…

Shotgun: (Finishing it for him) Mule diggers!!!!😃

Smiling at him Aryan nodded and spoke on the phone…

Aryan: Aap dono on the spot hi hain naa? I don't want anyone getting into the premises… Koi ghar ke peeche bhi guard raho… Raat ko do officers aa jayenge tum logon ko replace karne… But check their credentials properly… I don't want the false credential thing happening with us…

Dipika: Kya hua Aryan?❓

Aryan: (Ending the call) Nahi… Suman ke ghar ke guards se baat kar raha tha… Vo last week ek news aaya tha naa, ki kaise criminals ne victim ke ghar guard banke gaye… Evidence destroy karne… Had not the day time guard called the original people after leaving to give them some information, they would have succeeded… They almost did too… Kuch evidence destroy ho hi gaye the… Lekin caught in the act ke kaaran, criminals pakade gaye…. Humare police department ki band baja di thi, media waalon ne…. Suman ke ghar criminal aaye naa aaye, media log to waheen ghoom rahe hain… To get some snap….

Walking out of the pantry

Dipika: Can't blame them… A case like this… Kidnap… Murder… All together linked to the same people… It is a really good source of news… Even if they run it round the clock they would find interesting angles to speculate!

They were just about to go inside their cabin, when the Special Squad door opened…

Boxer entered the office looking at the giant beside him… Clearly he was mumbling something… He ushered the guy inside the interrogation room and walked up to Aryan and Dipika, shaking his head… Clearly displeased…

Aryan raised his eyebrows questioningly and he said disgusted…

Boxer: Ise kahan kahan dhoondhna pada… I had to dive in places I wouldn't dream of going… Even for information on cases… (Clearly indicating the connections he had with the underdogs)🤢

Aryan: (Smiling) Kaam hai… Hota hai… Kahan tha?❓

Boxer: (Disgust etched all over his face) Ek chawl main… You know that kind of place…

Aryan looked confused a little and then the realization dawned on him… But mildly surprised he looked at his watch…

Aryan: Is samay?❓

Boxer: (Pulling out a cover from inside his coat pocket) Paise bahut khel rahe hain… (Showing the thick wad of 1000 rupees in the cover) Bola to nahi ki kahan se mila… But we can hazard a guess!

Dipika: (Peering into the room) Ye tumhara lead hai?❓

Aryan: Haan… Bobby ka bhai… Rakesh ke liye kaam karta hai... Underdog work… Usi ke kehene par Rakesh ne Suman ko kaam par rakha…

Dipika: (Surprised) Oh…

Aryan: Chalo Boxer…. Poochte hain sahebe janaab se, ki how did he help his sister-in-law…

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Ooo u made us wait fr sooo looonggg...

As fr d update it ws as usual superb...

Cant wait to see hw our AD got married..

Case is going well...bt no AD scenes in d past one:(

waiting fr more..plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!! U updated! Thank you so much.
It was great.
No AD scenes in this one...Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first thanks for updating.
it was great update.
so vasu knows something and she isnot telling.
Vishal has that feeling.
Boxer was expression was great.
finally they got some lead for the case.
Please update soon krithika.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you people!!!!!!!! 😛
Lo now I can't keep updating about AD write... Aryan ne Dipika ke haath par haath rakha yahi bahut hai!!! Ab ke liye... Lekin aayega... AD ke beech past me bahut kuch aayega! ;) 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Plz update soon...can't wait 2 read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice that you have updated after a very long time. Its been ages... Uff... And as for the update kya bolun... awesome... Just waiting for the fire to catch up little more. ;)😆

Pls don't make us wait more.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Kritika, where is yr update dear. U promised an update fr yesterday night. Plzz update soon eagerly waiting fr one.

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