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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapatro

😆 Meenu...u want me to write their torture scenes also...😉

hehhe u r r8😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for such a wonderful ff Sneha. Sorry I have not been able to read it before and make comments. Your FF is so romantic and sweet. Keep writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Thank you for such a wonderful ff Sneha. Sorry I have not been able to read it before and make comments. Your FF is so romantic and sweet. Keep writing.

Hey Gurminder thanku dear for taking some time out and reading it...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part20:
Day27:
Preeto leaves to boutique saying to beeji that she will have lunch today at Meeta di house..

At NA house:
Simran says it to NA about Preeto and Rajbeer..
Simran: Mom ek happy news hai..Preeto and Rajbeer ka shaadi ke liye beeji aur Papaji raji hogaye..
NA pretends as if she is really happy hearing it..
NA: what really beta iam very happy for them..with fake smile on her face..
Simran: smiles and says ya mom.. she then says bye and leaves to boutique..
NA: dekhti hun rajbeer aur preeto ki shaadi kaise hogi..

At Boutique:
Preeto calls Rajbeer..
Rajbeer: lifts the call..ya preeto bolo
Preeto: kaha ho..
Rajbeer: office mein hun aur kaha..
Preeto: acha permission ka kya hua..
Rajbeer: Dhruv tickets ke liye gaya hua hai..uske ane ke baad baat karenge officer se..
Preeto: acha jo bhi ho...leave toh grant karna hi padega..
Rajbeer: kya tum yeh puchne ke liye call kiya..
Preeto: haan..kyun tum kuch aur expect kar rahe the..
Rajbeer: no nothing
Preeto: ok bye rakhti hun..
she then again calls him..
Rajbeer: seeing its preeto..phir se call..he lifts it..
Preeto: acha suno rajbeer kya hai ki mein..pauses for a second and says i love u..
Rajbeer: pretends hello kya mujhe sunayi nahi diya phir se bolo preeto..
Preeto: rajbeer aap na jyada natak mat karo..
Rajbeer: smiles and says love u too..
acha Preeto dhruv agaya call u later...
Preeto: ok bye..

Simran comes to boutique both of them start choosing some designs from their collections and also make a list of what all things they required related to fashion show..
Preeto: delhi itna bada sehar hai pata nahi kaunsa jagah kaha pe hoga simran..pehle waha jaate hi model agency jana padega..
Simran: she sees the address in the card..
and Suddenly says Preeto hum toh bhul hi gaye Prithvi ko batane..delhi mein hi toh rehta hai..
Preeto: oh haan mein kaise bhul gayi..address toh Prithvi pata karsakta hai..
Simran: yaa let me call him now..
Prithvi lifts the call seeing caller id though he was in traffic..
Simran: hello Prithvi..
Prithvi: Simran..Hey..tumne mujhe call kiya..subah subah meri yaad kaise agayi tumhe..kuch kehna tha..
Simran: tumhare sawaal khatam hogaye toh mein kuch bolun..
Prithvi: oh yaa tell me..
Simran: kaha ho tum..
Prithvi: delhi ka traffic mein phasa hua hun..
Simran: oh ok then will call u later..
Prithvi: not a problem simran tell me..
Simran: guess what..we are coming to delhi..
Prithvi: what really?
Simran: ya we got an offer to participate in fashion week..not only me and preeto even bhai..rajbeer ishu pankaj meeta sab arahe delhi..
Prithvi: thats grtt yaar lekin mujhe rajbeer ya kisi ne bataya bhi nahi..waise tum log kab arahe ho..
Simran: after 4 days..bhai ne shayad waha koi hotel bhi book kiye honge i have no idea though..
Prithvi: no way..u all are going to stay in my home..i will talk to dhruv..
Preeto:ek minute simran phone do mein baat karti hun..Preeto takes the phone from simran..
Prithvi: im so happy...
Preeto: ha pata hai tum kitna khush ho Prithvi..
Prithvi: hey Preeto..tum..sachi mein bahut khush hun..i have to thank babaji for this..
Preeto: babaji ko baad mein thanks bol dena..hume kuch help chahiye tha..
Prithvi: ya bolo..
Preeto: tells him to find out exactly about the model agency by giving him the address..Prithvi waha ane ke baad hume koi takleef na ho address dhundne mein isliye tumhe pata karne ke liye keh rahe hain..
Prithvi: dont worry preeto will find out..
Preeto: thanks thik se pata karna..toh mein rakhu phone..
Prithvi: ya k bye..

at Base Camp:
Dhruv and Rajbeer meet the officer to ask for leave..
Dhruv asks for 10 days leave..and Rajbeer for 15days..
Officer: says ok to dhruv..
and then asks Rajbeer about why 15days leave..u see i cant grant more than 10 days leave..so think over it Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: Sir on important work i need 5 more days leave..
Officer: Dhruv u can go..
Dhruv: thanku Sir
Officer: Rajbeer rules are rules i dont think so can extend ur leave..but there is one way if u are ready to give presentation in 2days then will talk about ur leave to higher officials..
Rajbeer: Yes Sir i will prepare for it..
Officer: ok then all the best..
Rajbeer thanks and comes out where dhruv was waiting..
Dhruv: Rajbeer kya hua..?
Rajbeer: leave toh grant hojayega par mujhe presentation dena padega bas doh din time hai..
Dhruv: ok dont worry..presentation acha jayega..
Rajbeer: i hope so..
meanwhile he gets a call from Prithvi..
Rajbeer: haa prithvi bol
Prithvi: tumlog delhi arahe ho mujhe bataya bhi nahi..
Rajbeer: Prithvi tickets book hote hi batane wale the yaar
Prithvi: ok tickets mila ki nahi..
Rajbeer: yaa jus now Dhruv got the tickets..
Prithvi: acha dhruv ko phone doh ek baar
Dhruv: hii prithvi
Prithvi: Simran ne bataya tum hotel book kar rahe ho delhi pe..sun Dhruv mere hote huye tum sab hotel pe no way yaar..chup chap sab mere ghar aao..we all shall have fun man..
Dhruv: lekin Prithvi tumhare dad mom honge ghar pe...acha nahi hoga..
Prithvi: Mom amritsar mein hi hain..aur dad doh din mein business trip pe US ja rahe hain..abh koi bahana mat dhundna..
Dhruv: acha aisa hai toh thik hai prithvi hum sab tere ghar pe rukenge..
Prithvi: thats cool..
they end the call..
Rajbeer: kya bol raha hai..
Dhruv: bas unke ghar mein rukne ke liye puch raha tha..maine ha bol diya..
Rajbeer: oh thats grtt..ok chal lets get back to work..

At 12:30 Preeto goes to Meeta di' s house..rings the bell...
Meeta di opens the door...both hug eachother...
Meeta: Preeto aaj tu yaha kaise aur woh bhi boutique ki kaam chodke..
Preeto: woh Meeta di bas aise hi acha hua aap ghar pe hi ho..mujhe aapki thodi help chahiye tha..
Meeta: mujhse..ha bol..
Preeto: kya hai ki mujhe kaise bhi karke khana banana sikhna hai..
Meeta: laughs..abhi sikhna chahti hai toh sahi waqt pe ayi hai mein abhi banane ja rahi thi..
Preeto: haan toh chalo Meeta di shuru karte hai..

