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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Dark Desire'.a sinful love''.

Chapter 1

Maan Singh Khurana stood in his office building,by the glass window and smiled contentedly.a man of immense wealth and extreme power.the crownless king of the world he is,looked through the window over the city,Delhi.the height of his office building gave him immense satisfaction and once again reaffirmed him that he was born to win,whether it is power,respect or love.yes,love of his life,and the ultimate passion of his life,Geet'..

His thoughts were disturbed by a knock in the cabin door.He looked back to see his home attendant with his lunch box.'may I come in sir?'

He asked,to which he simply nodded his head once.the attendant came and placed the lunch box on his table with a note.he mentioned him to leave and he made an exit.he sat in his cabin and opened the note.

Dear Maan,

I am missing you.come back soon.

Have your lunch on time.

P.S. Don't stare so at the attendant everyday so intently,he gets scared!

and "I love you"

Yours Geet.

He kissed the note ever so gently and put it inhis drawer with the other notes and called "Home"'.

'Hello'came the sweetest voice.Geet waited for the caller to speak,a long wait of full 15 seconds and yet nothing was spoken.'Hello' she cooed again.No answer.Now she was hell annoyed!"Maan'why you call me up,if you don't have to say anything?.."He smiled knowingly that how angry she gets when he teases her and maintained his calm.."Maan if in the next 10 seconds you don't speak up then'."He was still quiet'and smiled at his sherni again.."Fine don't speak..Bye" and with that she kept the receiver down...He kissed the cell screen which had her picture in her bridal outfit and said to himself..."Now my princess is angry,well its going to be a heard time for me today.." but he knew well that she can't be mad at him for long..and he will surely manoufy her at any cost!Her husband knew her too well and he came up with brilliant ideas of manoufying her in their second night after marriage...

She was standing in their room by the window in her lilac coloured night dress feeling the soft wind which was swaying her soft tendrils when she felt a pair of strong arms around her waist.She smiled recognizing the presence of her husband but decided to reamain quiet...she was angry with him!Hegrinned more seeing her attempts of staying angry and nuzzled her neck.She still didn't say anything.He placed small kisses on her shoulder and neck moving her hair to the right shoulder and finally kissed her cheek and asked..."Geet , love aren't you going to talk to me?"She didn't speak.He continued his sweet assault on her knowing how weak she gets in his proximity.He made his way to her overcoat's knot and pulled it open.He removed it and kept on loving her in his own way as she stood in her sleeveness night gown.He very slowly turned her and as he went to claim her lips,he found her crying...
"Hey mishty!what happened love?" he asked..hell worried.Its one things which he can't stand...her tears...it enrages him beyond limits.He held her shoulders firmly and asked her once again..."Geet look into my eyes love...what happened?" and that was all...she clung to him and stratred sobbing like a child speaking between sobs and hiccups...
"You always tease me...every time...today also you went to office when its just the day after our marriage and I was feeling so lonely and when you called me up,you kept on teasing me by not speaking...and now also you came so very late..its almost 10...Its just that you know I love you so much and can't live without you ... you keep on doing these things.." she finally finished her complains! He just snuggled her closer and kissed her forehead and smiled at her childish gestures...She distanced her head to know the reason of the kiss when he again kissed her nose wiping the big fat tear droplets and said..."I am sorry Mishty...please don't cry.." and smiled cutely...Now how can she resist that and not melt.She still wasn't convinced fully...and knotted her brows.. he scooped her in his arms and carried her to their bed and made her lie down.."Well I think I have better plans to make it up to you.." she blushed and turned facing away from him..He sat beside her and turned her towards him and bend to kiss her lips when she parted her lips in anticipation...he closed his eyes to cherish the moment when she placed her hand on his lips and kissed it...she giggled running away...""First dinner then dessert" and with that she escaped the room...He just smiled at her naughtiness and the smirked knowingly as he went after her...
...He loves her...and she can't escape from him...
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Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Happy to be first to post for ur update 😊

very beautiful update... ohoo...i too was wondering why geet was crying 😉 nice reason and nice note 😆 add me in your PM list, and continue soon 😛
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

beautifull update dear...

so they both r in love wid each other

let see how d story will take a turn

how his love, his possession becomes obssession

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...

Maaneet are in so much love then why this FF name is---My Dark Desire...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
beautiful dear
thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome starting...
really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting fr nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
omg!dey r madly in luv with each other...
but wat hapened dat it became a sinful love?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked it

both are in immense love with each other

continue soon

thnx for pm

do pm me again

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr prt ..vry cute ...updt sooon n thanx fo pm

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