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i_luv_arshi

@i_luv_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

truly loved it..this love.. its so complicated

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

It's just so breathtaking to read such subtle writing...the hint of evil to come with Shyam's sections...the other sections with such depth of emotions written so beautifully...get the feeling I loved it?!! 😉 Superb continuation.

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

congrats on your new thread!!!!

It was sooo beautiful

My heart went out for Arnav - when he sunk into his bed crying!

That bloody Shyam! Please please dont kill Aryan!

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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

beautifully written..i was in tears by the end

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Akanksha

@akshi_2

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Oh god. This is heartbreakingly beautiful! :')

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Congrats on the second thread! Loved the update!

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Targaryen

@Targaryen

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

congo for the new thread 😊 loved the update

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Congratulations on the second thread.

An Emotional update...

feeling bad for all three of them, their hearts breaking...😭

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

congrats for your second thread.👍🏼 you are an excellent writer lyra👏i love your "the reason i breathe" very much.plz update soon that story😊

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Such a beautiful heart-wrenching update!!

This is the 2nd FF reading which I've literally cried..the former being muffin's PB and this update of TRIB had me in tears!!

One can literally feel the pain, the anguish of Arnav!! There is that unspoken understanding that he loves her yet at the same time there's the unspoken truth that she can never be his..

I'm not saying that Khushi's suffering is any less but I guess when one is guilty, is regretting each and every action and word of the past and the earth-shattering realization that one's lost his love because of one's own folly, I think that is the utter pain!!

The way you've described Arnav's emotions is just fantastic...it just touches the heart and soul!!!

Lovedd reading each and every line of the update :D

Cont ASAP :D