at Panthkot:
Sunny and Meera marriage date is fixed which happens to be after 20days..
Sunny immediately calls Pankaj and informs him...
Pankaj feels very happy for sunny..Sunny says that he will be coming amritsar tommorow along with Meera as he has to do lots of shopping for marriage..
Pankaj then returns to home to inform Meeta about Sunny' s marriage date..
At Pankaj Home:
Pankaj: excitedly calling out Meeta..
Preeto: pankaj itna chila kyun raha hai..
Meeta: tu ruk mein dekhti hun..
he sees Preeto at kitchen..
Pankaj: arey Preeto tu bhi yaha hai
Meeta: Umbrella itna jaldi agaya
Pankaj:Khush khabri hai..
hearing this preeto also comes from Kitchen to the hall..he says about sunny' s marriage date..Meeta and Preeto feel happy for Sunny..
Pankaj: Sunny aur Meera kal arahe hai amritsar..
Meeta: yeh toh bahut achi baat hai..
Pankaj..Meeta and Preeto have lunch..
Meeta: Umbrella khana kaise laga..
Pankaj: humesha jaisa bahut acha bani hai
Meeta: maine aur Preeto ne milke banayi hai..
Pankaj: kya Preeto ne..?
Preeto: itna shock mat kha pankaj..maine bas thodi help ki hai khana toh meeta di ne hi banaya..
after lunch Pankajleaves to shop..
Meeta and Preeto chitchat for sometime about delhi trip about cooking and everything..
Preeto: thanks Meeta di aapke wajeh se khana kaise banate hain yeh toh maine sikh liya hai..abh dekhte hain mein kabhi khana banati hun toh kaise pakega..
Meeta: smiles Pagli chinta mat kar apne aap sab kuch karlegi tu ache se..dekhna rajbeer impress hojayega..
Preeto: Meeta di dekhna agar maine khana banaya toh sabse pehle mere haath ka khana chahe woh jitna bhi bura bana ho rajbeer ko hi khana padega
Meeta: laughs..arey ha preeto tickets ka kya hua..?
Preeto: ruk abhi call karti hun..
Preeto calls to Rajbeer
Rajbeer: ha bolo Preeto
Preeto: Rajbeer tickets ka kya hua bataya bhi nahi
Rajbeer: dhruv ne bataya nahi..
Preeto: nahi toh
Rajbeer: shayad bhul gaya hoga..tickets book hogaye..
Preeto to Meeta: Meeta di tickets book ho gaye
Meeta di: acha thik hai..
Preeto: acha rajbeer leave ka kya hua..
Rajbeer: leave samjho mil hi gaya..
Preeto: samjho ka kya matlab..
Rajbeer: Preeto bas presentation dene ko kaha gaya mujhe..woh acha kiya toh 15 days ka leave pakka milega otherwise jus 10 days..
Preeto: yeh kya baat huyi..iska matlab kya hume phir kabhi chandigarh jana padega..
Rajbeer: dont worry preeto..hum delhi bhi jayenge aur dad se baat karne chandigarh bhi..
Preeto: acha thik hai..aur ha rajbeer sunny ji ka shaadi date pakki huyi hai..
Rajbeer: oh thats grtt..
Preeto: acha mein rakhti hun bye..
Rajbeer: ok bye..
Preeto then gets back to boutique in the evening after 4..

Day 28:
At Pankaj Home:
Sunny along with Meera comes from pathankot...Pankaj and Meeta congratulate them..
Sunny says that he needs to do the shopping work today itself..

At Dhillion' s Home
Preeto' s room:
Bani and Sonu at Preeto' s room..
Bani: Preeto di mere liye zarroor bahut sare shopping karna..
Sonu: ha di mere liye bhi
Preeto: smiles and asks acha bolo kya chahiye dono ko...
Bani: Preeto di kuch stylish clothes kharidna mere liye..boring sa kapde pehnke bore hogayi hun..
Preeto: acha thik hai..aur Sonu tere liye bhi leke aunga..
Sonu: smiles feeling happy and says di aap toh jaante ho mere pasand..
Preeto: acha tum log jaldi tayar hoke jao..mujhe bhi abhi ready hoke boutique jana hai..
even after Preeto trying for sometime her luna doesnt start..
Preeto: yeh luna ko abhi kharab hona tha..
she goes in autorickshaw to boutique..

At NA Home
Dhruv and Ishu room:
Ishu: Dhruv mein toh aaj packing karna shuru kar rahi hun..
Dhruv: who was getting ready says Ishu mera bhi kardena plz...
Ishu: smiles..acha thik hai..
Dhruv: smiles and kisses on her forhead and leaves..
Ishu: Dhruv khana toh khake jao..
Dhruv: Ishu office canteen mein karleta hun..jaldi jana hai aaj..saying bye to Ishu he leaves..

