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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#881

awesome update beautifully loved it poor la and aryan but the were just stumbling blocks on their way to the really part for arnav and khushi guides loved it glad there are together wait for khushi family reactions loved it well written perfectly done very emotional thanks for the pm

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#882

wowww..
wht an emotional update..
i feel for aryan but love always brings its share of happiness and hurt..
hopefully he can find someone to mend his hurt..
:)
ps. yes do want a proper ending...

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#883

this was beautifully written...

Because the river knows that no matter how much it wants, it can never turn itself into land

what a dialogue...omg...u r fab...

i loved this chapter very much...aryan is too nice and i think he deserves la...

what to say abt arhi? can anyone love eachother than they do?

u r awesome...

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#884

looks like your winding this one up huh? Well its been quite a journey, and an emotional one at that... I'm going to miss this...

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#885

Now darling you have given me a reason to breath 😊

It was a beautiful chapter, closing many loop holes and I loved the way Arnav handles Khushi :)

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#886

khushi pain at losing the man she loves was amazingly described with words! i loved how the story is coming together in the end."I believed you then, you know. I didn't know that I was the river separating you. the pain in aryan's words and the personification of the land and the river as khushi, arnav and aryan respectively was beautiful. its sad they're never gonna meet again! even though aryan's love for khushi is as pure as it can get, because it takes A LOT to leave the person u love so deeply, i hope he finds somebody, who can love him as much as he loved khushi and take away his pain. it doesn't have2 be now, but someday in the future gosh.

awesome update! :) :)

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