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Niharika

@Altaira

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

lovely update its soo cute and adorable and armaan's concern :)

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Hey thankyou so much for the pm, believe me I saw this thread and I have bookmarked to read it so I promise I will get back to you on that. Just thought to leave by a comment to congratulate you for your successful ff! :) I am commenting from my phone or else I would have read your ff now and commented straight away. Sorry please bear with me. I will come back to comment as soon as I can read it :)

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Hey my dearst, thanks so much for PM & update 🤗

Haye yaar u write so awesomely 👏

AR moments were just the best 😳

Thanks heaps once again & good on for writing such amazing ff 😃

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hiraethhearts.

@hiraethhearts.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Res !
Will edit when I get time.
Promise ! 😳

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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

hey awesome update

plx pm me plxxx

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Amal please don't be mad; i chose to read the summary of the FF so far which you wrote up on the first page of this thread rather than reading from your first thread. i'm really sorry that i couldn't read all of it from the start. i hope thats ok.

And OMG how did i not recognise this? the second i read about Armaan helping Riddhima by marrying her so that he is considered her relative for the hospital to treat her (wow that was a mouthful :P), i instantly recognised this FF. i had read this. well only that part. I remember the plot about Riddhima being anxious to know who her 'husband' was who married her to save her etc. Amal, i think i may have read the beginning of your FF or that hospital part a very long time ago and i just lost track of your FF perhaps. but i definitely remember your concept. thats a good thing: shows that your story plot is unique enough to be remembered by ancient old readers! hehe =)

There are some highlights of your writing that stand out to me. you sometimes phrase things in a manner not many other people do. For example the teasing remarks between Armaan and Riddhima. Its very easy to be prone to cliched ways of writing up scenes like that but you have come up with some new, quirky ways of writing up the light banter between A and R. It just gives a different ring to the narrating style and its nice to read a different writing style =)

anyway, overall your FF has some really great material and i look forward to more! Keep up the great work Amal, the FF is fab. Oh and curiosity asks the reason behind the peculiar FF name? Is the sunset meant to symbolise something? or is that something revealed later on?

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Rosh

@mcdreamy.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Comment edited on page 9 :)

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

edited on p1 :) i know i haven't commented on any of the parts yet but i thought that comment was necessary 😆and i've got holidays now so i'll comment on parts 16,17 and 18 soon!

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abandoned

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

I was just going to revise physics when I saw that you edited. The first person to actually make me cry with her comments. I don't know what you are jaana or what I did that I deserve to get this kind of love (because I will never accept I am a good writer. To me, I am just an average girl with a love for penning emotions on paper) BUT I LOVE YOU. MUAH MUAH. I will reply back soon but even I don't please don't be mad. Its probably because I am out of words, like right now.

I L O V E Y O U

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: SmokingDreams
I was just going to revise physics when I saw that you edited. The first person to actually make me cry with her comments. I don't know what you are jaana or what I did that I deserve to get this kind of love (because I will never accept I am a good writer. To me, I am just an average girl with a love for penning emotions on paper) BUT I LOVE YOU. MUAH MUAH. I will reply back soon but even I don't please don't be mad. Its probably because I am out of words, like right now.

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aww you are so cute :) i nearly cried while commenting :( you are an amazing writer! I LOVE YOU TOO BACCHI <3