New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#1 Link Thrd 2 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
SHAHID KAPOOR =)
yar is NT ko door rakhna Maan sai plz in dono ki shadi mat karwa daina
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesom update.
Maan geet ke dil ka haal kb smjhonge.
Dear shahid kapoor. Hamari geet ke sath acha lagega
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
loved it
def shahid kapoor
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome start Piya.

Some how guessed it was a dream even before I read the precap.

Thanx for pm Dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 2

Awesome update dear.

I want Shahid Kapoor.

Thanx for pm dear.

Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan ka heera uske paas hai or vo kach ke pichey dood raha hai. love the udpate. wants shahid kapoor if u r planning of some entry... make shahid to fall for geet😉 and than that idiot maan will realise his mistake...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
feel bad for her
would like 2 c shahid
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey piya nice part in this i can feel h much pain geet in her heart when maan not even recognising this angel next maan gave rose gift on b'day nice seem like both r best buddies i hope geet dreams come to reality as early as possible
Geet b'day nice
NT ka precap worst may be she scolding maan ore some other i wont interst
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Posted: 13 years ago



hipiya.loved reading ur ff.awesome start.felt sad that geet was reading but her dream will come true.
loved the frndship bond of maan n geet n he giving yellow roses to geet(but i know it will turn to red roses one day).cute fight b/w them.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Majority of u voted for Shahid Kapoor he would be the one who would be entering this FF 😊 All the Hrithik Roshan fans don't b disappointed I would include Hrithik as well but he would enter as Hrithik Roshan a top bollywood star but Shahid would have a major role in this FF he would be the one who would love Geet unconditionally
I dedicate this part to my dear friend Jasmine (jasminerahul) she wanted a quick update of this FF 😊 I hope each one of u would enjoy this update any kind of suggestions then do let me know
love-Piya
PART 3

Geet baked the cake and Maan did his job well of finishing the entire cake

Maan's friendship was Geet's biggest strength Maan's mere presence made every ordinary moment a special one for her

Her love was so selfless that Maan was always present in her prayers till date she had not asked anything for herself her one and only wish was to see her Maan happy

Maan was eating the last few pieces of the cake and Geet was capturing every act of his in her eyes permanently she had a fear hidden in her heart that maybe Maan will go away from her one day hence she wanted to live the present to the fullest

Maan: Oye aisa kya dekh rahi hai yaar cake chahiye kya? [Hello why r u looking at me like this do you want the cake?]

Geet: Kyun tujhe dekhne mein koi tax laga hai kya? [Why do I need to pay a tax to look at u?]

Maan: Abhi toh nahi par jab main superstar bun jaayunga na toh sab mere aage peeche ghumenge especially ladkiyaan [Not currently but the day I get established as a superstar everyone would be roaming in and around me especially girls]

Geet: Achha aur tum kiske peeche ghumoge? [O really and who would u be interested in?]

Maan gets up from the chair and starts moving towards Geet there was a strange emotion in his eyes to be more precise there was a seductive look in his eyes

Geet unknowingly starts taking steps in the backward direction her heart was beating rapidly

Maan was giving her killer looks which was making her weak in her knees

Geet's back touched the wall and Maan trapped her at that place by placing his hands on both the sides

He moved his lips closer to hers Geet closed her eyes

Maan (whispered huskily her name) : Geet

Geet clutched her dupatta tightly

Maan placed one hand of his on her waist and pulled her closer

All of a sudden Geet felt a strange sensation their proximity was doing wonders on her senses

Maan moved the locks of her hair that were hiding her angelic face with the help of his finger

He once again took her name seductively

Maan: O Geet

Geet drank her saliva as he pulled her more closer

Maan started tracing the path from her shoulder to her left collarbone to the hollow of her neck and finally to her right shoulder with his hand

Maan was touching her sensually and with every touch of his Geet was getting goose bumps

He places her hair on one side of her neck and started moving his fingers around the nape of her neck

He moved his lips towards her ear

Maan: Jaana chahti ho Geet wo kaun hai jiski gulami main zindagi bhar karunga? [I would be the slave of which girl throughout my life would u like to know this?]

Geet couldn't believe her ears was he trying to tell her that she is the one

Geet did not reply

Maan nuzzled his nose on her ear and whispered huskily

Maan: Bolo na Geet jawab doh jaana chahogi? [Answer me Geet would u like to know?]

He squeezed her waist slightly while asking this

Geet: Haan [Yes]

Maan: Maan ki zindagi mein ek hi ladki hai jo har ek pal mein uske saath rehti hai kya tum ye nahi jaanti? [There is only one girl in Maan's life who always stays with him in every moment of his life don't u know this?]

Geet's heart was dancing in joy yes she was the only girl who was with him in every phase of his life yes he was indeed talking about her

This was the biggest birthday gift for her finally her Maan had understood her worth

Geet: Jaanti hoon par ek baar tumhare hotho se sunna chahti hoon [I know but I would like to hear it from your mouth]

Maan: Ek hi toh hai aur wo tum' [There is only one girl and it is u..]

Geet was still trying to register his words when Maan continued

Maan: Aur wo tum nahi balki Naintara hai [It's not u but it's Naintara]

All her dreams shattered in one second she felt as if someone had stabbed her heart with a knife

She opened her eyes immediately and she could see Maan laughing when her heart was crying severely

Maan: Geet khud ko dekh aisa lag raha hai jaise k tu ye soch rahi thi k main tera naam lene wala hoon I should say tu romantic scene kafi achha kar legi [Just look at yourself Geet it seemed that u were expecting that I would be taking your name I should admit that u would be really good with romantic scenes]

Geet: Tum ye baat chair par baitkar bhi bol sakthe the na? [U could have said these words while being seated on the chair as well]

Maan: Are darasal aaj ek audition k liye jaana hai aur koi romantic scene honewala hai audition mein toh bus ussi ki practice kar raha tha [ Actually there is an audition today and we r supposed to enact a romantic scene so just thought of practicing it with u]

Geet: Bus itna hi karna tha [U just wanted to do this]

Maan: Nahi yar tujhe ye bhi toh batana tha k meri zindagi mein bus ek hi ladki k liye jagah hai aur wo hai Naintara [No dear I also wanted to tell u that in my life there is place for only one girl and it is Naintara]

Geet: (thinking) Iska matlab tumhare zindagi mein mere liye bhi koi jagah nahi chalo achha hai aaj tumne mujhe iss baat ka bhi ehsaas dila diya [That means there is no place for me in your life it's good u made me realize about his truth ]

Maan: Kya soch rahi ho Sleeping beauty [Where r u lost Sleeping beauty?]

Geet: Kuch bhi nahi tumhe audition k liye jaana haina tumhe der ho rahi hogi [Nothing u might be getting late for your auditions]

Maan: Are haan toh chal main chalta hoon bye [Oh yes so I am leaving now bye]

Maan opens the door and goes away

Geet: Sach keh rahe ho Maan main Sleeping beauty hi hoon kyunki main tumhe sirf sapno mein paa sakthi hoon par chahkar bhi tumhare sapno mein shamil nahi ho sakthi kyunki main tumhari zindagi mein meri koi zarurat nahi hai [U r right Maan I am indeed a Sleeping beauty as I can claim u only in my dreams but I do not have the permission to be a part of your dreams as I hold no importance in your life and u don't need me]

PRECAP 1: Naintara: "Najaane humare kitne deewane hai par itna faltu taufa aaj tak hume kisi ne nahi diya" [ I have so many fans but none of them have given me such a useless gift]

PRECAP 2: Prem: "Geet jitna khoobsurat aapka chehra hai usse kayi guna khoobsurat aapka dil hai" [Geet ur heart is more beautiful than ur face]

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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