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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#711

Wow! Its Aryan's turn to sacrifice now. I felt a pang in the heart when that nurse said only close family members allowed to Khushi. And they finally verbalise everything they were aware of. :)

You have this wonderful way with your words that make us empathise with all the characters in a way beyond the perfunctory reading. Kudos for that! I loved the update! :)

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#712

Yeeey:D
*edit*
m back again madam ji :D
not saying u betryed me lol hahaaa but check dashboard :p

actually i hv been wondering what happen to Lyraa99 that m not cryin these days or d reason i know story but ur d same and i just felt for three of them.

Khushi waitin for arnav and their convo. Is soo touchy.
Aryan and arnav was waitin for it. Hearing and reading is diff expernce.

And yes msg me if ur free tonite aftr 11 coz m free :D

dhinka chika :p

Edited by aparna5293 - 13 years ago

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#713

I had always thought of Aryan as a selfish one, the one who held onto Khushi even though he knew that she loved another. But today, I understand. He never believed that she didn't love him, he was living a lie. I was all teary eyed reading the update. Khushi's part, where you use the glass as a metaphor, brilliant! And the way Aryan describes about the circle, woah woman, where do you get the brains from? So I cried for Aryan, for Khushi and for Arnav. You have a way of creating magic with words Lyraa, you really do :) Looking forward to reading more from you soon :)

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#714

Reserved!

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It all seemed like another life now. And tomorrow he knew he would be setting his fallen angel free forever. Tomorrow she would be gone out of his life as if she never came into it but she would remain in his heart forever ... his own angel with wings broken and bruised ... the fallen angel who could never fall for him...

Do you realize how painful these words are, Lyraa? Oh my god! I always had something against Aryan - I know I was being wrong in understanding him in the wrong way - but I didn't know why he still wanted Khushi after all this time. It was love - but somehow we are blinded to see love for Arnav and Khushi for anyone else apart from themselves! Our faults!

But when I think over it, he wasn't being selfish or he wasn't even thinking about himself. He always thought of Khushi! And he proved it.

I'm crying!

Loved the update! Umm - it wasn't the last one, was it? Please say no! I want many more!!!!

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago