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parit.mansi

@parit.mansi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

beautiful part

plzzz add me in ur pm list plzzz

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Arrrghhh! The sadness, the confusion, the dilemma... poor Kushi. I wouldn't want to be in her shoes right now...

Very good update, pulled at my emotional heartstrings... almost close to tears...

Can't wait for the next update...

Here's something special for you:

(Kushi's POV)

I'm at a crossroad with tears in my eyes,

Thinking back sadly on days gone by,

I wish there was a way, so you both won't cry,

I wish one of your hearts I could break and say goodbye...

How do I choose one, among the best of two?

To one I owe my life, and should pay my due,

While the other I love, with my heart so true...

My heart aches, I don't know what to do...

Should I be ungrateful to one because of YOU?

Or should I kill the love in my heart and be with YOU?

Can I turn my back and just walk away?

Or should this fallen angel, just fly away?

Rgds,

Chimpsy

p.s. CONGRATULATIONS!

Edited by Chimpsy - 13 years ago

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Congrats on getting FF of the week..and on ur new thread...👏...i love this story...its heartbreaking..i had tears in my eyes, when i read the last chapter...when khushi breaks down, after getting arnav's gift...beautiful...!.do continue soon...😊

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anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

congrats on the second thread!!!

great update!!
update sooon!!cant wait!!

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HADmishti

@HADmishti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

please update sooon😭

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Satina

@Satina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

u need to update! This is one of my favorite FFs!!

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h4112528

@chowna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

U have beautiful was with words please update soon i love this story its very close to heart and emotions portrayed are exceptional

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zyra94

@zyra94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Absolutelyy amazingg... i'm so moved by the story and the way you've written it.. its breathtaking!!! you have such raw talent x

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Sumana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

finally I read your entire work ...

OMG I'm at a loss for words,... my dear Lyraa,... you are surely a gifted writer ... your language, vocabulary and flow of thought is awesome ...👏👏

I love you for giving us something so beautiful ...so heart wrenching ... soul stirring ...👏👏

Pl don't forget to PM me when you updte next ...😊