OS: Unveiled - Page 8

this is mesmeizing

Amazing...the story remains hugely apt to the name "unveiled" ...

I loved reading is OS, it was simpely awesome, great thinking. do continue writing more :)

Loved it! It was awesome that only Arnav's love could survive the test of the fire, showing that his is the only pure, actual love. Shyam just lusted after her, and NK just had a silly crush on her, but Arnav? Arnav really loves her. It reminded me of the quote that I'm sure everyone knows: "Jo kuch insaan real mein chahta hai, actual mein, usse wahi milta hai." For Arnav, this is Khushi. For Shyam and NK, she wasn't what they wanted real mein, actual mein.

my God, this was brilliant...

loved it, especially the Arnav bit...

Wow. This was sooo sooo GOOD. It tells you soo much about the connection between the 3 guys and Khushi...and truly and rightly said, Arnav and Khushi are meant to be...the last scene was beautiful. Screw Shyam and NK.

This was beautiful, poetic and written in such a realistic yet a very emotional way that catches not only the eye of the reader, but also makes the reader FEEL what you have written. The way you portrayed the three different men and their point of views, was truly mindblowing!

Kudos to you, there are many writers here at the forum, but you are one of the very few whom I thought writes not only beautifully but from a realistic point of view meaning you consider each of the character from the show as they are.

I truly enjoyed reading it, please do write other pieces, Id love to read them 😊

I am really glad that i found this OS from someone's post. 😉
Beautiful piece of writing . Loved the way you shown 3 different prospective.
Shyam was expected to be this. what can he do anyway ...
NK reacted the way i want. Finally he realizes that he can only be a partner in happiness and not in difficult times.
But but Arnav's piece was fantastic. He wanted to marry her and take her away..

Lovely.. 👏

That was beautiful os...glad both nk & Shyam turned away

-Sona

WOW! Splendid. It is so intense that I couldn't take my eyes of the screen till the end. Simply Bravo!!