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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 👏👏 I just love the way your story is going... Feel really bad for Aryan though... I've come to like him almost as much as i love Arnav!!!😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww
This was beautifully written! I actually had tears in my eyes while reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT IT'S ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ YOUR WRITING
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG.

poor aryan. I mean I'm still team arhi all the way :) but I felt so bad for aryan :L I really hope he finds his happiness one day.


I actually have no words. This chapter was written beautifully. I can't explain in words, how much I enjoyed reading it! Looking forward to arhi's future <3



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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the update. the way its written is brilliant... poor Aryan though.

No promises to love forever, no questions, no explanations. There would be regrets they knew.. they would always wonder what would have been if things were different but they would live too knowing that in some corner of the world there was a heart that beat only for them no matter to whom it belonged.

best lines ever. 👏

thanks for the update and pm. plz update heart remembers as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful chapter Lyraa! Sorry haven't been able to comment on the story. Love how you bring out each and every characters's emotions to surface! Love your word play. kudos :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh what can i say after reading this...beautiful...its the first word that came to my mind after reading this...evry line ...every word id poetic...i have shortage of words reading this...i can just say one thing...i loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
THat was absolutely beautiful Lyraa!! No words... I loved the music too.. sound track from the LOTR right? How very fitting... :)!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Lyraa...
The conversation between Aaryan and Arnav - only one word - beautiful
... full circle indeed...
the imagery that you create with your words and the emotions that come through when i read just make my heart twist this way and that... reading it reminded me again why I love to read your work...
I had missed your updates ... Welcome back...
Looking forward to the next update now...
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
khushi's emotions were so god danm heart wrenching. i felt so sorry for her! 😭 scared that aranv might lose his life and when he regains consiousness she knows she has to let go off her because she's bound to aryan by duty :'(. 'its really pissing off when u cn't let a person know wat you're feeling. grrr. loved the symbolic use of the glass door and how it signified their life and situation at that moment.

and omg the character of aryan is just gorgeous. he's sooo f**king selfless(infact all 3 of them, he's gonna let her go them. they will let of each for him).. i really hope he finds somebody who loves him too :) *fingers crossed*

i've never heard the song but it was soo apt! gosh i feel bad for aryan :'( awesome awesome awesome awesome update!! (i'm not too good with words at the moment :P )

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