At Pankaj Home:
Sunny and Meera have breakfast..during that Meeta says about preeto and rajbeer and also about delhi trip..Sunny feels happy knowing about it..
Bebe has said about the list of things that are needed to buy..so before leaving to shopping Sunny gives the list paper to Meera and also gives the money asking her to keep which they can use it for shopping..

At Market:
Sunny and Meera in one shop...Meera is taking time to select..
Sunny says kitna time laga rahe ho Meera agar help chahiye toh bolo Preeto ko bulati hun..
Meera: says ok and asks him to call Preeto
Sunny calls preeto..
Preeto: lifts the call..sunny ji boliye kya haal chal hai..
Sunny: Preeto mein aur meera market pe hain plz agar tum free ho toh kya thoda help karsakte ho shopping mein..
Preeto: ha meera aur aap wahi rukiya mein abhi araha hun..
Preeto also joins Meera and sunny..
Sunny: Preeto ji aapko double congratulations bolna padega..
Meeta di ne bataya bahut khush huyi sunke..
Preeto: thanku sunny ji..
Meanwhile Rajbeer calls Preeto asking her what shez doing..
Preeto says about shopping and that she is in market...
Rajbeer: acha kaha ho exactly batao mein abhi atha hun..
Preeto: Market mein pani puri ka dukaan pata hai na humne ek baar khaya tha..uske opposite mein hain..
Rajbeer: ok bye iam coming..
Preeto helps Meera in selection of dresses..
Preeto to Shopkeeper: bhaya discount toh hoga na
Shopkeeper: nahi madam ji
Sunny: bhayya shaadi ka shopping hai discount dedo..
Meera: 4 dresses aapki yaha kharid rahe hain...
Preeto:haan itna kuch le rahi hain discount toh apko dena padega..
Sunny goes out excusing as he gets a call..
Shopkeeper: madam ji aapko kaise samjhaye discount sale nahi hai humari dukaan mein..
Preeto: bhaya mein kuch nahi jaanti aakhri baar puch rahi hun saaf saaf bolo discount de rahe ho yaha nahi
Meantime Rajbeer comes there to the shop
Rajbeer: Preeto tum apna bargaining shuru kardi..
Preeto: ha toh karni padti hai..
Shopkeeper: bas madam ji 10% discount milega...
Rajbeer: hai meera kaise ho..
Meera: acha hun ji
Rajbeer: Sunny kaha hai..
Meera: bahar hain phone pe baat karahe hain..
Rajbeer: acha ok..
Preeto: acha meera tum pani puri khaoge..
Meera: nahi Preeto tum log jao..Meeta di ne breakfast mein itna kuch bana diya tha ki maine jyada kha liye abhi bilkul bhuk nahi..
Preeto: acha tum ek kaam karo yaha pe sarees dekho..hum ajayenge..yehi pe ruko meera
Meera: haan haan..
Preeto and Rajbeer come to Pani puri stall..
Rajbeer: Preeto abh yeh pani puri khana zaroori hai..
Preeto: haan mein kha rahi hun na..tum bhi mere saath kha rahe ho..bhayya hum dono ke liye pani puri..tikha haan...
Rajbeer: plz mere liye meetha..
they have pani puri..and sunny was very busy with Phone which was from his office...
at the shop Meera didnt like sarees much she just gives amount for the dresses she chose and comes out her eyes fall on the saree in one shop..
Meera: kitna sundar saree hain jake dekhti hun..but that shopkeeper says more cost so..she leaves from there also and continues with the shopping in the market..
Rajbeer gets call from Jogi..
Jogi: Rajbeer ek khush khabri...mein baap bane wala hun..
Rajbeer: sach..congrats yaar..acha mein preeto ke saath hun hum shaam ko athe hain milne..
Jogi: Preeto ji bhi waha hai toh unko bhi yeh khush khabri batadena
Rajbeer: ha jogi..ok then bye..
Meanwhile Sunny after call goes to shop and sees Meera is not there..he comes out and by seeing Preeto Rajbeer he goes to them...
Sunny: Hai Rajbeer
Rajbeer: Hai Sunny...
Sunny: Meera kaha hai..
Preeto: having pani puri wahi dukaan mein hogi sunny ji...
Sunny: maine dekha waha nahi hai..he gets worried...
Preeto: aise kaise maine toh kaha usse wahi rukne ke liye..aap paas wale shops mein dekha..
Sunny: nahi Preeto..abhi dekhta hun..
Preeto: acha aap dekhiye hum bhi dekthe hain yehi gali mein hogi..
Sunny goes searching for her...
Rajbeer tells about jogi calling...
Preeto: feels happy jassi ji pregnant hain..kitna khush khabri hain..hum chalte hain jassi ji ke ghar..
Sunny comes again and says yaha kahi nahi...
Rajbeer: thik se dekha na Sunny
Sunny: ha rajbeer maine un shop walon ko bhi pucha woh kehrahe unko pata nahi..
Preeto: kaha chali gayi hogi Meera...kamse kam hume toh batake jana chahiye tha..
Rajbeer: sunny tum uss gali mein dekho...hum istaraf dekhte hain..
they search for her in the market Preeto rajbeer in one direction and sunny other direction..search other lanes also...
Sunny remembers to call Meera and he dials to her number but it was switch off..
Sunny: number bhi nahi lag raha hai..bekaar mein isse amritsar le aya..
he starts searching again asking in the shops...finally he finds Meera who was coming out from one shop with 5 bags in her hands..
she sees him from far and comes to him smiling..
Meera: arey sunny ji dekho maine kitna shopping ki hai..
Sunny: tu pagal hain batake nahi jasakti hain har jagah dhund rahe hain tujhe..
Meera: being super cool she replies mein toh bas shopping karke wahi ane wali thi sunny yaad hai mujhe woh pehla shop..
Sunny: bewajah Pareshaan kardi hum sabko ruk preeto ko phone lagata hun woh dono bhi tujhe dhund rahe hain..he calls preeto and tells her...
Rajbeer and Preeto come to them..
Preeto: Meera tujhe toh maine kaha wahi shop mein rehne ke liye..
Meera: arey preeto woh shop ache sarees nahi hai isliye dusre shops dekhte dekhte yaha tak agayi..khud shopping karli..bachpan se aadat hai meri akele bhi shopping karleti hun..
Rajbeer: Meera bolke jana chahiye tha..
Preeto: acha chodo yeh sab..shopping kya ki hai tu..
Meera: 4 sarees kharidi hai..
Preeto: arey wah chalo boutique chalte hian waha dikhao tumhari sarees shopping..
Preeto to Rajbeer: Rajbeer tum car mein aya ho na..saath mein chalte hain sab..
Rajbeer: Preeto car toh servicing pe di hai isliye mein bike leke aya..
Sunny: koi baat nahi rajbeer...mein aur meera auto rickshaw mein ajate hain..tum aur preeto saath mein ajao..
Rajbeer: ok boutique pe milte hain..
Rajbeer starts the bike..she sits..
Rajbeer: aur thoda paas baith sakte ho..
Preeto: smiles...abh chalo..
they sit close in the bike..
Rajbeer while driving: Preeto aaj shaam ko 7 baje aunga chalte hain jogi ke ghar..
Preeto: ha toh boutique pe wait karti hun..
Preeto and rajbeer reach to boutique in bike..
Sunny and Meera also reach..
Rajbeer: Hi simi..
Simran: hey rajbeer..
Sunny: hello simran kaise ho..
Simran: arey sunny aap yaha kab aye pathankot se..
Sunny: aaj hi aye hai simran shaadi pakki huyi hai uske liye shopping karne..
Simran: congratulations Sunny and Meera..
both thank simi with a smile..
Simran: Meera tumko shaadi ka lehenga humari boutique pe hi lena padega..
Sunny: pakka yaha hi le rahe hain simran isliye toh boutique aye hain.. by looking at preeto and simran aur haan discount toh dena padega..
Preeto: zarroor sunny ji..acha meera dikhao kya kya shopping ki hai..
Meera shows sarees that she bought..all find her selection good..
Preeto: acha ruko abhi tumhe sabse best lehengas dikhati hun..
Simran and Rajbeer talk in the meantime he says about jassi ji to her also..
Simran: wow thats grt..acha tum milne ja rahe ho..toh mere taraf se congrats boldena
Rajbeer: ya sure simi..
Sunny to Meera: Meera abhi tak bas tumhara shopping hua...bebe ne jo list di uska shopping karna bakki hai..he asks about how much she has spend..
Meera: mere paas bas 500rs bacha hai..
Sunny: shocked..kya tumne bas tumhare yeh shopping ke liye pura kharcha kardi..
Meera: ha toh mein kya karti..abh sarees bhi toh kharidna zaroori hai na..
Preeto brings some 4 lehengas to show them..and asks what happened..
Sunny: kya kahun preeto ji isne saare paisa kharcha kardi khud ki shopping ke liye..aap lehenga dikhaye isse select toh karlenge lekin kal lene athe hain..
Rajbeer: who was sitting there laughs and says Sunny ladkiyon ke saath shopping pe jathe waqt credit card bhi saath lekar ana chahiye..
Sunny: sahi kaha Rajbeer..saari ladkiyan ek jaise hote hain..abh mujhe money transfer karne ke liye phone karna padega..
Preeto: oohh shaadi ka shopping hai Rajbeer..yaha pe koi kanjoosi nahi dikhate..
Simran: smiles and says right preeto..and sunny dont worry u can pay money later..
lehenga jo pasand hai woh le lena Meera..
Meera: thanku simran..
she takes time for selecting saying pata nahi chal raha hai kaunsa lun..sab ache hain..
Sunny: kitna time lagarahi hai Meera..he shows one and asks her to take that..
Preeto: yeh lo sunny ji khud select karliya tumhare liye..
Meera: she shows the other one among the 4 lehengas saying mujhpe shayad yeh jyada acha lagega..
Sunny: Meera toh phir jo tujhe jyada pasand hai wahi lele..
Meera finally selects the one she liked the most..
Rajbeer says bye to all and gets back to office..
Sunny and Meera get back to Meeta di house..
at evening 7 he comes to boutique waits outside and asks her to come out...
Preeto: acha simran mein abhi jassi ji ke ghar ja rahi hun..
Simran: ok preeto...mein bhi thodi der boutique close karke ghar jati hun..
Preeto: ok bye simran..
she sits in his bike..
Rajbeer: Preeto thik se baithana nahi toh mujhe driving pe problem hoga..traffic bhi jyada hoga..
Preeto: ha thik hai thik hai chalo abhi..
he suddenly puts brake while driving..because of which she comes close to him by putting her hand on his shoulder..
he smiles..
Preeto: kaise chala rahe ho..aur waise tum smile kyun kar rahe ho..
Rajbeer: maine pehle hi kaha tha pakad ke baithne ke liye tumne suna nahi..
Preeto: mujhe pata hai jan buchake break laga rahe ho..
Rajbeer: main kyun aisa karunga..traffic dekha..turning his head says now hold me tight phir se mat kehna maine jan buchke brake lagaya..
Preeto: aap na sidha dekhke chalao bike..

