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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: ms_1991
great update!!:D

Thank You very very much dii. <3

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
brilliant too good

Thank You so very much. Really means a lot to me dii <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: mansibharti

Hey amal that was a well written chapter but girl you are surely competing for small update position 😛 tamanna is surely evil nd girl chat was so real 😉 miss seeing AR together... sorry couldn't comment on previous one but then it would have been the same- excellent 😃 will b eagerly waiting for the next update, the longer one 😉

Heyya Mansi dii. How are you doing? Thank You very much dii. Hehe. I will try my best to not give such short chapters again because I really don't think I can finish YAS at that snail's pace. She isn't evil, I think she is natural human with hands down jealousy. Only she expresses it in a more hurtful manner. Awwie. I am glad you liked the girl to girl chat. I know you all start missing AR after one chapter but no worries, next chapter does have AR. Its all right dii. I don't mind it at all. Thanks a lot for the confidence dii, I really don't know if I deserve it but thanks all the same :) Yep, I am working on an update bank so that I can give longer and faster updates <3 Thankoo Love ya <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

Hey Amal!! Hope you are doing well...

Update was brilliant as alwaiz and very well written ❤️

But really wanna see more of AR now...missing dem loads.😔

Looking forward to read further... plx do update soon.

tc 😉

*Zahra*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: araja1234
Nice part. Thanks for the pm

Thank You very very much. Your Most Welcome dii <3

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini
amazing

Thank You very much dii. Glad you liked the update :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

i think thats my first long comment in this ff :) right?!. i am newcomer afterall :) .. how could i not come across this FF 🤔😲.. anyway.. i should inform u.. i love to give detail comments.. 🤣.. firstly i loove the title :) .. it suits the whole story perfectly :).. and i really enjoyed reading this update, even when AR where not that involved 😆

the convo in the start of RidhziMuski was damn cute written :) 😳. and who is that Dev Malik?! ..

and totally love it how u described the whole process of how ridhzi is doin her job :).. and how she feels about it.. and and and i loove sid 🤣.. he is quite cute :)

and it that moment when this girl tamanna came i would really give her some percent of brain 😆 seriously.. this type of girl r soo damn irritating :|.. idk brainless people 😆.. but u described the feelings of ridhzi damn good :).. and suuperlike the convo between the girls..

and the last paragraph was really well written, how u described the sunset and everything.. damn beautiful written.. i could imagine this whole scene.. and it feels like i read a "nicholas sparks" book 😆.. idk but the last part is my fav part :)..

and now i cant wait what will ammy will do :) ..

really enjoyed this update :).. keep the good work up :)) 😊

ps. thanks for the pm

-shilpa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Aanya.
Great chapter Amal!

I liked the drama, it was well done, but I'm not into much of Drama these days so I preferred your other chapters :P But that's just me, don't get yourself worked up :)

I'd love to leave a longer comment, but 12th grade kills, sorry :/

xoxo

Hey Aanya dii. Thanks loads :) That's fine. I am not a too much of a drama person either but I wanted to experiment to figure if I can actually write it. I kinda wanted to show what I went through some time back though it wasn't as bad as this but I think strength of a character comes in after incidents like force you into molding. Hehe. No, I won't. I really value your opinion though. No problem. I understand dii. 11th and I am in a hell hole. So no worries. Thankoo. Love ya <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: -vrshn-
It felt Really good to read that Ridhhima was moving to better heights in her Career forgetting her emotional trauma but hey! TAmanna had to come! :)

Heyya Varsha Dii. Heheh. I do like putting a balance to people's emotions because it happens to me. No one is forever happy and forever sad and with me, its a lot more straighter. Tamanna is a need for R's character development because you learn to be strong. R just found a satisfying job and to face things like this is pretty natural. Thankoo for commenting dii. Means a lot to me <3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
its a nice update..
but i think there would b huge outburst...from ridhima in the nxt one...

update soon..

Thank You so very much Nandu diii. I am glad you liked the update. Mmm. I don't know how I want Ridhima to react and I am trying to figure what I would do because she is similar to me in character. sure will update soonish. Thanks loads for commenting dii. Means a lot to me <3