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

they reach Jogi' s house...
Jogi opens the door...
Preeto: mubarak ho jogi ji..Jassi ji kaha hai
Jogi: uper kamre mein chaliye..
all go to Jassi' s room...Preeto hugs Jassi congratulating her..
Rajbeer also says congrats..
Preeto:aunty ji uncle ji aye nahi..
Jassi: Preeto sab gurudwar gaye hain..abhi tak yahi the..thoda jaldi athe toh sabse milte...
Jogi to Rajbeer: Presentation kaha tak aya..
Rajbeer: aaj raat baithke karna padega thoda aur kaam baki hai..
Jogi: thik hai chinta mat kar..kal acha jayega...
bell rings..
Jogi: kaun hoga..
Rajbeer: shayad dhruv aya hoga..
Jogi goes to see its dhruv and ishu who came together..
Ishu: Jassi ji mubarak ho..
Preeto tu bhi yaha hai..
Preeto: ha ishu di boutique se sidha yaha agayi..
Jassi: waise Ishu di aap kab khush khabar sunayenge..
Ishu: smiles..
Jogi: putting hands on dhruv..Jassi agla number inka hi hoga dekhle..
they all together chitchat and then leave at 8:30..
as Dhruv and ishu are going now to dhillon' s home...Preeto goes along with them..Rajbeer goes back to his room..

At Dhillion' s home:
Dhruv Ishu Preeto reach home...
Beeji: tum teeno saath mein..
Preeto: jassi ji ke ghar se arahe hai beeji..
Preeto says about Jassi..
Beeji and Papaji feel happy...
Dhruv and Ishu spent some time with them have dinner and go back to home..

At Rajbeer room:
Rajbeer opens his laptop and starts his work on presentation..dhruv calls and asks whether he need any help..Rajbeer says jus some changes are left which hez doing it
Rajbeer:agar kuch help chahiye toh call karunga Dhruv..
Dhruv: ok then bye Rajbeer kal milte hain..
Rajbeer gets busy with presentation work..
in sometime Preeto calls him
Rajbeer: ha preeto bolo
Preeto: kya kar rahe ho..
Rajbeer: thoda busy hun agar kuch zaroori baat hai toh bolo..
Preeto: abhi tak aap presentation hi kar rahe ho..rajbeer aapne time dekha..
Rajbeer: ya pata hai Preeto..par yeh khatam karna hai abhi..hum kal baat karte hain..
Preeto: acha ok bye..jaldi khatam karke so jao...
Rajbeer: ya goodnight..

PS: Do read and Comment..and press like button if u liked it...😃 and i jus wrote it and didnt even read once what i have written hehe so plz forgive if any mistakes...😆
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u for 2 parts. I loved Rajpreet bike scene.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nxt all pairs are going to Delhi omg 4 pairs very interesting waiting for that part😊

coming to this part all scenes are very good Prithvi is very happy his simmi also coming .mainly Rajpreet bike scene was lovely this remembering me Rajpreet on bike like joggi nd jessi ;later cv's forget his bike and give him only car
hahah Meera ka pass only 500 bechare sunny no prob Meera what ever you want buy all things ur sunny deserves it😆
totally i love this part and waiting eagerly for nxt😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
the bike scene was awesome ... long update yaar hehe ... but thanks for 2 parts ... :)


so agla part dehli huh ... great :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice story..loved reading it. Next part seems interesting too
Edited by rajpreeto - 13 years ago
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Gosh, so many good news and nice things going on in the story..

Missed the trio (jogi,Dhruv,RB) so much and glad to see them back in the last scene ..
Great to see Bargaining queen back in action and was actually visualising RB's expressions 😆 .He used to have cute expressions in the show whenever he was with Preeto and she is bargaining 😳
Preeto learning to cook haye hope we will see Preeto cooking for RB in one of your part
Love the Luna Man, hamesha sahi time pe start nahi hothi hai😉 ..RajPreet on Bike 😍
Meera is driving Sunny ji Nuts 🤣 ..
Awesome Sneha, will wait for next part 👍🏼..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Nxt all pairs are going to Delhi omg 4 pairs veryinterestingwaiting for that part😊coming to this part all scenes are very good Prithvi is very happy his simmi also coming .mainly Rajpreet bike scene was lovely this remembering me Rajpreet on bike like joggi nd jessi ;later cv's forget his bike and give him only car
hahah Meera ka pass only 500 bechare sunny no prob Meera what ever you want buy all things ur sunny deserves it😆totally i love this part and waiting eagerly for nxt😃


thanku Meenu:)
i actually cant write kind of evil serious scenes but so wanted sunny in trouble and so added fun scene which is evil in a way haha and delhi trip scenes i will try my best by writing some cute and fun scenes :)

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